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The Twisted Metal Chronicles: Behind the Paint
01/03/10 at 08:56:34
 
The room is bare. White walls, 2 chairs, and a single table.  A security camera sits up in the corner of the room,
recording everything that is to go down inside this room today. One of the chairs is occupied... by a madman.
Two men enter the room, one in a police uniform, the other in khaki pants and a nice button-down shirt.

COP: if you need anything, doctor, just hit the button on the wall by the door. I'll be right outside

The doctor sits down in the available chair. He places his briefcase on the table and opens it, pulling out some of its contents.

DR. LONG: I am Doctor Malcolm Long. I am a psyche evaluator here at the Blackfield Asylum. First off, I want you to know you have nothing to worry about.
I am a very easy-going guy, here to help.

The room sits silent for a moment.

LONG: hmm, ok. well looking over your file, I see that you have refused to give the officials a real name. any reason for that?

Again, silence.

LONG: ok son, you're gonna have to talk to me at least a little bit if I'm to help you. I mean, you've been here almost 2 years, escaped 3 times, and are looking at the electric chair in a matter of days. yet you sit there with grease paint and a smile on your face. I wan....

NEEDLES: (cutting off Long): then you know there is no hope for me. there's no point in talking to you

LONG: now dont go saying that. I believe almost everyone has a fighting chance, and if I can prove that you can be fixed, that might mean the difference between the chair and a cell

NEEDLES: and what if I dont WANT to be fixed?

LONG: then you choose death, and thats not my job. I'm here to help you and prove you can be a stable person, underserving of the chair or the needle

NEEDLES: whatever you say, doc

LONG: so lets start with the name. we all know Needles wasnt your birth-given name, so why dont you enlighten me here a little?

NEEDLES: I already gave these stupid fucks my real name.. its Needles. nothing more, nothing less

LONG: persistent, I see. ok, we'll just come back to this later. now, why dont you wipe that paint off of your face and let me see the real Needles Kane?

NEEDLES: fat chance there, doc. this paint dont come off

LONG: (tossing Needles a hand towel) here, humor me

NEEDLES: (tossing the towel back) ya know, you are REALLY pushing your luck and my patience here. if you want it off, then you can come over here and take it off yourself

LONG: ok ok, I dont want a fight

NEEDLES: I'm not talking about a fight. I want you to see that this paint does NOT come off for yourself. its been on for so long, the grease has seeped into my 3 upper epidermal layers, kinda like a tattoo. this paint is forever, and I wouldnt have it any other way

LONG: so you're telling me that the clown persona known as Needles is permanent?

Needles flashes Dr. Long a huge grin, then leans back in his chair, putting his size 19 clown shoes up on the table. He doesnt say a single word.

LONG: well there has to be some reason why you are the way you are. I dont that believe that all the crazies and murderers are just born wicked, and I dont think you are either..
tell me about your family

NEEDLES: why dont you read my profile a little more thoroughly?

LONG: (after reading a few key paragraphs) it says here you killed your father a year ago in that massacre in Los Angeles... and while you didnt know it was him at the time, you showed no remorse when the police informed you of what you did. how can you do that?

NEEDLES: how can he bring a whore into his home and father children with her? how can he let her bleed him dry, leaving his own kids to starve? those are far better questions that need answering, but since he's dead, I'll never know them

LONG: so the real issue is with your mother then?

NEEDLES: and Captain Obvious has arrived, ladies and gentlemen (mocking applause).. she was a fucking whore who didnt deserve anything more than the gutter
my father found her in (pounding his fist on the table)

LONG: interesting... I had a patient about 20 years ago by the name of Walter Kovacs. you might remember his name from the news when you were younger.. anyway, he had the same mother issue as you. almost identical...

NEEDLES: you're really gonna compare me to that sniveling pussy?

LONG: I meant your disturbed pasts..

NEEDLES: I think its time for you to leave, doc.. I'm starting to get agitated

LONG: but we're making good headway here, Needles. I'm pleased with your progress, and its only the first day..

NEEDLES: and if you dont get the fuck out of here now, it'll be your last when the arm of this chair finds its way lodged into your skull..

Dr. Long quickly cleans up his paperwork and buzzes the officer to let him out.

LONG: I will be back, Needles. I'm convinced you can be saved..

ok, thats all I got for now. hope you likes
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Re: The Twisted Metal Chronicles: Behind the Paint
Reply #1 - 01/03/10 at 15:46:19
 
Interesting. Short but interesting.
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Reply #2 - 01/03/10 at 16:05:07
 
His name is Dr. Long, ha.
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Reply #3 - 01/04/10 at 06:49:46
 
well he was black, LOL.. thought you and Kyle might appreciate the Watchmen reference. well if Kyle ever comes back that is

haha Mag, that wasnt the end.. just a part. I was tired as fuck last night typing it out
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Reply #4 - 01/11/10 at 22:06:47
 
Interesting, I liked it. Really shows how aggressive Needles can get, hehe.
I'm excited for part 2.
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Reply #5 - 01/11/10 at 23:57:32
 
I enjoyed it. Nice read.
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Reply #6 - 01/12/10 at 13:41:24
 
I really liked it ... can't wait for part 2 !!
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Reply #7 - 01/14/10 at 20:26:48
 
sorry its takin so long to get pt 2 out, I been busy lately (yes, playing MW2 counts as busy LOL). I have tomorrow off, so i'll get something posted either then or maybe even tonight
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Reply #8 - 01/16/10 at 06:04:23
 
A couple days had passed. Long was keeping a distant but watchful eye on Needles. He observed his nature, saw how he interacted with the other patients, and his overall being. That evening, Needles was in the weight room, lifting the benchpress. Three guys walked up to him as he was putting the benchpress back onto its rack.

