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Twisted Metal Insanity: Bruce's War
08/18/10 at 11:41:43
 
STORYBOARD: Bruce Cochrane is forced to rejoin the Twisted Metal Tournament to put an end to all the gang violence in his neighborhood.

CHARACTERS:
Bruce Cochrane [Thumper]
Billy Ray Stillwell [Junkyard Dog]
Mortimer Scharf [Shadow]
Lt. Jameson [Outlaw]
Sgt. Hawkins [Warthog]
Marcus Kane [Roadkill]
Mr. Ash [Darkside]
Minion [Tank]
Ken [Spectre]
Mr. Grimm [Motorcycle]

CONTEST HOSTS:
Needles Kane
Bloody Mary
Will
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Reply #1 - 08/21/10 at 11:01:51
 
Twisted Metal Insanity: Bruce's War
Chapter One
Part One of Three
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-We see the suburbs of Midtown half-destroyed; bodies litter the streets, houses are on fire, and cars are flipped over and burning. We see a man walk out of a house with a Spas-12 Shotgun. He walks into his garage and sits on the hood of a pink lowrider-

BRUCE: The gangs did this. All of this...All the pain, and destruction, and misery. This year I'm joining the Twisted Metal Competition to finally put an end to all the violence. When I win, I'm asking Needles to help me drive out all the street gangs out of Midtown.

-BRUCE climbs into Thumper and drives out of his garage, and into the streets. Halfway down the road, a POLICE OFFICER stops him-

POLICE OFFICER: Where are you going, sir? And what's with all the guns on your car?

BRUCE: Uhm...I can explain....

-A car explodes in the background, and two gang members run from the destroyed car,firing machine guns at the Police Officers-

POLICE OFFICER: Get 'em, get 'em! -The POLICE OFFICER runs away, and BRUCE drives down to the Midtown Junkyard. He parks Thumper in front of the Contest's Hosts: NEEDLES KANE, BLOODY MARY and her husband WILL.-

BRUCE: Needles.

NEEDLES: Oh, boy...Don't tell me you're another punk-ass cop here to try and kill me...

BRUCE: No! I want to compete in this year's Twisted Metal...

BLOODY MARY: Oh. Well, why didn't you say so sooner, kid? I was just about to shoot you too...-BLOODY MARY has a .45 behind her back-

WILL: What do you think, Needles? I know I've seen this guy before.

NEEDLES: Yes, he was in last year's Contest.

BRUCE: Am I in or not?

NEEDLES: Yeah, yeah! You're in. Come here tommorow at 6:30 AM if you want in on the first battle.

BRUCE: Thanks, Needles.

-BRUCE gets into Thumper and drives back home-

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~End of Chapter One~
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Reply #2 - 08/21/10 at 12:02:13
 
Twisted Metal Insanity: Bruce's War
Chapter Two
Part One of Three
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The next day, 6:30 AM
Midtown Junkyard

-BRUCE arrives at the Junkyard right as the other Contestants start arriving-

BRUCE: Ok Needles, I'm here!

LT. JAMESON: Yeah, and so am I, ya thug....

BRUCE: Hey, whoa man! I ain't a thug, I'm on your side!

LT. JAMESON: Yeah, of course you are...

-SGT. HAWKINS walks up to BRUCE and LT. JAMESON-

SGT. HAWKINS: Shut the hell up, both of you! If you're gonna fight, fight on the battlegrounds!

NEEDLES: -Over an intercom- He's right, people. Keep the war out there...or else we'll have to kill you.

-BLOODY MARY and WILL can be seen with M16's in the background-

BLOODY MARY: He's right, you guys better listen to him.

WILL: Yeah. I don't want to have to shoot down the Competition, that'd run the Contest.

BRUCE: -In his head- No shit...

NEEDLES: -Over an intercom- Ok everyone, get into your cars! You'll find a map in your vehicle! These will lead you to your battlegrounds!

KEN: Seems a little outdated, got anything better?

BLOODY MARY: Hey, it's better than trying to buy a GPS for you guys every year....

WILL: Deal with it.

NEEDLES: -Over an intercom- Your first battleground will be the industrial districts of Midtown; The Factory District, I like to call it. Now move out!

