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X.Needles_Kane.X
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Twisted Metal Insanity: 2 Preview
08/13/10 at 06:16:49
 
-We see BLOODY MARY sitting in a dark alley, head between her knees, crying-

BLOODY MARY:...I failed...I failed...I entered that Contest to find my true love...and I ran away, I gave up...I fucked up bad....

-BLOODY MARY gets up and pulls out a .38-

BLOODY MARY: But not this time.

-BLOODY MARY climbs into her sports car and starts it up-

BLOODY MARY: I'm going to win this year's Twisted Metal....No matter what.

-SPECTRE drives out of the alley at top speed-

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COMING SOON TO A TMA FANFIC SECTION NEAR YOU!

Twisted Metal Insanity 2, the sequel to Twisted Metal Insanity 1, now told from the eyes of Bloody Mary.

NEW FEATURES:
-More firearms [M21, M12 Shotgun, Desert Eagle, Flamethrower, and a Bazooka]

More locations to fight [A drive-in movie theater, an abandoned Air Force Base, and more!]

More Characters [You think I'm gonna tell you?]

TWISTED METAL INSANITY 2
COMING SOON
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Re: Twisted Metal Insanity: 2 Preview
Reply #1 - 08/13/10 at 06:20:23
 
Now if anyone has any good ideas, PM me or just post the idea here.

I'm going to go try and cook up some good stuff for this sequel!
-Scott
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Twisted Metal Insanity: 2 Chapter one, pt 1 of 3.
Reply #2 - 08/13/10 at 06:46:44
 
TWISTED METAL INSANITY 2.
By Scott Lange
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-We see BLOODY MARY in a fetal position next to Spectre, crying-

BLOODY MARY:....I fucked up...I fucked up bad, I entered that Contest to find my true love...And I ran away like a coward....

-BLOODY MARY gets up and pulls out a .38-

BLOODY MARY:....But not this time...I won't run this time, I'm going to win this year's Twisted Metal Tournament! No matter what....-BLOODY MARY climbs into Spectre and drives off-

-BLOODY MARY goes to the Junkyard, where NEEDLES KANE is briefing the new Contestants-

NEEDLES: You all know the Rules: THERE ARE NO RULES! Ha ha ha ha, may the best Contestant win!!

-Spectre speeds into the Junkyard, and BLOODY MARY jumps out-

NEEDLES: It's YOU.

BLOODY MARY: I want in on this year's Contest, Needles.

NEEDLES:...Well...we ARE short one Contestant....-We see a Contestant with his head cut off in the background-

NEEDLES: So you're in, Mary. The Contest starts in 2 hours.

-NEEDLES goes into a small building and picks up a clipboard-

NEEDLES: This year's Contestants are: Warthog/Colonel Hall, Outlaw/ Captain Jamie Roberts, Roadkill/Captain Spears, 12-Pak/Severed Sam, Grasshopper/Krista Sparks, 2-Wheeled Machine/Axel, Crimson Fury/Agent Stone, Outlaw 2/Sgt. Carl Roberts, Thumper/Bruce, Twister/Amanda Watts, and Bloody Mary/Spectre. -NEEDLES puts the clipboard down-

~2 HOURS LATER~

NEEDLES: -Over an intercom- Welcome to Twisted Metal! I am Needles, and the entire WORLD is your battleground! Your prize: One wish. Now, in your cars, there is a map. These are to send you to the right places to fight! I DON'T want the Army or the FBI after our asses this time! Your first battleground is Zorko Junkyard!

BRUCE: This junkyard?

NEEDLES: -Over an intercom- Hell no! It's on the east side of town. Now get moving!

-The Contestants drive off to the Zorko Junkyard-

~End of Chapter one~
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Re: Twisted Metal Insanity: 2 Preview
Reply #3 - 08/13/10 at 21:15:37
 
Great start. Great to see Thumper in, but it looks like the story will focus on Mary herself.
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Twisted Metal: Insanity Chapter one pt 1 of 3
Reply #4 - 08/14/10 at 05:49:58
 
First Battleground
Zorko Junkyard, Midtown. 12:30 PM
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NEEDLES: -Speaking to the Contestants through their CB's- Let the games begin!

-The Contestants go their own seperate ways to fight, and helicopters fly overhead. carrying Ammuntion and Missles-

-Spectre drives off, trying to avoid the Missles and bullets that are flying everywhere-

BLOODY MARY: It's pretty tight in here, I'd better take things slow if I want to make it out of here alive.

-Crimson Fury speeds towards Spectre, firing Fire Missles at her-

BLOODY MARY: Oh shit!

