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Dark Tooth - Twisted Metal Black 2
03/01/11 at 23:32:59
 
Dark Tooth

Driver:  Son Of Kane

Son of Kane is exacally true to his alias.  He is the youngest child of the late Charlie Kane.  His father was gunned down by a passenger he picked up, but Son was able to revive him as a remote-contrlled machine.  Unfortunatly, he lost the last contest, resulting in the destruction of both his dad's body and the taxi cab he used to compete. He had since gone into hiding, evading capture, and the manhunt ended when the police concluded that he was killed in the contest.

Years later, he has emerged to enter the new contest uninvited.  He has built a new vehicle in order to compete.  He plans to kill his older brother, Sweet Tooth, then comit suicide. He believes in doing so, he will finally end the evil blodline that Sweet Tooth begot.

Vehicle:  Dark Tooth

Dark Tooth is similar to Sweet Tooth in many ways. Both are ice cream trucks, and both drivers are from the same family.  But Dark Tooth is different.  It is black with purple polka dots, is bigger than almost all of the vehicles (including Sweet Tooth), and has different special Weapons. Beware, as the ice cream cone on the rooftop of Dark Tooth is actually a remote-detonated warhead that does massive damage.

PROLOGUE:

Kane:  I lost.  I lost him!

(Camera pans to a sewer entrance in the ruins of Midtown. it pans inside and through the damp tunnels as Kane speaks.)

Kane:  My dad's body was the last family I had, and now he's gone, forever!

(Camera pans to ahuge area where Kane, now older and wearing a white shirt, blue jeans, and some worn shoes, is seen loking over Dark Tooth.)

Kane:  Death was always in my brother's blood.  By participating in that contest, it was proven to be in my own.

(Camera shows flashes of Sweet Tooth in the contest, then back at Kane.0

Kane: But I now know what I must do.

(Camera pans outside the sewers as Dark Tooth speeds through the narrow opening, smashing it apart as survivors start runing away in fear.  It speeds out of the destroyed city as Kane speaks.)

Kane:  When this contest is over, the bloodline will end.

MIDDLE:

(Minion explodes.  As peices of the tank fly into the air, one big piece flies up and hits Dark Tooth, knocking Kane out.)

Kane:  I was knocked out for a while.

(Camera shows Dark Tooth surrounded in flames, then shows Kane slumped over the controls in the vehcicle.)

Kane:  During my slumber, I started thinking about why I was doing this again, and I feel I needed to remember.

(Camera pans to the rooftop from Twisted Metal: Black as Yellow Jacket was battling.)

Kane:  Last time, I battled to make everything better because my dad was killed during his job.

(Camera shows the inside of Yellow Jacket, as Kane was in the front pasanger's seat controlling Charlie Kane's corpse with a controller.)

Kane:  I was locked up because of what I did with my dad's corpse.  The people didn't like it and they tried to put me in a home and bury my dad.  We were in the final round.  We were doing great.

(Suddenly, Yellow Jacket was severely damaged by a swarm of missiles. It was disabled as Sweet Tooth, in mech form, appeared in front of the vehicle..)

Kane: Until my brother attacked.  My dad never wanted me to talk about him because he did bad things.  I managed to escape and I tried to get dad out.

(Kane messed with the controller, but the antenna on Charlie's head was broken.)

Kane:  But dad didn't respond. The antenna used to control him was destroyed in my brother's missile fire. I was forced to watch as my brother finished him off.

(Soon, Sweet Tooth fired another swarm of missiles as the taxi cab known as Yellow Jacket was destroyed, Charlie destroyed with it.)

Kane:  It was horrible. My father's cab was destoryed, my dad destoryed in the flames that consumed what would remain.

(Kane is seen escaping as Warhawk came in.)

Kane:  Soon, the police sent a helicopter.  Since it was too busy dealing with my brother at the time, I escaped, going into hiding to avoid capture, since I could be charged as an adult for my participation in the contest.

(Kane was in the sewers busy planning and building Dark Tooth.)

Kane: For years, I would plan to end my brother's reign of terror.  I also planned to kill myself, as I found out by competing, I had his evil blood.

(Camera cuts to Kane waking up.)

Kane:  But soon, very soon, it will end.

(Camera shows Dark Tooth leaving the arena.)

EPILOGUE:

(Camera shows Dark Tooth surrounded by the destroyed remains of the other vehicles.)

Kane:  I've done it. My brother is now dead. I have ended his evil reign.

(Camera shows Kane going to the remains of Sweet Tooth and taking Needles' knife.)

Kane:  Now that my brother's burning in hell, it was time I joined him. I decided to stab myself when I was stopped by him.

(Calypso is seen behind Kane.)

Kane: I saw it was Calypso, and I was unhappy. I asked him what he wanted, and he said he wanted to make everything better.

(Calypso and Kane talked.)

Kane:  Calypso explained that the two of us had something in common, as he also had lost someone dear to him.