-The Contestants drive to the Factory District-

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~End of Chapter Two~



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Reply #3 - 08/22/10 at 01:03:04
 
That's a good start. Keep up the good work when you can.
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Reply #4 - 08/26/10 at 21:19:30
 
I have returned. Tommorow I have to go see a plastic surgeon for my eye, but that gives me an easy 3-day weekend to finally post the next Chapters.

Time to work.
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Reply #5 - 08/27/10 at 02:15:24
 
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I have returned. Tommorow I have to go see a plastic surgeon for my eye, but that gives me an easy 3-day weekend to finally post the next Chapters.

Time to work.


Wow, your eye must've been effed up really bad. Get well soon, my friend.
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Reply #6 - 08/27/10 at 02:32:55
 
Thank you, man.
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Reply #7 - 08/28/10 at 14:00:36
 
Sorry to hear bout the eye.

At least you can have time to write! Just don't write sideways.
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Reply #8 - 08/30/10 at 20:57:36
 
Twisted Metal Insanity: Bruce's War
Chapter Three
Part One of Three
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Midtown Factory District
6:50 AM
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-The Contestants arrive at the Midtown Factory District-

NEEDLES: -Over the Contestant's CB's- Get ready to fight, Contestants! Let the best man win!

[Thumper vs: Junkyard Dog and Shadow]

-BRUCE hits his Turbo and Thumper takes off at full speed. BRUCE sees Junkyard Dog up ahead of him and races towards him, firing his Machine Guns-

-The bullets hit the back of Billy Ray Stilwell's tow truck-

BILLY RAY STILWELL: What the hell, man!

-Junkyard Dog spins around and fires a Power Missle at Thumper, which knocks the lowrider back some-

BRUCE: Whoa! -BRUCE fires a Homing Missle at Junkyard Dog, then sees a factory down the road. He spots some workers loading boxes into the factory through a large garage door, and speeds towards the door-

WORKER: Watch it people!

WORKER: Oh my God!

-The WORKERS dive out of the way as Thumper drives into the factory-

WORKER: -Gets up- That was a close one. At least we're all still alive-

-The WORKER gets hit by Junkyard Dog as he follows Thumper into the factory-

BILLY RAY STILWELL: I'ma comin' for you, boy!

BRUCE: -Through his CB to Junkyard Dog- Give up, country boy!

BILLY RAY STILWELL: -Through his CB to Thumper- Screw you, thug!

BRUCE: -Through his CB to Junkyard Dog- Hey Billy! Remember Annie?

BILLY RAY STILWELL: -Through his CB to Thumper- Y-you bitch! Die!! -Junkyard Dog speeds towards Thumper, smashing boxes and running down workers in his rage-

BRUCE: Uh-oh, I pissed him off. -Thumper crashes through a garage door and gets back out onto the streets, leaving Junkyard Dog in the factory-

-Thumper leaves a Remote Bomb near the factory, drives away, and detonates it, and the factory goes down in a massive explosion-

BRUCE: There's no way he could've survived that. That's some seriously fucked up shit.

-Thumper drives off in search of his second opponent, Shadow-

-Meanwhile, Shadow drives around looking for someone to fight. MORTIMER sees the destroyed factory and sighs deeply-

MORTIMER: Too many lives have been lost because of this hellish Contest. This year I shall slay Needles Kane and his supporters and end this Contest once and for all.

-Thumper drives down the street ahead of Shadow and MORTIMER spots him-

MORTIMER:..But first I will take care of his Contestants. -MORTIMER smiles and drives towards Thumper, firing Fire Missles at him-

MORTIMER: Time to meet Calypso in Hell, Bruce! Hahahaha!

BRUCE: -Sees Shadow in his rear-view mirror- He's onto me.

-Shadow fires his Special, the Soul Bomb, at Thumper, and it hits Thumper, knocking him back into a building and damaging the back of his vehicle, bad.-

BRUCE: Good Lord!

-Shadow rushes towards Thumper, firing his Machine Guns at him-

BRUCE: Can't let him get to me...-Bruce hits reverse and it pushes him into the building. It's an abandoned warehouse-

BRUCE: I wonder what kind of warehouse this is. -BRUCE looks up and sees a large sign. It says: Williamson's Car Parts-

BRUCE: Damn, that's convienent.