-Spectre fires a Ghost Missle at Crimson Fury, which hits the front end of his sports car, knocking the hood off and exposing the engine-

AGENT SHEPARD: No! This is an FBI-issued vehicle! You're payin' for that, lady! -Crimson Fury fires a small Lazer Beam at Spectre, and it hits, smashing part of the front windshield-

BLOODY MARY: Ha! That's all you got? -BLOODY MARY fires a Napalm Bomb at Crimson Fury's  exposed engine-

AGENT SHEPARD: OH SHIT- -Crimson Fury explodes-

BLOODY MARY: That's what you get for shooting at a woman! -BLOODY MARY smiles- and then drives away from the smoking heap that was once Crimson Fury-

-Roadkill speeds past Spectre-

CAPTAIN SPEARS: -Through his CB to BLOODY MARY- Chase me, bitch!

BLOODY MARY: A BITCH?...How dare you!

-Roadkill lays a few Mines behind Spectre, but she drives around them and fires a Homing Missle at Roadkill, it hits the back of his car, but doesn't do any damage, as the old car is heavily armored-

CAPTAIN SPEARS: Looks like the shit I learned in 'Nam paid off!

BLOODY MARY: -Through her CB- I'll get you, you sneaky motherfucker...

CAPTAIN SPEARS: -Through his CB- Then chase me!!

BLOODY MARY: -Through her CB- It's on, bitch!

-BLOODY MARY slams her foot down on the gas pedal, clicks the Turbo button, and slams into the back of Roadkill-

CAPTAIN SPEARS: Shit! -CAPTAIN SPEARS loses control of Roadkill and drives into a few gas barrels, and the car explodes-

-A whole bunch of red lights start flashing all around the Junkyard, and all the Contestants, except the dead ones, stop fighting where they are-

NEEDLES: -Over a large intercom- Stop fighting! All remaining drivers, head to the Drive-in Movie Theater on the east side of town! It's marked on your maps!

BLOODY MARY: -Pulls out her map- I guess I'd better get moving.

~End of Chapter two~
Dead & Gone:
Crimson Fury
Roadkill
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Re: Twisted Metal Insanity: 2 Preview
Reply #5 - 08/14/10 at 06:09:34
 
Wow, Mary starting to play rough. I bet she's going to win this one.
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Twisted Metal Insanity Chapter three pt 1 of 3
Reply #6 - 08/15/10 at 11:29:27
 
Second Battleground
Phillips Drive-in Movie Theater, 1:00 AM
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NEEDLES: -Through the Contestants' CB's- Welcome to the Phillips Drive-in Movie Theater! FIGHT!

-The Contestants drive into the Battleground, running down civilians in their wake. COLONEL HALL sees this, and decides to defend the civilians-

COLONEL HALL: Die, you murderous terrorist scum! -COLONEL HALL fires three Glory Missles at Spectre, and it hits the side of the car, sending Spectre sliding down the dirt roads of the Movie Theater-

BLOODY MARY: Die, asshole! -Spectre fires a Ghost Missle at Warthog-

COLONEL HALL: -Through his CB to BLOODY MARY- You can't win this, bitch!

BLOODY MARY: -Through her CB to COLONEL HALL- Wanna bet? -Spectre fires a Freeze Missle at Warthog, stopping him dead in his tracks. Spectre fires her Machine Guns and a series of Power Missles at COLONEL HALL's frozen Humvee-

COLONEL HALL: Dammit...-COLONEL HALL breaks the freeze and rams into Spectre, sending her back some-

-12-Pak rams into Warthog, and they both get caught the explosion, killing both drivers-

BLOODY MARY: Alright! That's what you get for shooting at a lady! -BLOODY MARY gives Warthog, now a smoking, burning heap of metal, the finger and drives away-

-AXEL drives by Spectre and fires his Machine Guns at her-

BLOODY MARY: Stupid fuck. Where the hell's his armor?

AXEL: -Screams at BLOODY MARY, since he has no CB- I'm gonna kill you, freak!

-BLOODY MARY remembers her time in Blackfield, and she remembers her abusive gaurd-

~Flashback, Blackfield Asylum~

GAURD: Hey! Hey Mary, you know you're never gonna find love, right? You're just a psycho cow. FREAK.

~Flashback to Present Day, Phillips Drive-in Movie Theater~

BLOODY MARY: You little prick! ARGGGGGGGGGGGH! -BLOODY MARY fires her Machine Guns at AXEL, and the bullets hit him in the back as he attempts to flee from the enraged woman-

AXEL: Oh God...I KNEW  I should've asked Calypso if I could put some extra armor on this thing!

-BLOODY MARY chases AXEL down and fires a Homing Missle at him, blowing off one of his big tires and enveloping his Two-Wheeled Machine in flames-

AXEL: Auuuuuuuugh! PUT IT OUT...Auuuughhhh...-AXEL burns to death-

NEEDLES: Over the Contestant's CB's- Stop fighting and head to the old Air Force Base on the outskirts of town!