INMATE 1: so we hear you're that killer clown from LA.. the one with the ice cream truck..

Needles sat there, looking at the guy but didnt say a word. He stood up, flexing his pecs and biceps in alpha-male fashion.

INMATE 2: I believe you were asked a question, Bozo..

NEEDLES: actually, he made a statement.. not asked a question, you stupid fuck. what other classes did you fail in school?

Inmate 2, obviously angry, goes to advance on Needles, but Inmate 3, still silent, grabs his friend and holds him back.

INMATE 1: ok asshole, AREN'T you that clown from LA?

NEEDLES: I am, but what does that matter?

INMATE 2: I thought so, but you dont look so tough..

Inmate 2 advances toward Needles again, but isnt restrained this time.

INMATE 2: you actually look like a little bitch with make-up and big shoes. I bet I could ki......

Number 2 is interrupted as Needles leans in with a thunderous headbutt, shattering his nose.
Without skipping a beat, Needles then turns and lays 2 quick jabs and an uppercut on Number 1,
who is sent sailing over the workout bench next to the one Needles was using.

NEEDLES: (turning to Inmate 3) the quiet type, huh? I guess I should be scared of you, right?

INMATE 3: not of me, of this..

He slips a finely-crafted shank out from under his sleeve.

NEEDLES: I guess Blackfield's maximum security isnt so maximum afterall..

INMATE 3: not when you have guards on the payroll who look away when ordered to

No sooner did he finish that sentence, he starts taking swipes at Needles, barely missing each time. Seeing an opportunity, Needles pulls back and stomps Number 3's kneecap, snapping it backward. He collapses to the floor, writhing in pain. Needles picks up a 100-pound weight and slams it down on top of Number 3's other knee. He screams out in the most awful, toe-curling screech you could imagine. Needles then sits down, watching Number 3 squirm and cry from the agony. Laying there in too much pain to comprehend what was going on, Needles picks the 100-pound weight back up from the floor and slams it down on Number 3's head, crushing it like a rotten tomato. He then turns to Number 2 who is still stumbling around with blood all over his face from a cracked septum and shattered bridge. Needles picks up 2 of the 50-pound dumbells, one in each hand and proceeds toward Number 2's direction. As he wobbled around blindly, Needles came up from behind and clapped the dumbells together - with Number 2's head in the middle. Brain and skull debris went everywhere as his body slowly slumped to the floor. Number 1 was just starting to come to when Needles picked him up by the throat and slammed him on top of a workbench, where he proceeded to lay punch after punch into him. After a few short seconds, Number 1's body went limp and lifeless. Needles grabbed his towel, wiped the blood and sweat from his face and walked out of the weight room and to his cell where he went to sleep....
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Reply #9 - 01/16/10 at 13:47:57
 
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Reply #10 - 01/16/10 at 22:14:22
 
Nice. You are making me like Needles Kane. I am not big on him for the most part.
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Reply #11 - 01/17/10 at 06:25:57
 
Sweet Tooth bench pressing and working out, nice haha.
I liked it, shows that you should never fuck with or underestimate a guy wearing a clown mask in a asylum.
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Reply #12 - 01/17/10 at 15:44:53
 
Sling wrote on 01/17/10 at 06:25:57:
Sweet Tooth bench pressing and working out, nice haha.
I liked it, shows that you should never fuck with or underestimate a guy wearing a clown mask in a asylum.


ya know, you'd think that would be common sense LOL!!

there has always been something off to me about Needles in the way he's been portrayed in the past. in the first couple games, he was a scrawny-ass lil thing. and in the newer games, he's some kinda fat fuck. the only pic I've ever seen on him that makes sense to me is the one from the Black manual, where he's sitting on the front bumper of Sweet Tooth holding a funnel of cotton candy, but in the water puddle's reflection, he's holding a knife. I swear, I am gonna have that blown up into a full size poster whenever I get another house and make a game room. but yea, he was all buffed up in that pic, and thats always made the most sense to me, so thats how he's portrayed in my stories

pt 3 will come soon.. maybe tonight, depending on how day turns out. last night sucked badly or else I mighta got something done
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Reply #13 - 02/06/10 at 11:01:57
 
ok guys, I finally got myself a laptop, so I'll post a lil something

Needles is awaken by the sound of frightened and bewildered employees and patients alike, pacing and walking the corridors of the asylum. Everyone seems to be in panic.

NEEDLES: hey Charles, whats going on out there?

CHARLES: (watching out of the cell door) from what I heard, they found 3 dead bodies in the weight room. they're saying its a bloody mess in there

NEEDLES: oh, THAT? I got woken up for that?

CHARLES: I dont suppose you know anything about it, huh? you were gone earlier, after all.. and you dont seem to shocked either

NEEDLES: (rolling over in bed) nope, not at all

CHARLES: oh hey, before I forget, you gotta letter. I found it on the floor when I got back from counciling

Needles sits back up in bed, and takes the note from Charles. He opens it and reads the only sentence on the paper: "IT'S TIME, NEEDLES. PACK YOUR THINGS." There is no name on the envelope or letter.

CHARLES: is everything cool?

NEEDLES: more so than you could imagine, buddy

I'll be able to finish this soon since I got my own laptop now.. hope you guys like this rather small part anyway
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Reply #14 - 02/07/10 at 04:24:14
 
Short but it has me waiting for the next part Cheesy
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