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Roadboat - Gregory East Pt.1 (Read 2615 times)
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Roadboat - Gregory East Pt.1
08/17/10 at 02:02:51
 
Roadboat - Gregory East
Driver Profile:
Age: 31
Ethnticity: Caucasian
Height: 6'2
Weight: 215

Apperance: Few months unwashed soiled western style plaid shirt with 2 color tones of navy blue and grey with torn holes. Regular jeans pant with couple of holes in it with boots. Raggedy beard and long curly hair, unwashed in a long time. Brown eyes with a face that seems to show a ravaged past behind it.

[7pm in Los Angeles, camera pans around a business building, slowly zooming in closer to reveal a businessman holding a cup of coffee]

Man: Look at this beautiful city! I love this place and working here!

[A woman comes up to him and caress his chest in a sexual manner]

Woman: Oh but you don't love me?
Man: Heh.. I want to take you out to dinner, how about it?

Woman: Sounds good, baby.. Pick me up at 10..

[The woman kisses him on the cheek and grabs him by the crotch, walks away with a smirk on her face]

Man: Oh, I'm so gonna get laid tonight..

[The man looks back to the cityscape and happen to see a car flying midair toward him]
Man: What the fuck?

[He drops his cup. Camera shows the cup falling and shattering on the floor, coffee splashing everywhere in slow motion]

[Camera quickly pans from the man to the Roadboat car.. then revealing a second car(Axel) chasing, the chaser launches a fire missile. The camera follows the path of the missile, as it misses the first car and breaks through the glass paneling toward the man.]

Man: *whispers* Shit..

[The missile impales the man in the chest, propelling him into the cubicle, the surrounding area explodes and creates a hole for Gregory to land into.]

Gregory: Son of a bitch! That was a close one! Now, I just gotta shake the 2-wheeled freak off.

[With nowhere to go but out of the building, Gregory spots a 4 Channel News helicopter hovering outside the building]

Gregory: If I'm crazy to enlist in this tournament, then I ought be crazy enough to do this also.. *chuckles*

[Gregory flips the switch, activiating the Mega-Magnet special as he drives out the building, shattering the glass paneling.. Positioning his car in midair, he hits the ignition button then Roadboat slams into the helicopter and creates a strong magnetic attachment. The vehicle hangs beneath the helicopter.]

Helicopter pilot: What the fuck is that?? We're gonna crash if we keep being dragged down and out of control!

Helicopter pilot 2: I don't know, man! *peeks out the window to see what is holding down the helicopter* I don't see anything!

[Axel recklessly drives off the building in a futile attempt to reach the another building but falls to the streets below]

[Camera zooms in to Gregory's dashboard, showing various kind of switches and button, including the radar. But there is a red "Danger" flashing incidating the special is weakening]

Gregory: *speaking to his vehicle* Oh fuck, you have never failed me in the past, now's not the time to fail me! I don't think you'd want to be a metal pancake! Come on baby, hang on!

[He keeps pumping the throttle to keep the power of the magnet going until the helicopter spins out of control over a building]

Gregory: That's it! Just gotta hope for a nice landing. *he releases the magnet and the vehicle lands on the building*

[The vehicle lands perfectly on all 4 wheels, Gregory is relieved and pleased]

[The helicopter stablizes and the pilot spots the vehicle on the roof]

Pilot: Fucking asshole. Maybe I should join this "Twisted Metal" or whatever it's called and blow them all away. It's either us that's gonna be killed or it's them...

[Camera pans to Roadboat and zooms in to the driver]

Gregory: Heh.. *the roof crumbles under the vehicle*

[Gregory is in great panic as the vehicle nosedives through every floor of the building at a high speed, killing innocent people and blood are splattered all over the windshield. Sparks are flying, pipes, wirings, debris are destroyed.]

Gregory: Not what I expected at all! *he tightens his hands on the wheel and braces himself for impact*

[The vehicle crashes through a bathroom with a woman in the tub, but the woman is smashed to pieces and smeared across the windshield]

Gregory: Damn waste of a fine looking woman.. Nice tits though.. *he tightens his hands even more for the inevitable impact*

[An idea goes off in Gregory's head]

Gregory: That's it! If I could confgiure and move the deployment of the Jump to the front, that should soften the impact.

[Gregory fiddles with the dashboard filled with switches and button, manages to divert the Jump function to the front. Right before he lands, he deploys the Jump, which jerks the vehicle right back up a few feet and the vehicle flips. Lands ugly but Gregory is glad to be alive and in one piece.

Gregory: *lets out a big sigh of relief* That was fun.. But ain't doing that again for a long while.

[Gregory drives out through the front door, stops in middle of the road.. eyes the (TM2 style) giant blimp parked in front of him]

Gregory: What's next...

[Gregory drives his vehicle into the blimp, as he drives in, he notices musuclar guys with weapons. The first thing he sees in front of him is a big screen. He stops and parks his vehicle. Gregory steps out of the vehicle and wields his 12 gauge shotgun.]

Gregory: Well, what's next Calypso?

[The big screen starts up with a static snow, as if it was recieved through sateillite. It shows Calypso with his menacing smile.]

Calypso: Congratulations on your success, I didn't think you would win this round. HAHAHAHA!

Gregory: *mockingly* HAHA, yeah you thought wrong..

Calypso: Heh, your final battle is set in the desert. I have excellent contestants lined up.. You will fight for your life.. You have 3 days to rebuild and tune up your vehicle to better accomadate yourself in the harsh conditions. If you do succeed, you get your wish.. HAHAHAHA!

[The screen goes dark. Gregory sighs and goes back in his battle-damaged vehicle, turns around and leaves the blimp.

-Part 2 coming soon.-

This is just a rough draft of Part One, any suggestions would be appreciated. Feel free to criticize or question my first posted fanfic(there are other fanfics in the works). I just made this up today and spent time working on this part. I'll post the second part after I get my suggestions and whatnot. Maybe post my first part along with the second one for better readability, if that's allowed here.

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Re: Roadboat - Gregory East Pt.1
Reply #1 - 09/01/10 at 21:21:52
 
I like how the guys who's about to GET SOME later gets owned, & the girl with the nice bewbs who gets owned. Haha nice start for the story though, can't wait to see what happens next.
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