(camera goes to a cemetary where Kane and Calypso come to a tombstone with the words "Kirsta Sparks" on it.)

Kane: He told me the story of his daughter, who he lost in a car wreck, and the driver who killer her was found not guilty. He felt the world took his daughter away from him, and that's why he started the contest.  To get revenge on the world.

(Calypso looks at Kane.)

Kane:  Then Calypso gave me an offer.  Since I won the contest, he had a prize in mind for me if I did win last year.  My dad would never be brought back because he was shot in the head.  No mechanics would help him live again, but he said he could help make everything better, by being a mentor.

(Camera cuts to Calypso's face close-up.)

Kane: He said he would need someone to train in order to take over the contest when he died, either naturally, or if someone gets lucky enough to kill him.

(Kane smiles.)

Kane: Maybe we are both in the same boat.  My dad was the only member of my family left, and some bastard killed him.  My brother was a heartless murderer.

(Kane and Calypso were seen shaking hands.)

Kane:  I accepted his offer.  I will not only help him fulfill his revenge for his daughter, but I will also get revenge on the world for letting that guy kill dad.

(Kane is seen in Dark Tooth, with Calypso riding.  Camera pans out of the vehicle behind it, as it speeds out of the cemetary, taking down the gates.)

Kane:  Dark Tooth is born, and Charlie Kane will be avenged.

(Camera cuts to logo, then credits roll as "Back In Black' by AC/DC plays and scenes from all character movies play.)

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I am back, after so long.  and I have planned to post this last, but a ceretain fanfic that I won't mention, but you all know changed my plans.
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Re: Dark Tooth - Twisted Metal Black 2
Reply #1 - 03/05/11 at 14:48:30
 
Welcome back.

Thanks for the proof. Hopefully people will get the message.

Anyway, keep on writing.
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Reply #2 - 03/14/11 at 21:37:38
 
I loved the story. The ending was just so different of what I thought (I thought that he was gonna commit suicide), but it doesn't change my opinion. I hope I can see more of your work soon Grin
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Reply #3 - 09/13/11 at 22:30:48
 
William2 wrote on 09/13/11 at 05:17:53:
I was thinking about just the same stuff these days. You describe the way it is. In a symphony orchestra, basically you spend half of your time trying to be a great sound amplifier. It is a great craft, but not such an artistic storytelling job. But anyhow, when you accept the symphony job, you have to provide the (good solid) sound thats needed in the context of the big hall, no artistic excuses possible. The jazz artists focusses on storytelling and let the amps do the sound production job. Or am I missing your point Sonic Soldier is really a nice way to describe it .
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Reply #4 - 09/13/11 at 23:02:35
 
ThumperManX wrote on 09/13/11 at 22:30:48:
Hey, dickweed, if you can't appreciate the work I did in this fanfic, then take your humping kangaroos and shove them up your ass.



That's a spambot, you fucking genius.
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Really loved it..


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Reply #6 - 10/05/11 at 02:44:17
 
I enjoyed reading this a lot Thumper. I am waiting for some more this kind of stuff from you.
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liked it, was surprised by the ending, i thought hed have wished krista back to life and killed himself.
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Reply #8 - 04/10/12 at 18:34:50
 
I've actually wanted to write my own story about Kane's younger son, but sadly, you beat me to the punch.  Wink

Even so, I really liked this story. The ending actually fits in with the  irony that I've come to expect from a TM character's ending. Nice work.
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Reply #9 - 04/13/12 at 13:02:55
 
ThumperManX wrote on 03/01/11 at 23:32:59:
Dark Tooth

Driver:  Son Of Kane

Son of Kane is exacally true to his alias.  He is the youngest child of the late Charlie Kane.  His father was gunned down by a passenger he picked up, but Son was able to revive him as a remote-contrlled machine.  Unfortunatly, he lost the last contest, resulting in the destruction of both his dad's body and the taxi cab he used to compete. He had since gone into hiding, evading capture, and the manhunt ended when the police concluded that he was killed in the contest.

Years later, he has emerged to enter the new contest uninvited.  He has built a new vehicle in order to compete.  He plans to kill his older brother, Sweet Tooth, then comit suicide. He believes in doing so, he will finally end the evil blodline that Sweet Tooth begot.

Vehicle:  Dark Tooth

Dark Tooth is similar to Sweet Tooth in many ways. Both are ice cream trucks, and both drivers are from the same family.  But Dark Tooth is different.  It is black with purple polka dots, is bigger than almost all of the vehicles (including Sweet Tooth), and has different special Weapons. Beware, as the ice cream cone on the rooftop of Dark Tooth is actually a remote-detonated warhead that does massive damage.

PROLOGUE:

Kane:  I lost.  I lost him!

(Camera pans to a sewer entrance in the ruins of Midtown. it pans inside and through the damp tunnels as Kane speaks.)

Kane:  My dad's body was the last family I had, and now he's gone, forever!

(Camera pans to ahuge area where Kane, now older and wearing a white shirt, blue jeans, and some worn shoes, is seen loking over Dark Tooth.)

