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Manslaughter - Twisted Metal Black 2
03/21/10 at 06:06:59
 
Manslaughter


Driver: Black

Black is a being of unknown origin.  No one know exactly who he is or where he came from. His poor skill at speaking gives people the thought that he is a genetic being created by science.  Thought to have been killed by a bomb explosion after the Midtown contest, he is alive, and he will not stop until his mission is complete:  Kill Calypso. Therefore, he has entered the new contest uninvited.

Vehicle:  Manslaughter

The dump truck is the vehicle Black used in the last contest.  It is unknown how he attained the vehicle, but some sources say this was given to him to aid his assasination job.  The rocks loaded in the back give others the thought that it was stolen during a construction project.  Regardless, the rocks are used as Manslaughter's Special Weapon, in which they can be launched straight at opponents or dropped behind Manslaughter and be used as a trap.

PROLOGUE:

(Camera shows the run-down asylum from above a cliff on a stormy night. The alarms are still wailing as Manslaughter is seen facing the building. We see Black sitting the driver's seat, his body is burnt up a little, but his mask is still undamaged and intact.)

Black:  Blaaaaack liiiiiivvvvvvessss....

(Soon, camera switches to Black's view, where several vehicles are seen escaping the asylum. Black notices this and turns the keys to Manlsaughter.  The engine is heard roaring very loudly as Black speaks.)

Black:  But thiiiis tiiiiime, he wiiilllll noooot escappppe...

(Manslaughter is seen backing up into a wider area, then turning around and speeding off.)

Black:  Theeee miiiisiiiion willlllll beeee doooooone.

(Cut to black. End movie.)


MIDDLE

(Minion explodes. Pieces of the tank fly in the air, a big piece flies up and hits Manslaughter, knocking Black out. Sceen goes black as he speaks.)

Black:   Puunyyyy taank nooo maaaaatch for Blaaaaack...

(Camera shows Manslaughter surrounded in flames, then cuts to Black who is slumped behind the wheel.)

Black:  I reeememmbeer eeeveerrrything....

(Camera flashes back to Black entering Calypso's lair.  He sees his usual throne of broken car parts empty.)

Black:  Calyyypso! But whheeree did you gooooooo?

(Suddenly, a bomb is seen in the trone with a sticky note saying "Screw You! Love, Calypso".  Camera cuts to outside theater as it explodes in flames.)

Black: Calypssso thought I waaaas deeeeaaaadddd...

(Camera shows the remains of the destroyed theater, when suddenly, Black powers his way out of the rubble. He is unharmed.)

Black:  Heeee waaaas wrooonnnnng...

(Camera goes back to present day, where Black wakes up, and fades in to show Manslaughter surrounded in flames.)

Black:  Aaanddd soooooonnnn, he wiiilllll diiiieeee for leaaaaving meeeee to diiiieeeee...

(Manslaughter is seen speeding out of the Arena. Camera cuts to black as movie ends.)

EPILOGUE:

(Dark Tooth explodes, the ice cream cone warhead detonates, Manslaughter escaping the area as a mushroom cloud envelops the area.)

Black: Blaaaacck wiiiinnnnnnnssss....

(Camera pans to inside Calypso's lair where he is resting in his trone of car parts, when Manslaughter is seen coming through the walls of the theater.)

Calypso: No, that's not possible.

(Soon, Black jumps out of the dump truck and jumps on Calypso.)

Black: Caalypsoooo!

(Black approaches Calypso as he begs for mercy.)

Claypso: No, please, I'll do anything, please..

Black: Theeen diiiiieeee...

(Black is seen punching at the camera, the screen going black as it hits. It then cuts to Black wiping the blood off his knuckles. Calypso's body is seen, as the punch has hit Calypso so hard, his head was riped off by the force.)

Black;  Miiissssioooonn commmmplllleeeettteee..

(suddenly, a portal opens. A shadowy figure comes out and sees Calypso dead.)

Figure: Good work, my servant.  My evil counterpart is dead, and now, his powers are mine.

(Camera goes black as an evil laugh is heard.  Camera cuts to logo, then credits roll as "Back In Black" by AC/DC plays and scenes from other movies are playing.)

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Yes, the figure is Calypso from Twisted Metal: Head-On. As I followed Manslaughter's back story from Twisted Metal Lost (mainly the rumors saying he came from another world, and the kill was ordered by the Calypso of the other world.
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Re: Manslaughter - Twisted Metal Black 2
Reply #1 - 03/21/10 at 10:37:44
 
Yea... you kinda lost me at the end there. A portal? I didn't even know about TM: Lost. What's up with that? I'll need to look into it. I still think your story was amazing. The guys at ESP should hire you to make up character stories for em' while The Dizaster Child makes the characters. You guys could really do some hustling with skills like that. You made Black seem so bad ass. But just one thing. What's with the universal rule with the fact that all big juggernauty guys have to be deaf/dumb/mute/whatever?
You should have a story for Black's origins. I bet TMA would love that.
Keep up the great work! I still can't get over how you can write these so naturally. You're a fucking pro. I love you.
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Re: Manslaughter - Twisted Metal Black 2
Reply #2 - 03/21/10 at 12:38:57
 
DoktorStrychnine wrote on 03/21/10 at 10:37:44:
Yea... you kinda lost me at the end there. A portal? I didn't even know about TM: Lost. What's up with that? I'll need to look into it. I still think your story was amazing. The guys at ESP should hire you to make up character stories for em' while The Dizaster Child makes the characters. You guys could really do some hustling with skills like that. You made Black seem so bad ass. But just one thing. What's with the universal rule with the fact that all big juggernauty guys have to be deaf/dumb/mute/whatever?
You should have a story for Black's origins. I bet TMA would love that.
Keep up the great work! I still can't get over how you can write these so naturally. You're a fucking pro. I love you.


I played Twisted Metal: Black and Black was like that. His pre-level dialog shows he knows thre things: how to kill, how to crap, and I don't remember the third.

As for this, I think Black was orginally concieved as some sort of genetic experiment made by some law enforcement to kill Calypso.  The Twisted Metal:  Lost story is considered non-canon since it was based on a game that was never completed. (Namely Twisted Metal:  Harbor City.)

As for allowing ESP to use my stories, I don't think they can due to legal reasons.
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Reply #3 - 03/21/10 at 15:22:26
 
Pretty damn original. Interesting ending.

I liked it. Good stuff.
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Reply #4 - 03/21/10 at 17:45:12
 
DoktorStrychnine wrote on 03/21/10 at 10:37:44:
[size=12]I didn't even know about TM: Lost. What's up with that? I'll need to look into it.


Lost is what the unfinished portions of TM: Harbor City have come to be known as. if you pick up Head-On ETE for PS2, its got all the info. its the only portion of the game I've played since my OCD prevents me from playing the actual Head-On game until I 100% Black..
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Reply #5 - 03/21/10 at 18:35:18
 
That was great man, top notch stuff! TM: Lost is basicly a few new cars, a few new tracks, and a cool art book. Its well worth it, especially because it comes with a revamped Head-On.
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Re: Manslaughter - Twisted Metal Black 2
Reply #6 - 03/22/10 at 01:38:05
 
The_Dead wrote on 03/21/10 at 18:35:18:
That was great man, top notch stuff! TM: Lost is basicly a few new cars, a few new tracks, and a cool art book. Its well worth it, especially because it comes with a revamped Head-On.


I only saw 12-Pak as the new car, since Gold Tooth, IMHO, was a recolored, overpowered Sweet Tooth.
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