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Twisted Metal Calypso vs Calypso
07/21/10 at 06:13:45
 
This Twisted Metal game centers around the Twisted Metal Universes of Black and TM2. It assumes Black won TMB and it shows the ending of Black from TMB but expanded to show Calypso (TMB) saying that was close too close I guess I have to get more from the asylum to kill him.

Then you see is Calypso from TM2 saying "I guess I will have to send in more to kill that bastard". Now you see is the Drivers from TM2 (The iconic ones) Axel (TMB Axel was quite as good), Thumper, Sweet Tooth (More clown like version), Warthog (TMB version not quite as good), Outlaw (TMB version not as good), Grasshopper, Hammerhead, Mr.Slam, and Roadkill standing in front of Calypso.

Calypso promises a wish to anyone that can kill the Calypso from the Dark Universe. Then you see Calypso (TMB) in the asylum walking through each cell (What Calypso promises them is explained in their prologue)

The characters representing the TMB universe are Sweet Tooth (More psychotic version), Mr.Grimm, Darkside (Dollface version), Specter (Crazy Bitch version, and 4 new characters.

16 characters all together 4 new ones to kinda mix things up with 3 unlock-ables (Black, Minion, and Calypso who is the final boss).

As far as the levels go you have the dark world of TMB and the colorful world of TM2. The dark characters start off in the asylum and make their way to the portal to the colorful world (With Minion guarding each gate). Then they make their way through the colorful world.

The colorful world characters start in the colorful world and make their way through to the Black world. It makes more sense because it would lead to good creativity in level design but back to the story.

When being a color world character you end up in the Asylum and end up fighting Calypso (TMB) then once you beat Calypso (TMB) you drive out to the outside of the Asylum were Calypso (TM2) is waiting for you (His Blimp is parked outside) and grants your wish.

When you win with a Black world character you end up in Calypso's blimp (Where you end up beating Calypso from TM2) you see your character in front of a crashed blimp with Calypso (TMB) waiting for you to grant your wish.

OK that is the template for the game and its story I will post specific endings for each character later. Any thoughts on a Calypso vs Calypso story?
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Re: Twisted Metal Calypso vs Calypso
Reply #1 - 07/21/10 at 08:40:26
 
tmfan89 wrote on 07/21/10 at 06:13:45:
This Twisted Metal game centers around the Twisted Metal Universes of Black and TM2. It assumes Black won TMB and it shows the ending of Black from TMB but expanded to show Calypso (TMB) saying that was close too close I guess I have to get more from the asylum to kill him.

Then you see is Calypso from TM2 saying "I guess I will have to send in more to kill that bastard". Now you see is the Drivers from TM2 (The iconic ones) Axel (TMB Axel was quite as good), Thumper, Sweet Tooth (More clown like version), Warthog (TMB version not quite as good), Outlaw (TMB version not as good), Grasshopper, Hammerhead, Mr.Slam, and Roadkill standing in front of Calypso.

Calypso promises a wish to anyone that can kill the Calypso from the Dark Universe. Then you see Calypso (TMB) in the asylum walking through each cell (What Calypso promises them is explained in their prologue)

The characters representing the TMB universe are Sweet Tooth (More psychotic version), Mr.Grimm, Darkside (Dollface version), Specter (Crazy Bitch version, and 4 new characters.

16 characters all together 4 new ones to kinda mix things up with 3 unlock-ables (Black, Minion, and Calypso who is the final boss).

As far as the levels go you have the dark world of TMB and the colorful world of TM2. The dark characters start off in the asylum and make their way to the portal to the colorful world (With Minion guarding each gate). Then they make their way through the colorful world.

The colorful world characters start in the colorful world and make their way through to the Black world. It makes more sense because it would lead to good creativity in level design but back to the story.

When being a color world character you end up in the Asylum and end up fighting Calypso (TMB) then once you beat Calypso (TMB) you drive out to the outside of the Asylum were Calypso (TM2) is waiting for you (His Blimp is parked outside) and grants your wish.

When you win with a Black world character you end up in Calypso's blimp (Where you end up beating Calypso from TM2) you see your character in front of a crashed blimp with Calypso (TMB) waiting for you to grant your wish.

OK that is the template for the game and its story I will post specific endings for each character later. Any thoughts on a Calypso vs Calypso story?



Awsome idea. But how do we tell the two Sweet Tooths apart, and about Roadkill, who's driving?
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Reply #2 - 07/21/10 at 21:28:32
 
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Awsome idea. But how do we tell the two Sweet Tooths apart, and about Roadkill, who's driving?


