[size=20]Madilim[/size]

Driver: Bane Lorai

Bane is Kelly's (Rave's, Shadow, friend) brother. When he heard that she died on that faithful day by those jerkoff boys, he went into a complete depression state that no one could break him out of. One day, when the eighteen year old boy was walking, he met up with those jerkoffs and they started messing with him, picking on him about his sister and how he's just another witch, just like her. He had enough from them and grabbed the closet thing and started beating them to near death. Days later, cops came to his house and without warning or questions, they arrested him and he's been in an asylum ever since.

Car: Madilim (Dark)

Madilim is a small, black painted exotic car and is easy to miss because of its high speed. It was compunded and planned to be used as a new police car. It's special is is that it shoots ten very small, very fast, and very accurate black fire missle that either explode on contact or explode by remote control. After exploding, if it had it someone, the black fire will spread and burn the car, otherwise it will just deal damage to the nearest opponent(s).

[b][color=#ff0000][center][size=20]Prologue:[/size][/center][/color][/b]

Why did they take you away from me, sister?

(Camera pans to Blackfield Asylum sign. Then camera pans through desert as Bane speaks)

And those cops... how dare they... As if they never wanted revenge as well...

(Camera slams through the security gate. gets to the front of the Asylum and goes inside.)

People and their self believes... it drives me nuts...

(Gets to the SWAT person and the run-down cell, the door having "C-1" on it. Then goes inside and shows the eighteen year old boy sitting on the ground with his back up against the wall, looking dead with blood on his shirt, pants, and hand, but no where else. Some was his blood, but most wasn't.)

Sister... please come back... I'll do whatever it takes to bring you back... I swear.

(Flashes to Bane knocking the crap out of the jerkoffs that killed his sister.)

Then one day, I had a visitor.

(Shows Bane standing up and looking at Calypso with a smoking gun in his hand and a dead SWAT guard outside.)

If I heard right, his name was Calypso, and he said something about a contest or something... wasn't really paying attation... until he mentioned my sister.

(Gets a closer look at Calypso, showing all the cuts and scars on his face.)

He said if I won this contest, he would bring my sister back to life... for a cost.

(Goes over to Bane as he has a serious look on his face.)

I told him I didn't care what the price was and that I would do the contest... there was one problem though...

(Flashes Raven's face.)

Shadow... but I still didn't care... if she got in my way I would take her out... but I wouldn't kill her, just disable her.

(It shows the outside of Blackfield Asylum as Madilim is seen busting though the security gate and driving towards the camera, then is gone.)

Sister... we will be reunited, I promise.

(Camera goes black. End video.)


[b][color=#ff0000][center][size=20]Middle:[/size][/center][/color][/b]

(Minion explodes.  As pieces of the tank fly around, one big piece flies up and hits Madilim, knocking Bane out.)

That stubborn tank... even after it dies it still wants to hurt me... Whatever... it was a nice sleep I've had for a while... until the dreams came...

(Camera goes to Bane and you see him knocked out and slumped over the wheel. Madilim is surrounded by flames from the fight.)

It was more like a memory than a dream really... I remember it all... the news, the effect it had on me... all of it.

(A flash back to when Bane had locked himself in the room and he stares out the window.)

Some day I believed I saw her... and it broke my heart again...

(Tears going down Bane's face. He is then seen talking to a therapist.)

My parents told me that I had to talk to someone and get over this overwelheming sadness... those uncaring people...

(Bane is seen walking out of the therapist office.)

And as for him... I told him that he didn't know what it was like... none of them did... and the worst came...

(Bane is walking outside, then is shoved to the ground by the two boys that killed his sister.)

They pushed me around, called me a crybaby, I really didn't care what they called me... until they started talking about my sister being a witch and calling me one too. Thats when it happened...

(Camera shows Bane grabbing a thick and big stick, then going and beating the two boys to near death. They are covered in their own blood, and so was Bane.)

They got what they diserved.. but apparently no one else thought that...

(Days later, cops bust down his door and rush into his room, batons ready and hitting him until his was on the ground unconscious.)

And the dreams stop there... you know... is all this bloodshed really needed for just one life?

(The gate opens up.)

I think it is...

(Madilim is seen driving out of the arean.)

(Camera goes black. End video.)

[b][color=#ff0000][center][size=20]Epilogue:[/size][/center][/color][/b]

(Dark Tooth explodes, the ice cream cone warhead detonating. Madilim escapes as a purple mushrom cloud envelopes the area.)

It was over... I've defeated them all...

(Bane is standing near Calypso's throne made from a destroyed stadium stand and a wrecked car held up by chains connected by the stand so that the car doesn't roll away.)

It was time for Calypso to pay up... keep his end of the deal.

(The camera got close to Calypso's face)

He asked me if I really wanted this prize and told me that the cost was great.

(Goes to Bane's face with a look of curiousness on it.)

I asked him what the cost was. What I needed to pay for this to work.

(Calypso grinned and raised his, telling Bane what it was, but you can't hear him.)

N-No! Wait, what? My soul!? It had to be dragged to hell without any possible return!? I-I...

(Calypso's face turns serious as mist goes around his hand and it glows an errie dark red.)

He told me it was either that, or all this work and all this wanting would be for nothing... so I agreed. Moments later, I heard her... or I should say them screaming in happiness to see each other again.

(The camera goes over to Raven and Kelly hugging each other and the both of them looking so happy.)

I couldn't believe it, there she was.

(Bane walks over to the two girls. Raven gets all defencive, but Kelly smiles and runs over to Bane and hugs him lovingly. Raven quickly get out of her defencive mood and looking at Bane and Kelly, smiling softly.)

I couldn't help it... I was crying again... damn it...

(Tears are falling from Bane's face as he hugs her back, then lets go and takes a step back. Then a very long, very thick chain shoots out from the gates that lead to Calypso's lair and it wraps around Bane's body, then starts to drag him back slowly. Kelly trys to run and grab him from the chain, but Raven holds her back, telling her that it has to be done, but Kelly shakes her head and screams, not wanting him to go.)

Don't worry sister, I'll be ok... I got to see you again... and I'm happy.

(The camera goes to Bane, seeing him smile as he nears the gates.)

Raven... I put her safety in her hands now... please protect her better this time... Goodbye you two...

(He gets dragged all the way in and the gates swing close. Camera cut to logo. The credits roll as "Sinner" by Drowning Pool plays and scenes from all character movies are shown.)


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This is my very first character creation, I hope you like it.
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[size=14]Credit of the layout goes to ThumperMan3000
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Awsome fic, Fox. I think you'll be as good as I am one of these days.

What am I saying? You're already getting as as good as me.

The ending was my favorite part. Well done overall. Where did you get the name Madilim, might I ask?