-BRUCE gets out of his car and starts looking through old boxes in the warehouse. He finds a spare hood and a spare bumper, and puts them onto his lowrider. Then he finds some spare peices of metal and attaches them onto his lowrider-

BRUCE: Makeshift armor will definetely help me out.

-Shadow crashes through a door-

MORTIMER: He should be around here somewhere.

BRUCE: Shit! -BRUCES climbs into his newly-repaired car and drives out of the warehouse-

-Shadow sees him-

MORTIMER: I'm going to send you to Hell, boy! Don't run from me!

-Shadow hits his Turbo and speeds out of the warehouse, pursuing Thumper-

BRUCE: When will this old man piss off?

-Thumper swerves through traffic, and Shadow follows close behind-

-Thumper fires a Rear Missle at Shadow, and it flies right into the front windshield-

MORTIMER: WHAT THE HELL- -Shadow explodes, and the souls in the back of his hearse escape, flying into the sky-

BRUCE: They must be going to Heaven. -Thumper pulls out his map and looks for the next Battleground-

~Meanwhile, at NEEDLE's Junkyard, BLOODY MARY and WILL are making out in a room, and they're supposed to be monitoring the Contest. A BODYGAURD walks into the room-

BODYGAURD: Mary, Will, Thumper has defeated the other Contestants and...

WILL: We know. Go away.

BODYGAURD: Erm...ok...I'll come back later then...

-The BODYGAURD leaves the room-

~Meanwhile, back at the Midtown Factory District-

BRUCE: -Gets out of Thumper and sits on the hood of his car- I wonder when Needles is gonna send me off to my next Battleground.

-A man with a Double-barreled Shotgun staggers towards BRUCE. It's BILLY RAY STILWELL-

BRUCE: It's you! -BRUCE grabs his Spas-12 and jumps behind Thumper-

BILLY RAY STILWELL: I'ma kill you, boy. -BILLY fires his Shotgun at Thumper-

BRUCE: Don't shoot my car! -BRUCE gets up and fires an entire clip into BILLY. He falls down riddled with bulletholes-

BRUCE: Goodbye, redneck.

-BRUCE climbs back into Thumper-

NEEDLES: -Over Thumper's CB- Well done, Bruce. You may advance to the next Battleground- After you defeat one of my friends, that is! Hahahahahaha!

BRUCE: -Over his CB to NEEDLES- A friend? What do you mean, man?!

NEEDLES: -Over Thumper's CB- You'll see soon enough.

-A WW2-style Panzer Tank slowly drives down the road, heading towards Thumper-

NEEDLES: -Over Thumper's CB- Meet Kaiser. Defeat him, or die!

BRUCE: SHIT. -BRUCE goes into reverse and spins around, and Kaiser follows him, firing his Cannon at him-

BRUCE: Gotta get out of here...-BRUCE drives towards the highway, only to find it blocked off by Midtown Police Officers-

POLICE OFFICER: It's one of the Contestants! Shoot to kill, shoot to kill!

-The POLICE OFFICERS fire their M16's at Thumper, and a few bullets hit the front windshield and the hood-

BRUCE: Dammit!

-Kaiser drives through a small house, and fires his Cannon at Thumper, which nearly hits him and sends him flying-

BRUCE: Jesus Christ, this guy is insane!

-Thumper fires a few Power Missles at Kaiser, which disables two out of the three Machine Guns on the Tank. The front Machine Gun is still active, however-

BRUCE: I gotta take out that cannon he's got...

-Thumper fires a Homing Missle at Kaiser, and it hits the side of the heavily-armored Tank-

BRUCE: Gotta...keep...movin'..

-Kaiser fires a round of Swarm Missles at Thumper, which hit the lowrider, messing up the right side of the car and knocking the right passenger door off-

BRUCE: No one fucks up my lowrider. NO ONE. -Thumper hits his brakes and turns around, firing all his Missles at Kaiser, while firing his Machine Guns and firing his Spas-12 out the window-

-The driver of Kaiser, Lt. Ludwig Von Sturmgeist, is shocked by the ferocity of Thumper's attack-

STURMGEIST: Damn, zis one is a tough one..ja, ja. But ve vill see who's tougher!