Roadkill is Marcus Kane. And the two Sweet Tooths one would be the more psychotic fatter version from Black who drives a upright Ice-cream truck (Like he had in his special weapon from Black).

The other Sweet Tooth from the colorful world drives the standard Ice-Cream truck and is more of a clown as seen in TM2.
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Reply #3 - 07/23/10 at 08:01:12
 
Here is a story for one of the Black World Drivers.

1- Specter (Driven by a crazy bitch)
Prologue- Calypso is seen entering her cell and she talks about how all she wants is her life back (Flash back) it then shows her with a loving husband and kids. She says "But like that it was all gone in an instant". "I was framed for killing them I swear I didn't do it. But whoever did frame me did a good job I ended up here" (As she is saying that you see newspaper headlines stating women kills family).

"Calypso promises me my life back to the way it was as long as I kill this man. Then that is what I must do."

Middle - As I am about to enter this new world I sit back and think of that day when it all changed. I wounder who framed me or if I did it, its been so long and there has been so many medications (You then see a flashback of her getting electro-shock treatment and pills shoved down her throat) I don't know what is real anymore.

End- I have won I have killed this worlds Calypso and now I want my prize I want my life back to the way it was. Calypso then says very well then I will take you back to the time before the murders. It then shows her in a studio apartment with pictures of a family (One she is not in).

She says "Now I remember it wasn't my family I wasn't framed at all I killed them because they were so happy I couldn't stand how in this black and bleak world they got to be the ones who got the happy ending, the pills and the meds made me think it was my family and that I had been framed well screw them this time I won't get thrown into that asylum" (You then see her grab a knife and a picture of the family and run off).
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Reply #4 - 07/23/10 at 08:03:38
 
Nice. I love the idea of these two worlds colliding. A new and fresh idea, different from the standard TM black 2 stories around here. Can't wait to see where you'll be going with this.
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Reply #5 - 07/23/10 at 20:24:35
 
Here is a story for one of the characters in the colorful world

Thumper (Same driver from TM 1 and 2) But you see that he has a lot of scars and burn marks nothing deforming but noticeable that he has been through and survived 2 TM contests.

Prologue- It starts with him saying that "I wish I never entered in this contest. It has consumed me, the first time I entered I wanted my girl back and I wanted revenge, the second time I entered so I can rule the world. Now look at me I have all these scars and burns I barely survived with my life and nothing to show for it but an addiction,

I wish I could stop I really do but there is something about this contest the only way I am going to stop is to wish I never entered it in the first place" (As he is saying this you see gameplay footage from the first two Twisted Metals with Thumper as the car)

Middle- "I am about to enter what Calypso said is a dark world, I find it hard to believe that there is a world darker then the one I am already in. Yet there is a part of me that can't wait to go in there and see more Twisted Metal and carnage. I hate that part of me yet it consumes me"

Ending- You see the dark Calypso's car blow up in the Asylum. Sitting outside of the Asylum with his blimp parked out front is the colorful world Calypso he say to Thumper "You have killed him what is your request" Thumper says "I wish I never entered this contest" Calypso says "Very well then I can't stop you from doing that but are you sure that is what you want I know you love my game"

Thumper says "I do love you game but I understand that it will kill me one day I need you to make it so that I never entered it in the first place" Calypso says that " Calypso says "Very well then your wish is granted".

You then see Thumper in his run down apartment with his friends. They are talking about how to get his girlfriend back. They mention to him about Calypso and TM. He tells them "That shit isn't for me guys I don't think we can really win that game and get what we want" It then fades to black and says 1 year later.

You see Calypso standing over a grave that reads Thumpers name he says "Gun down by the very contest he once was a competitor in a sad and ironic way to go but he was one of the very best drivers to ever play the game, I guess the contest was going to kill him either way" You then see him drop a black rose on to his grave.  
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Reply #6 - 07/23/10 at 20:49:29
 
I loved it. And if you can change the narration a little, it will be perfect.
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Reply #7 - 07/26/10 at 02:14:17
 
Reebok wrote on 07/23/10 at 20:49:29:
I loved it. And if you can change the narration a little, it will be perfect.


