White Knight

Driver: Cage

Cage is a serial killer known in the parts of Midtown.  Alway feeling remorse after killing a taxi driver in front of his son, he cries every time he kills another person. he entered the Midtown contest to fix that, but pulled out when after he killed some of the contestants, he found he got over his emoptional problems. Afterwards, he started killing and becoming the F.B.I.'s second most wanted criminal, surpassing Calypso after his rumored death at the hands of Sweet Tooth.

Vehicle:  White Knight

This is Cage's vehicle he built for the Midtown contest.  He took a station wagon and ripped off the body, then welded it into a pair of tank threads and reworked the wiring to make it run.  White Knight's Special Weapon is a cannon that shoots fireballs do damge as well as set the oponent on fire at the result of a direct hit.

PROLOGUE:

Cage:  Once, I was a killer cursed with uncontrollable sorrow.

(Camera pans to the middle of a desert landscape where White Knight lays  It is covered in blood and burn marks. Camera pans to inside the vehicle where Cage sits.)

Cage:  But after that contest, despite me forfeiting when that pig's helicopter came at me and the clown freak, I felt I overcame my pitful emotional problem.

(Camera pans to White Knight fleeing when Warhawk and Sweet Toth faced off, then back at Cage.)

Cage: Ever since, I had went on with my killing ways, eventually climbing up the spots of the FBI's most wanted list.

(Camera pans to Cage killing some peoplem the at the FBI Most Wanted list, where Cage is at the number two spot beside Needles' photo.)

Cage:  Unfortunatly, that clown freak is still doing better than me.  He's at the top of the list, where I am now behind him.)

(Camera fades to black.)

Cage: But one day, this would all change.)

Cage is seen facing Calypso, who stands near White Knight's driver side window.)

Cage:  It was Calypso.  Last I heard about him, he was killed by whoever won his contest.  He said he knows Sweet Tooth is coming to enter his contest, and if I win, I'd meet him face-to-face.

(Camera pans to Cage's face close-up.)

Cage: Well, this is a nice prize to get if I survive.  Not only will I prove I'm superior to that clown freak, but I will soon surpass him.

(Camera shows Cage and Calypso shaking hands, then shows White Knight speeding past a road sign saying "Welcome To Harbor City".)

Cage: How could I refuse? I agreed to play.

(Camera cuts to black.  End movie.)

MIDDLE:

(Minion explodes.  As pieces of the tank fly into the air, a huge pieces flies up and hits White Knight, knocking Cage out.)

Cage: it has been a while since I slept.  Being on the run from the people who want you behind bars is a big task indeed.

(Camera shows Cage slumped over the wheel as he speaks.)

Cage: As I was sleeping, the dreams began.  Bad at first, but turning good.

(Camera shows Cage standing o the streets.)

Cage:  It all began when Imanaged to kill some unlucky punk and was looking for a escape.  So I decided to hire a cab.

(Camera pans to Cage getting into a cab, seeing Charlie Kane and Son.)

Cage:  The cabie had his little shit riding with him, which was odd. When he figured out who I was, I had to act fast before he could contact the police.

(Camera pans to Cage shooting Charlie in the head.  The blood spewed as Charlie fell dead.  Son watched in horror as Cage kicked the door opened and ran out of the cab and away from the scene.)

Cage:  And that was when it began.  Even though the brat was too traumatized to tell the pigs who killed his pop, the look in his eyes over his father getting gunned down would start to haunt me.

(Camera shows Cage throwing a woman down the rooftop of Midtown as he sheds a tear.)

Cage:  This is not how a serial killer should act.  Hell, that clown freak who was locked in that asylum at the time had no emotion towards any of his victims, and that was what I wanted.

(Cage is seen facing Calypso.)

Cage: That was when Calypso appeared.  He said I was crying because of that memory ruining a part of my brain, and if I entered and won, he would remove that part.

(Camera shows White Knight in the rooftops seeing Sweet Tooth destroying Brimstone as Yellow Jacket came in.)

Cage:  At what was to be the final battle, I saw the clown get his so-called revenge as a taxi cab came in.  It looked familiar, and I knew it was happening.

(Camera shows Charlie Kane's corpse, now remote-controlled by Son, who is hiding from sight, is seen, and Cage is shown shedding tears.)

Cage: Jesus, that cabbie must've rose from the dead, and is seeking revenge on me for what I done.  For now, I put my emotions on the side.  I can't let them get in my way of fighting what was left.

(White Knight and Yellow Jacket are seen fighting, but soon, White Knight is sen cooking the flamethrower which short circuits and destroys the antenna on Charlie's head.)

Cage: I killed him again, but this time, I didn't cry.  Somehow, I must've overcome my problem by killing the undead freak who caused it to happen.

(Camera pans to Sweet Tooth finishing Yellow Jacket off as White Knight escapes safely from the rooftops, as Warhawk spots Sweet Tooth.)

Cage:  No longer  having any reason to compete, I forfeited the contest.  I left the clown to the pig in the helicopter, but I knew he would take him out.

(Camera pans to Cage looking in his rear-view mirror which shows Warhawk exploding.  Camera cuts to black.)

Cage:  Ever since, I was now an emotionless killing machine. With rumors of Calypso's death, I would take his place as the FBI's second most wanted.

(Cage is seen waking up.)

Cage:  But I won't rest until I am number one.

(The arena doors open as White Knight is seen speeding out of the arena.  End movie.)

EPILOGUE:

(Dark Tooth explodes, the ice cream cone warhead detonating.  White Knight escapes the area as a purple mushrom cloud envelopes the area.)

Cage:  I had won the contest.

(Camera shows Cage seeing Calypso, who sits on his throne of car parts.)

Cage:  I went to Calypso and asked for my prize. It was time I ended my rivalry with Sweet Tooth.

(Camera cuts to Needles Kane chained to the floor.)

Cage:  Calypso delivered, and he made so the clwon had no chance to escape.

(White Knight is seen facing Needles Kane as the flamethrower from TM:B comes out.)

Cage: I heard the stories, of how he was cursed with the flames of Hell from that insane preacher he killed in the last contest.  I asked him how the flames were nowadays.)

Needles; Oh, my curse? It no longer bothers me.  It no longer hurts when they flare up. They have become a part of me.

(Cage pushes a button and the flamethrower is turned on. Camera goes black as Needles is heard screaming.)

Cage: His screams bring joy to my ears.  It was like those flames hurt him all over again.

(Camera pans to White Knight in a dark alleyway, Cage holding the burnt clown mask.)

Cage:  Now he and his brothers were dead.  That little shit was the pilot of that Dark Tooth crap, and he's dead, and I have no regrets for that.

(Cage throws the clown mask away as White Knight speeds off.)

Cage: And now that my most hated obstacle is burnt to a crisp, I will become the best killer history has ever seen.

(Camera cuts to logo.   Then credits roll as "Back In Black" by AC/DC plays and scenes from all charcter movies play.)

Niice. I liked how he was the one who killed Charlie Kane, and his story works perfectly with the original Black, and you added some stuff. Well done. The ending was nothing unexpected, but that's certainly not a bad thing (I do enjoy a good twist though, but that's just me). Well done

Impressive.

Very good although I would have had added a little bit of a revenge plot having Charlie Kane pick up the mask and seek revenge on him (But having him be the Dark Tooth driver isn't a bad story either). But you tied in a lot of your story of how TMB shakes out to this story. All in all it was a nice fan fic.