-STURMGEIST fires his Cannon at Thumper, and Thumper swerves out of the way to avoid getting hit-

BRUCE: If I learned ANYTHING from "Call to Arms" game, it's that tanks have weak armor on the sides and back...

-Thumper drives around to Kaiser's rear and fires a Fire Missle at the end of the Tank, damaging the Tank-

STURMGEIST: Dammit!

-Thumper drives around in circles around the Tank, leaving STURMGEIST confused and afraid.-

-Thumper fires some Power Missles at Kaiser's sides, blowing holes in the sides of the Tank-

STURMGEIST: Auuugh, no! He's screwing my tank up bad!!

-STURMGEIST parks his Tank and opens the top hatch, and pulls out an MG42, and fires it at Thumper-

BRUCE: It's over, bitch!

-BRUCE fires a Napalm onto the hatch, and STURMGEIST catches fire. He drops the MG42, and slumps into the Tank. The Tank then explodes, and a large hunk of metal hits Thumper's windshield; it goes right through and hits BRUCE on the head, knocking him out-

BRUCE: As I drifted away, the dreams started again. The same dreams that have plagued me for many nights and many days...I began to remember...

~Flashback to a month ago, at BRUCE's house-

BRUCE: [Narrating] I had a family at one point, a wife, Esmeralda, and a daughter, Angela....

-We see BRUCE and his family walking down the streets of Midtown-

ANGELA: Daddy, what do you think of Jeff?

BRUCE: Jeff, your boyfriend?

ANGELA: Yeah!

BRUCE: I think he's a gang punk.

ANGELA: So what if he rolls with the East Side Kings? I love him, daddy!

BRUCE: Gang scum.

ESMERALDA: -Puts her arm around BRUCE and while holding ANGELA's hand- Calm down, baby.

BRUCE: I just hate those fuckin' gangs.

-Meanwhile, a few members of the East Side Kings overhear BRUCE-

GANG MEMBER 1: Man, you hear that bitch?

GANG MEMBER 2: Yeah! I say we teach him a lesson...

GANG MEMBER 1: Hell yeah...-GANG MEMBER 1 pulls out a Glock-

BRUCE: Wait right here, guys. -BRUCE walks into a small store-

GANG MEMBER 1: Get 'em now!!

-The GANG MEMBERS jump out from behind the alley they were hiding in and gun down BRUCE's family-

-BRUCE runs out of the store-

BRUCE:...Oh my God...

~Flashback back to the present, BRUCE wakes up-

BRUCE: But now I have a chance for revenge.

NEEDLES: -Over Thumper's CB- Good work, Bruce. Niw head down to into the Town for your second Battle.

BRUCE: -Through his CB to NEEDLES- On it.

~End of Chapter Three~

~Dead & Gone~
Junkyard Dog
Shadow
Kaiser [First Boss]

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Fun Facts from the Writer:

-Most of this Chapter was written in the car on the way to the Doctor's Office, then to Resturaunt, then to School [To drop something off], then to a Gas Station, and finally at my house
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Re: Twisted Metal Insanity: Bruce's War
Reply #9 - 08/30/10 at 21:01:18
 
Damn, I used up every character! I'm DEFINETELY back people.
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Reply #10 - 08/31/10 at 01:22:05
 
Wow, awsome chapter, but it should be Shadow, not Thumper, who got hit by the Rear Missile.
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Reply #11 - 08/31/10 at 06:27:07
 
Twisted Metal Insanity: Bruce's War
Chapter Four
Part One of Three
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Midtown Suburbs Reconstruction Project.
7:30 AM
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NEEDLES: -Over the Contestant's CB's- Ah, the Suburbs of Midtown, still devastated from last year's Contest. Get movin'!

[Thumper vs: Outlaw, Warthog, and Spectre]

-Thumper drives into the Town and sees that there are Police Officers armed with M16's everywhere. BRUCE gets on his CB-

BRUCE: Uh...Needles? Is there a better place where we could fight? There are cops everywhere.

NEEDLES: No. Kill them if they bother you. Over and out.

-BRUCE puts his CB down and drives through a Police roadblock-

POLICE OFFICER: Looks like Twisted Metal has come to town. Wirth, notify the Mayor! NOW!