How was the narration for the specific car stories I tried to make it a little simpler.
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Reply #8 - 07/28/10 at 01:20:46
 
Another Driver story

Axle (Same driver from TM2)

You see him in a broken version of his two wheeled car and a doctor/mechanic repairing it for him in a dark warehouse. "I failed to win the contest and it almost cost me my life, all I have now is my machine and it will let me kill that other Calypso and claim my prize". The doctor then says to him "Just remember all I ask is that you let me see your fathers designs and let me keep your vehicle once you are done with it".

Middle

You see him standing outside the portal to the dark world. "In last years competition I was so close until that freak in the ice cream truck got me from behind" (You then see a flashback to last years contest were Axle kills the color universes Specter and then you see Sweet Tooth pull around the corner and blast him throwing him into a building and leaving him near death).

That was when the good doctor found me. Then you hear the doctor saying "I recognize that design its one of your fathers very brilliant as usual I think I have a deal for you". Axle says "I had no choice it was a second chance to get back at my father and I could care less about what other sick and twisted designs he had the doctor could keep those".

Ending

Calypso (Color world) is standing in front of his blimp which is parked out-side of the asylum. Axle says to him "I want the strength to confront my father for what he did to me". Very well your wish is granted.

You then see Axle approach his father he rips his arms out of Axle and says "This what you did to me all those years of suffering and now I am free you are no longer my father and now I will get my revenge your judgement day is here I will now reciprocate all the suffering you brought on to me in one fell swoop"

You see Axle aiming his machine guns towards his father (His legs are still in the machine). Then his father says "I knew you were one of my better designs and I knew you might actually win that contest how stupid do you think I am". You then see the doctor come out in a machine that looks like an upgraded version of Axle and blasts Axle.

Axle is on the ground tipped over and now you see (From Axle's first person perspective) Axle's dad talking to him

"You were designed to win the Twisted Metal contest, your vehicle was light years ahead of any of the other contestants. I even trained you to win the contest, but like a baby you thought I was too hard on you. I locked you in the vehicle to teach you to be one with it but you must have forgotten all of that. I would have gladly stepped into the machine but I needed someone younger and stronger to man it"

"My design was so great that even after 10 years and incomplete training you were still able to win. Well while you were hiding and not being a man I was building another machine that would destroy you and win the contest many times over"

The Doctor then begins to speak "I thought I could rebuild you and take your dads designs but then out of the blue he called me he said he knew of my intentions and that he had a proposition for me".

Axle's dad then begins to speak "You were always a disappointment to me you could have been the greatest but instead you were weak". Axle's eyes close and it goes black.
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Reply #9 - 07/28/10 at 05:06:06
 
TMB Driver story Darkside (Driver is a man in a dark suite only known as Mr.Ash)

You see the Dark world's Calypso walking through the cells of the asylum.   You then hear Mr.Ash saying "I knew this man could give me what I wanted. I knew he could hand me Back what was mine. I was sent to this world to retrieve him but I was screwed over and ended up here"

"But if I have to kill this other Calypso to get it back then that is what I will do"

Middle

"I didn't want to kill Minion but it had to be done he stood in my way" You then see a flashback were Mr.Ash is seen making a deal with the Color worlds Calypso. "We had a deal I helped make this contest what it is, but Calypso couldn't handle a darker world with a darker Calypso so he used what wasn't his to take care of it".

"My search for him took me to this universe were I was screwed over by the man who says he can help me (You then see Mr.Ash getting knocked out by the explosion in Black's ending in TM Black he then wakes up in the asylum) but I will deal with him at another time"

Ending

He kills Calypso from TM2 and you see Ash in front of Calypso's (TM2) blimp. "I did what you asked I killed him". Calypso from TM Black points to a crate and begins to walk away. Mr.Ash opens the crate and a man in a gimp outfit is inside in a cage.

After a few seconds Mr.Ash realizes that its not black in that cage. He then looks and Calypso (TM Black) is nowhere to be found. Mr.Ash then says "They are always the same they bicker between each other and they always want what isn't theirs and each time I have to take care of it".
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Reply #10 - 08/05/10 at 23:00:13
 
More Driver stories

Color World Car Grasshopper (Driver Krista Sparks)

Prologue- "The LAPD thought that they could use a robot of me to get to my father well little did they know I never died (You see Krista in a car crash as a young child with her face burnt up and torn apart). My father disappeared and my mom was dead."

"I dawned this mask (The Dollface mask) to hide my face I am not like my father I can not embrace my deformities. I will kill this other Calypso so that I can get my face back and be daddies little girl."