BLOODY MARY: Very well! -BLOODY MARY drives off in the direction of the Air Force Base-

~End of Chapter three~

Dead & Gone:
Warthog
12-Pak
Axel
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Twisted Metal: Insanity 2, Chapter four pt 2 of 3
Reply #7 - 08/16/10 at 03:22:10
 
Third Battleground
Abandoned Air Force Base, 1:30 AM
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NEEDLES: Welcome to the Abandoned Air Force Base! It appears that the Air Force has left behind some Missles and Machine Gun ammo.
Use them to your advantage! Now fight!

-The main gate leading into the base explodes, and the Contestants drive inside-

-Outlaw drives past Spectre, and fires a large tazer at her car, shocking it and slowing it down a bit-

BLOODY MARY: Pig! -BLOODY MARY gets on her CB- I'm going to get you!

JAMIE ROBERTS: -Through her CB- Screw you, you crazy bitch!

-Spectre drives around, dodging Outlaw's attacks-

-Outlaw 2 crashes through a rusting, wrecked plane and fires a Homing Missle at Outlaw-

JAMIE ROBERTS: -Through her CB-..CARL...You shoot your own SISTER!? What the hell's wrong with you?

CARL ROBERTS: -Through his CB- I'm....I'm sorry, Jamie...

-JAMIE speeds towards CARL, firing her Machine Guns at him-

CARL: -Through his CB- JAMIE! I'm sorry!

-Meanwhile, a Huey Helicopter flies over the base and drops a small team of Special Forces soldiers into the base. They are being lead by the WARDEN-

WARDEN: Ok men! We're here to take out any supplies the Air Force left behind so that the Twisted Metal Contestants can't use 'em for themselves!

-The WARDEN pumps his M12 Shotgun and gives his team a hand signal to move out and clear out all the hangars-

-The SOLDIERS enter a hangar and find some MP5's and crates filled with Missles in it-

SF SOLDIER: Sir! We found some supplies! What should we do with them?

WARDEN: Burn it.

-A SF SOLDIER sets the hangar on fire with his Flamethrower-

WARDEN: Forget this. Just destroy them all!

-An SF SOLDIER fires at some of the hangars with his Bazooka, while two other SF SOLDIERS cover his flanks-

-Spectre crashes through a gate, being followed by Outlaw, while Outlaw 2 can be seen exploding in the background-

WARDEN: It's one of the escapees! KILL HER! What are we waiting for?

-The WARDEN fires his M12 at Outlaw until he runs out of ammo, then drops it and pulls out his Desert Eagle, and continues firing at Outlaw-

JAMIE ROBERTS: Scumbag! -JAMIE swerves around, dodging the bullets. She fires her Machine Guns at the SF SOLDIERS, cutting them down-

WARDEN: You bitch! YOU KILLED MY MEN. You're worse than that clown bastard!

-Spectre rams into the WARDEN, and he finds himself on the hood of Spectre-

BLOODY MARY: Get off my car. -BLOODY MARY slams on the brakes, sending the WARDEN flying. He hits the ground and cracks his skull open-

-Outlaw fires a Fire Missle at Spectre, and Spectre turns around and fires a Napalm Bomb at Outlaw, setting the police car on fire. Screams can be heard from the inside of the car-

BLOODY MARY:...When will I finally be able to claim my prize?

-A flatbed truck crashes through a wrecked hangar and parks in front of Spectre, and some BODYGAURDS get out, holding AK47's-

BODYGAURD: Mary. Come with us, it's time for your final showdown at Needles' private arena.

BLOODY MARY: He has an arena?

BODYGAURD: It used to be Calypso's...

BLOODY MARY:...Oh. That I can understand.

-The BODYGAURDS load Spectre into the back of the truck, and a BODYGAURD opens the passenger door for BLOODY MARY-

BLOODY MARY: My, you're a gentleman, aren't you?

~End of Chapter four~

Dead & Gone:
The Warden
Special Forces soldiers
Outlaw
Outlaw 2


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Twisted Metal: Insanity, Chapter five pt 2 of 3
Reply #8 - 08/16/10 at 04:20:17
 
Fouth Battleground
Private Arena, 2:30 AM
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-Spectre, Thumper, and Grasshopper slowly drive into the Arena. NEEDLES sits in a tower near the entrance, watching over the final Contestants-

NEEDLES: -Over an intercom- FIGHT.

-Thumper hits his Turbo, and fires his Flamethrower at Grasshopper-

BRUCE: Yeah, bitch! Burn!