OFFICER WIRTH: Yes sir! -OFFICER WIRTH gets into his Police Car and drives to City Hall-

-Thumper spots Spectre up ahead and fires a Homing Missle at him-

KEN: Whoaaa! -The Missles hit Spectre, blowing some holes in the car-

BRUCE: Is..is that Spectre? -BRUCE pulls out his cell phone and calls BLOODY MARY-

BRUCE: -Over the phone- Someone else has your car, you know...

BLOODY MARY: -Over the phone- Yeah, that's not my car, just a poser...me and Will are busy right now. Byebye! -BLOODY MARY hangs up-

BRUCE: -Hangs up- I'm not even gonna ask.

-Spectre speeds towards Thumper and fires a Ghost Missle at him. Thumper swerves out of the way so that the Missle hits a wrecked house-

KEN: Damn. That was a rip-off.

-Thumper lays a few Mines down on the road, and Spectre runs them over, sending the sports car flying some-

KEN: How dare you damage my car! -Spectre fires a Homing Missle at Thumper and it hits the back of Thumper-

BRUCE: Grrrr...-Thumper turns around and charges towards Spectre. He rams into and fires his Special, the Flamethrower, at Spectre, and the sports car catches fire-

BRUCE: Bastard. -Thumper drives away-

-BRUCE looks into his rear-view mirror and sees Outlaw behind him-

BRUCE: Oh shit.

LT. JAMESON: -Through his CB to Thumper- You're under arrest!

BRUCE: -Through his CB to Outlaw- For what?

LT. JAMESON: -Through his CB to Thumper- For competing in the Twisted Metal Tournament!

BRUCE: -Through his CB to Outlaw- But you're competing too!!

LT. JAMESON: -Through his CB to Thumper-...Shit...you're right-

-Warthog rams into Outlaw, flipping the Police Car over-

SGT. HAWKINS: Hahahahahah! Die, pig!

-Warthog fires a round of Glory Missles at Outlaw, but they flip the car over. Outlaw uses his Tazer, which is actually an EMP, to disable the weapons system on Warthog. Outlaw then fires three Homing Missles at Warthog-

SGT. HAWKINS: C'mon soldier! You can do WAY better than THAT! -SGT. HAWKINS leans out the side window and fires an MP5 at Outlaw, and a bullet goes through the front windshield, hitting LT. JAMESON in the chest-

LT. JAMESON: Ow, fuck!

-Thumper crashes through a wrecked house and fires his Flamethrower at Outlaw, engulfing the Police Car in flames, and it explodes. Screams are heard from the burning wreck-

SGT. HAWKINS: That boy just made my job a hell of a lot easier.

-Thumper speeds away, and Warthog drives off in search of him-

~Meanwhile, at Midtown City Hall~

-OFFICER WIRTH barges into MAYOR PLUTH's office-

OFFICER WIRTH: Sir, sir! The Twisted Metal Contest is back....

MAYOR PLUTH: I know, I know. And this time out we've got the tools and the manpower to take care of the Contestants AND Needles and his crew.

GOVERNOR MAJCHROWICZ: -Points to a man dressed in a long black robe and a black hat- This is Jebediah. He claims he knows where Needles' hideout is.

PREACHER: Oh, I do, I do. And therefore we're going to attack, with a thousand men.

OFFICER WIRTH: Where are we going to find a thousand men?

MAYOR PLUTH: I know! -MAYOR PLUTH gets on the phone and calls the 101st Airborne COMMANDER-

MAYOR PLUTH: Save us!

COMMANDER: After what happened last time? No. -The COMMANDER hangs up-

GOVERNOR MAJCHROWICZ: I have a better plan: We raid Needles' hideout, while modifying some of our own vehicles into Twisted Metal vehicles!

MAYOR PLUTH: Sounds good, sounds good.

PREACHER: I like it.

~Meanwhile, back in the Midtown Suburbs Reconstruction Project~

-Warthog rams into Thumper, nearly knocking him off the road-

SGT. HAWKINS: Die already you bastard!

BRUCE: Eat lead! -Thumper swerves around and fires his Machine Guns at Warthog. Warthog fires his Glory Missles at Thumper, and they hit the car hard-

BRUCE: Yarrrrrrgh! -Thumper fires a round of Swarm Missles at Warthog, severely damaging the Humvee-

SGT. HAWKINS: If I have to go down, I'm gonna take you with me! You're gonna wish you were in Hell, son!