Middle

"My father doesn't know who I am thanks to this mask. The only way I can get my father to know who I am is to wish for my face back. I know he will notice who I am"

Ending

You see her approaching Calypso outside of the asylum. Calypso says "Thank you for killing him what is your wish" Grasshopper says "I wish to get my face back to what it was" Calypso says "Very well then your wish is granted take off your mask".

Grasshopper takes off her mask to reveal Krista Sparks with a fully normal face. She says "Do you know who I am?" Calypso says "I am not falling for this again oh the LAPD thinks they can kill me this way again." Calypso pulls out a gun and shoots her.

Krista says "Daddy I am not a robot I wasn't sent here to kill you I just wanted to get my face back so you would know who I am" Calypso says "Oh my God what have I done I shot my own daughter". Krista says "Just tell me one thing daddy why did you disappear after the car accident?"

Calypso says "I thought you and your mother were both dead you two were my world I had to get revenge on the world for what it took from me so I began on the warpath to start my contest" Krista says "Just hold me daddy I will be with mommy soon". all you see is Calypso holding on to her and the screen goes to black.
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Reply #11 - 08/05/10 at 23:58:29
 
the stories are good, the only problem is that they feel too fast, like it's one big sentence, although, it's partially because I read in terms of what the grammar shows, and there are a lot of missing things

but like I said, from what I understand, the stories are pretty good
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Reply #12 - 08/06/10 at 06:28:52
 
Jironobou wrote on 08/05/10 at 23:58:29:
the stories are good, the only problem is that they feel too fast, like it's one big sentence, although, it's partially because I read in terms of what the grammar shows, and there are a lot of missing things

but like I said, from what I understand, the stories are pretty good


I wanted to keep it simple tell it as a narrative with only essential action shots explained. In TM the stories are rarely over 1-2 minutes so I didn't want to do over the top stories for each driver.

Thanks for the feed back I will try to make it so that you can catch your breath and add in more descriptions.
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Reply #13 - 08/11/10 at 07:16:09
 
Character Story

Sweet Tooth Twisted Metal Black

Prologue

"I almost killed Calypso right when he approached me. But he had the only thing in the world I cared about and that was my little brother. I could tell Calypso wasn't bluffing I had to play his game for now but it will only make killing him and this other him even better"

Middle

"My father was a messed up man he took my brother away from me. He told my brother that I was dangerous and that I would kill him. And now that freak Calypso has him I am going to get him back then kill that bastard"

Ending

You see Calypso (TMB) with a young boy standing outside of were Calypso (TM2) blimp has crashed Sweet Tooth says "I killed now give me my brother back" Calypso releases hold of Charlie Kane then you see Charlie punch Calypso in the balls then Charlie runs over to Sweet Tooth. Charlie says "I knew you would come"

Then Sweet Tooth takes out a machete and kills him. He then runs over to Calypso who is still on the ground from the punch and kills him. "Well what did you expect its what I do".
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Reply #14 - 08/20/10 at 07:49:35
 
New Character story

(Character from the Dark World) Postal driven by David Newman (He is a balding slightly fat middle aged white guy who wears a tattered postal uniform)

David "I use to deliver the mail but one day the mail killed her"

(The camera shows a women opening up a package with Calypso as the return address and it blows up)

David "I loved her she was the prettiest women on my route I wanted to marry her"

(You see him spying on her as she undresses, then you see him in his apartment with pictures of her nude and other pictures of her that he took spying on her)

David "Then one day I wanted to kill the mail for killing her"

(You see him shooting up the post office)

David "Calypso says he can find me the man that killed her and make him pay and all I have to do is kill this man"

MIDDLE

David "I almost feel bad for what I did to the people at the post office, they were my coworkers and the closest thing I had to friends"

(The camera shows him getting a birthday cake at the post office)

David "But I had to do what I had to do they had to pay for taking her away from me. It was the God dam mail that killed her the mail that I delivered"

ENDING

(The camera shows him sitting out side of were Calypso from TM2 blimp has crashed)

David "You know what I want I just want you to make the mail stop just make it so that there is some justice in this dark world"

(You see Calypso throw him a burnt up package with his name on it)

David "It was you, you killed her but why, was it just to get another contestant in you contest?"

(You then see Calypso breakout a gun and point it at him)

David "We are human beings we aren't just some toys you can have you way with so you can get more drivers in your contest go ahead kill me but one day you will pay for all the lives you ruined just so you can let your puppets dance for you".

(Calypso shoots David and walks away with a smile).
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