KRISTA SPARKS: Oh Godddddd....-KRISTA sees a large trench filled with water in the middle of the Arena and drives into, putting the fire out-

BRUCE: Who the hell put that thing there? -BRUCE leans out of his window with a Glock and fires at Grasshopper-

KRISTA SPARKS: Don't shoot at me! -KRISTA uses her Special to slam her dune buggy down on BRUCE's lowrider-

BRUCE: Ahhhh what the hell?

-Spectre fires a Power Missle at Thumper, blowing him up and taking Grasshopper along with him-

BLOODY MARY: Yes! I can FINALLY get what I want!

NEEDLES: -Over BLOODY MARY's CB- Not yet...There's still one more opponent...

-Minion crashes through a gate in a heavily-armored Abrams Tank-

NEEDLES: -Over BLOODY MARY's CB- I had to make some modifications to him since you shot him....

MARCUS: -Over BLOODY MARY's CB- Marcus kill you, lady!!

BLOODY MARY: -Over NEEDLES' CB-...Whoa...he's fucked up.

NEEDLES: -Over BLOODY MARY's CB- Thanks to you.

-MINION fires his Machine Guns at Spectre, and they hit-

BLOODY MARY: Gotta avoid that cannon...

-MINION fires his cannon at Spectre, and nearly misses-

BLOODY MARY: My God! -Spectre fires a Ghost Missle at Minion, and it hits, doing little damage-

BLOODY MARY: He has to have a gas tank SOMEWHERE! Just gotta find it!

-BLOODY MARY keeps firing Ghost Missles at Minion-

MARCUS: Marcus kill lady! Marcus win Tournament!

-Spectre fires a Napalm Bomb at Minion, which does nothing to the tank-

BLOODY MARY: Shit.

-Minion charges at full speed towards Spectre-

BLOODY MARY: Holy SHIT. -BLOODY MARY slams her foot down on the gas and dodges Minion, and he crashes into one of the walls of the Arena. The wall collapses, and huge chunks of concrete have him pinned-

-BLOODY MARY drives behind Minion and fires a Power Missle at his gas tank, and the tank explodes-

NEEDLES: -Over BLOODY MARY's CB- You have won Twisted Metal! And you took Minion out in such a clever way, I may add.

~End of Chapter 5~

Dead & Gone:
Thumper
Grasshopper
Minion
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Twisted Metal: Insanity Chapter six pt 3 of 3
Reply #9 - 08/16/10 at 04:53:03
 
Needle's Junkyard
3:00 AM
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-BLOODY MARY walks up to NEEDLES-

NEEDLES: You have won my Contest, what is your wish, Mary?

BLOODY MARY:...Needles, my wish is for a man that will love me, a man that I can be happy with, forever..

NEEDLES: Granted! Doctor!

-DR. HATCH walks out with a MAN. The MAN has a few stitches on his head, but other than that he is fine-

DR. HATCH: I had to make some modifications, but I think he'll like you...his name is Will.

-WILL walks up to BLOODY MARY-

WILL: You're beautiful.

-BLOODY MARY stares at WILL for a moment, and a few tears roll down her cheeks. She hugs WILL tight-

BLOODY MARY:....I love you....

WILL: I love you too, Mary....

BLOODY MARY: Thank you, Needles...Thank you, Doctor..

NEEDLES: No problem.

DR. HATCH: You're welcome.

-BLOODY MARY and WILL walk to Spectre, but NEEDLES stops them-

NEEDLES: I hope I'll be seeing both of you soon- And Mary, you've proven to be quite the Contestant...

BLOODY MARY:..Oh, we'll be back, don't you worry...

-BLOODY MARY and WILL climb into Spectre and drive out of the Junkyard right as the sun begins to rise over Midtown-

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CREDITS:
Special Thanks to: David Jaffe, Scott Campbell, Dimitra [I love you!], Thumperman3000, all of you here at TMA, and everyone who's read my stories.

COMING SOON:
Twisted Metal Insanity 3: Vengeance.
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Re: Twisted Metal Insanity: 2 Preview
Reply #10 - 08/16/10 at 04:59:48
 
So what'd you guys think of it?
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Re: Twisted Metal Insanity: 2 Preview
Reply #11 - 08/16/10 at 06:03:14
 
Wow, I predicted Bloody Mary would win, and I was right.

Another great story. Can't wait for the third one.
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Reply #12 - 08/16/10 at 07:28:09
 
Hey, thanks Thumper!
I wanted Bloody Mary to have a happy ending because I felt like she got screwed over, bad, in TMB, so I decided to give her the ending I personally think she deserves.

Why, you may ask? Because she's one of my fave characters.
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Reply #13 - 08/16/10 at 07:29:21
 
My girlfriend's comin back from South Carolina at dawn, so I will spend the rest of my night writing Chapter one of my next story.
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Reply #14 - 08/16/10 at 08:23:16
 
Can you one day make a story based around Thumper?
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