Kane:  Death was always in my brother's blood.  By participating in that contest, it was proven to be in my own.

(Camera shows flashes of Sweet Tooth in the contest, then back at Kane.0

Kane: But I now know what I must do.

(Camera pans outside the sewers as Dark Tooth speeds through the narrow opening, smashing it apart as survivors start runing away in fear.  It speeds out of the destroyed city as Kane speaks.)

Kane:  When this contest is over, the bloodline will end.

MIDDLE:

(Minion explodes.  As peices of the tank fly into the air, one big piece flies up and hits Dark Tooth, knocking Kane out.)

Kane:  I was knocked out for a while.

(Camera shows Dark Tooth surrounded in flames, then shows Kane slumped over the controls in the vehcicle.)

Kane:  During my slumber, I started thinking about why I was doing this again, and I feel I needed to remember.

(Camera pans to the rooftop from Twisted Metal: Black as Yellow Jacket was battling.)

Kane:  Last time, I battled to make everything better because my dad was killed during his job.

(Camera shows the inside of Yellow Jacket, as Kane was in the front pasanger's seat controlling Charlie Kane's corpse with a controller.)

Kane:  I was locked up because of what I did with my dad's corpse.  The people didn't like it and they tried to put me in a home and bury my dad.  We were in the final round.  We were doing great.

(Suddenly, Yellow Jacket was severely damaged by a swarm of missiles. It was disabled as Sweet Tooth, in mech form, appeared in front of the vehicle..)

Kane: Until my brother attacked.  My dad never wanted me to talk about him because he did bad things.  I managed to escape and I tried to get dad out.

(Kane messed with the controller, but the antenna on Charlie's head was broken.)

Kane:  But dad didn't respond. The antenna used to control him was destroyed in my brother's missile fire. I was forced to watch as my brother finished him off.

(Soon, Sweet Tooth fired another swarm of missiles as the taxi cab known as Yellow Jacket was destroyed, Charlie destroyed with it.)

Kane:  It was horrible. My father's cab was destoryed, my dad destoryed in the flames that consumed what would remain.

(Kane is seen escaping as Warhawk came in.)

Kane:  Soon, the police sent a helicopter.  Since it was too busy dealing with my brother at the time, I escaped, going into hiding to avoid capture, since I could be charged as an adult for my participation in the contest.

(Kane was in the sewers busy planning and building Dark Tooth.)

Kane: For years, I would plan to end my brother's reign of terror.  I also planned to kill myself, as I found out by competing, I had his evil blood.

(Camera cuts to Kane waking up.)

Kane:  But soon, very soon, it will end.

(Camera shows Dark Tooth leaving the arena.)

EPILOGUE:

(Camera shows Dark Tooth surrounded by the destroyed remains of the other vehicles.)

Kane:  I've done it. My brother is now dead. I have ended his evil reign.

(Camera shows Kane going to the remains of Sweet Tooth and taking Needles' knife.)

Kane:  Now that my brother's burning in hell, it was time I joined him. I decided to stab myself when I was stopped by him.

(Calypso is seen behind Kane.)

Kane: I saw it was Calypso, and I was unhappy. I asked him what he wanted, and he said he wanted to make everything better.

(Calypso and Kane talked.)

Kane:  Calypso explained that the two of us had something in common, as he also had lost someone dear to him.

(camera goes to a cemetary where Kane and Calypso come to a tombstone with the words "Kirsta Sparks" on it.)

Kane: He told me the story of his daughter, who he lost in a car wreck, and the driver who killer her was found not guilty. He felt the world took his daughter away from him, and that's why he started the contest.  To get revenge on the world.

(Calypso looks at Kane.)

Kane:  Then Calypso gave me an offer.  Since I won the contest, he had a prize in mind for me if I did win last year.  My dad would never be brought back because he was shot in the head.  No mechanics would help him live again, but he said he could help make everything better, by being a mentor.

(Camera cuts to Calypso's face close-up.)

Kane: He said he would need someone to train in order to take over the contest when he died, either naturally, or if someone gets lucky enough to kill him.

(Kane smiles.)

Kane: Maybe we are both in the same boat.  My dad was the only member of my family left, and some bastard killed him.  My brother was a heartless murderer.

(Kane and Calypso were seen shaking hands.)

Kane:  I accepted his offer.  I will not only help him fulfill his revenge for his daughter, but I will also get revenge on the world for letting that guy kill dad.

(Kane is seen in Dark Tooth, with Calypso riding.  Camera pans out of the vehicle behind it, as it speeds out of the cemetary, taking down the gates.)

Kane:  Dark Tooth is born, and Charlie Kane will be avenged.

(Camera cuts to logo, then credits roll as "Back In Black' by AC/DC plays and scenes from all character movies play.)

_________________________________________________________

I am back, after so long.  and I have planned to post this last, but a ceretain fanfic that I won't mention, but you all know changed my plans.

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