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ThumperMan3000
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Meat Wagon - Twisted Metal Black 2
06/13/10 at 20:55:55
 
Meat Wagon

Driver: Richard "Dick" Biggs

Dick was one of the best butchers in the city. At the start, he ran afoul of financial difficulties and was met by a colections agent. However, in an act of insanity, Dick killed the agent and out of fear that he could go to jail for the murder, butchered the corpse, destroyed all evidence, and sold the agent's body as a successful food product.

Soon, health inspectors would visit him, and those who gave him a bad rating would meet a grim end.  His new line of meat products was going along quite well, but one night, some business rival found out the secret.

Vehicle: Meat Wagon

This wienermobile was once used for a promotional campagn for Dick's processed meat products. It was impounded after Dick was locked up, as it was used to carry away corpses.  The Special Weapon is something not to behold, as the wiener spins around, knocking any vheicle it makes contact with into the air.

PROLOGUE:

Dick: I almost got away with it.

(Camera pans to Blackfield Asylum sign , then it starts going through the desert.)

Dick:  I had the perfect recipe for success, and some rival found out about it and blew the whistle.

(Camera slams through the security gates and faces the asylum.)

Dick: I killed him, but not until they came.

(Camera then goes down ahallway, passing a SWAT Team cop holding arifle, and facing a cell door marked "C-1 Solitary".  It enters to se a short man with red hair, wearing a suit with a bloody apron.  Over his face is a hockey mask.)

Dick:  Because of those dirty rats, my business has been shut down for what they call "criminal activities".  But they should've kept out of it.

(Camera flashes a scene of Dick killing a man, then back at him.)

Dick: But one day, I had a visitor.

(Camera pans to show Calypso facing Dick.)

Dick: I knew Calypso by what the news reports said. hell, the new reports said he was supposedly killed by that clown freak after Midtown was blown to shit so hard, it was now a ruined ghost town.  He wanted me to be in his infamous contest.  If I won, I would get the payback my heart is bleeding for.

(Camera pans to a close-up of Dick's face.)

Dick: In my case, first place means that those corperate bastards who spilled my secret to the police will become dead meat.

(Camera shows Dick shaking Calypso's hand, then it cuts outside the asylum as Meat Wagon is seen speeding out.)

Dick:  Now that's a risky business deal I'm willing to take.

(Camera cuts to black.  End movie.)

MIDDLE:

(Minion explodes. As pieces of the tank are seen flying, one big piece hits Meat Wagon, knocking Dick out.)

Dick:  Ouch.  That bitch's tank hurt. But now I know how it feels to have a sledgehammer hit my head.

(Camera shows Dick slumped behind the wheel as he speaks.)

Dick:  As I layed there, knocked out cold, I remembered everything.

(Camera pans to Dick in normal business clothes looking over a factory.)

Dick: I ran a meat processing plant.  It started out not so succesful.

(A tax collector came and warned Dick.)

Dick: So unsuccessful, that the collections agency sent an agent to take it away. As he warnd me not to interfere with his work, I lost it there.

(Dick is seen grabbing a sledgehammer and swinging it into the tax collector's head.)

Dick:  I killed him, and I knew I would definatly face the death penalty for my actions.  I had to get rid of the collector's dead body, and fast.

(Camera pans to Dick dragging the body to a room and making it into meat products.)

Dick:  Thankfully, the dead bastard would help revitalize my business, and in a big way.

(Soon, the products were seen on shelves, and Dick was seen in the money.)

Dick: I saw how much dough I was raking, so I managed to get more dead bodies to make more of this money making idea.

(Camera pans to show a health inspector giving the facotry a failing grade.)

Dick: And those pesky health inspectors are not a problem.

(Camera pans to show Dick shoving the inspector into a meat grinder. Camera goes black as he falls in.)

Dick: I was able to use threats to tell the other inspectors to keep quiet, and if they infotmed their superiors of my actions towards them, they would suffer the same fate as that unlucky bastard.