-Warthog speeds towards Thumper and attempts to ram into him, but Thumper swerves around in a 360 degree angle and fires a Homing Missle at Warthog, destroying the Humvee-

NEEDLES: -Over Thumper's CB- Good work. Now head down to Slums, that's your next Battleground.

BRUCE: -Over his CB to NEEDLES- You got it.

-Thumper speeds off towards the Slums-

~End of Chapter Four~

~Dead & Gone~
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Junkyard Dog
Spectre
Outlaw
Shadow
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Reply #12 - 08/31/10 at 06:28:56
 
Thumperman3000,
HOLY SHIT HE KILLED HIMSELF. Sorry about that!
Oh well, he has one more life left.
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Reply #13 - 09/04/10 at 01:41:03
 
Twisted Metal Insanity: Bruce's War
Chapter Five
Part Two of Three
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The Slums of Midtown
8:40 AM
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NEEDLES: -Over the Contestant's CB's- Welcome to the Slums. Prepar to fight!

-The Contestants drive off-

[Thumper vs Mr. Grimm, Darkside, and Roadkill]

-Thumper drives past a run-down house-

BRUCE: What a dump.

-Darkside crashes through a house, firing his Machine Guns at Thumper-

MR. ASH: -Over his CB to Thumper- Join me in Hell!

BRUCE: -Over his CB to Darkside- Never!

MR. ASH: -Over his CB to Thumper- Then join me in Hell! Your soul will be mine!

-Thumper fires a Fire Missle at Darkside, and it hits the side of the semi, doing little damage-

MR. ASH: Die....-Darkside rams into Thumper, sending the lowrider flying-

BRUCE: Holy shit!

-Thumper fires a Homing Missle at Darkside, and it front end of the semi. Darkside fires a series of Swarm Missles at Thumper, blowing a hole in the side of the car-

BRUCE: Screw this!

-Thumper drives away from Darkside, and spots Roadkill. Thumper fires a Power Missle at Roadkill, and it makes the old run-down Camaro jump into the air a little-

MARCUS KANE: Auuugghh! -Roadkill turns around 360 degrees, and fires two Homing Missles at Thumper. Thumper retaliates by firing a Freeze Missle at Roadkill, stopping the Camaro in it's tracks-

BRUCE: Now's my chance! -Thumper rams into Roadkill, firing his Flamethrower at the frozen vehicle-

-Roadkill breaks the Freeze and fires a Power Missle at Thumper, and Thumper fires several Homing Missles at Roadkill-

MARCUS KANE: Dammit! You have to die!

-Roadkill fires a Boomerang Missle at Thumper, and it knocks the hood off of the car-

BRUCE: Christ, he's going to kill me....

-Darkside rams into Roadkill and rams the car into a building. Roadkill explodes, and several hobos run out of the now-burning building-

BRUCE:...Not you again....

MR. ASH: -Over his CB to Thumper- JOIN ME IN HELL, BRUCE!

BRUCE: -Over his CB to Darkside- NEVER!

-Thumper fires a Napalm at Darkside, and the cab is set ablaze-

MR. ASH: Almost as hot as Hell.

-Darkside attempts to ram into Thumper but Thumper swerves out of the way and crashes into a run-down building-

BRUCE: Fuck. -BRUCE hits the gas and drives away from the destroyed building-

-Darkside speeds towards Thumper, but is hit by a missle and explodes. MR. GRIMM speeds past the wrecked semi-

BRUCE: This one'll be easy....

MR. GRIMM: Your soul is MINE!

BRUCE: -Rams into MR. GRIMM, knocking him off his motorcycle-

MR. GRIMM: Shit! -MR. GRIMM tries to get back up but is run down by Thumper-

NEEDLES: -Over Thumper's CB- Good work, Bruce..only one more Battleground left.

~End of Chapter Five~

~Dead & Gone~
Roadkill
Mr. Grimm
Darkside
Warthog
Spectre
Shadow
Outlaw
Junkyard Dog

Fun Fact from The Writer: This Chapter was written at School.
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Reply #14 - 09/04/10 at 01:48:39
 
Great chapter.  Mr. Grim got screwed there.  Can't wait for the final chapter.
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