(Camera pans to a worker going through the secrets.)

Dick: One night, during the late night shift, a spy posing as a worker got hold of my actions. I managed to chase him off and take him out, but not before it happened.

(Dick is seen stabbing the spy with the butcher's knife, only to be shot down by a on-duty cop, who sees the secrets and arrests him while he was unconsious.)

Dick: The police were shocked that I killed their own and rigged the health inspections. I was sentenced to life in the asylum without a trial while my factory was shut down and planned to be demolished to make way for what they called a "more legit business".

(Camera shows Dick waking up.)

Dick: But soon, whoever sent that spy will be joining him in Hell.

(The arena doors open as Meat Wagon is seen speeding out.)

EPILOGUE:

(Dark Tooth explodes, the ice cream cone warhead detonating. Meat Wagon escapes as a mushroom cloud envelopes the area.)

Dick: My opposition was now reduced to dead meat, and I won the contest.

(Camera pans to Dick facing Calypso, who sits on his throne of car parts.)

Dick:  I visited Calypso.  He asked if I was ready for a little vengance?

(Camera pans to a man tied above a meat grinder that's active. His mouth has duck tape over it, muffling his screams.)

Dick:  Yeah, I knew the bastard. He was the owner of a rival meat processing plant, and he wanted to know my sucess.

(Camera pans to Dick's face close-up.)

Dick:  He was relieved to se my arrest and the shutdown of my factory, knowing my practices were fishy.  Calypso had one other bonus.

(Camera pans to Mr. Grimm coming out through the shadows.)

Dick:  My God, wasn't he one of my opponents? That skull-wearing pyscho on the motorcycle? Calypso said he helped him survive because he was my favorite customer.

(Mr. Grimm and Dick shake hands.)

Dick:  Wow, I wouldn't mind this cannibal as a business partner.  Now, to kick off this new deal.

(Dick is given Mr. Grimm's cleaning scythe and he throws it at the rope holding the president.  The man falls into the meat grinder, camera goes black as he enters as the sound of grinding his heard.)

Dick: Wow, that bastard sure made some good sausage.  I took the new meat and headed out, as my vehicle was loaded with the dead bodies of the other contestants.

(Camera shows Meat Wagon speeding off as Dick speaks.)

Dick:  And with the self-proclaimed Mr. Grimm as my enforcer, this time, I'll make sure no one knows my plans, since the cops who figured it out were all dead.

(Camera cuts to logo.  Then credits roll as "Back In Black" by AC/DC plays and scenes from all character movies are shown.)
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Re: Meat Wagon - Twisted Metal Black 2
Reply #1 - 06/13/10 at 21:25:22
 
awsome! Great wrighting, definently better than mine, and I like how you can make these regular characters Black...
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Reply #2 - 06/13/10 at 22:19:19
 
Mr.SLaM wrote on 06/13/10 at 21:25:22:
awsome! Great wrighting, definently better than mine, and I like how you can make these regular characters Black...


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Re: Meat Wagon - Twisted Metal Black 2
Reply #3 - 06/13/10 at 23:25:45
 
I like the fact that he has Mr. Grimm as a enforcer.
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Re: Meat Wagon - Twisted Metal Black 2
Reply #4 - 06/14/10 at 00:03:30
 
Ahhhhh that was beast. You unlocked his full potential as a black character. The perfect amount of sick disgustingness. And the ending was good too, I liked how Mr. Grimm was his customer. ANd the meat puns were good too
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Re: Meat Wagon - Twisted Metal Black 2
Reply #5 - 06/14/10 at 01:41:52
 
Really?  That's great.  I thought someone like Richard "Dick" Biggs would be a perfect fit, being a butcher and all.
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Re: Meat Wagon - Twisted Metal Black 2
Reply #6 - 06/22/10 at 01:43:42
 
Heh. That was pretty cool man. I liked that.

Good work man.
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