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06/04/10 at 08:24:47
 
Name: Jason Michael “Stuntman”

Age: 34

Diagnostic: Killer

Treatment: Nothing. Extremely dangerous

History: He once was a stuntman famous for surviving some accidents where others would have died. He was aiming to make his own movie, but his family was killed and he was pointed as the culprit and was locked away in the Blackfield Asylum.

Vehicle: Stuntman

A fifth-generation Ford Mustang armed with 2 M134's, missiles and napalm for attack, as well as a 6-inch thick steel plate on the rear bumper called "Stuntman". This car is the Frankenstein’s Monster original one from the 2008 film “Death Race”, but with a few upgrades and guns. His special can make a double of the car and attack his enemies, but unfortunately the copy only has 1/5 of the original life bar, and there can only be one at once. It needs 2:30 minutes to reload.

Prologue:

Jason: They all think that I’m crazy.

(Camera pans to the Blackfield Asylum sign.  Camera scrolls through the desert)

Jason: Maybe it’s true, but aren’t we all a little crazy?

(Camera slams through the security fence and reaches the run-down building)

Jason: I lost all what was important for me: My job, my family, my fame… But I know that the one who took all from me is still free out there.

(Camera is seen going down a hallway full of cells.  It passes a guard reading a newspaper to a door marked "C-3 Solitary". It enters to see a man with a black leather jumpsuit and a metal mask with some kind of scar.)

Jason: Since I was locked here I could only think about one thing: vengeance.

(Screen fades to black)

Jason: But one day, he came to visit me.

(Camera shows Calypso with a scar in his neck left by Sweet Tooth near the cell door, now open.)

Jason: He said that his name was Calypso.

(Jason is seen facing Calypso in his padded cell)

Jason: He told me that was running a contest, and he wanted me to play. He also told me that he could help me with my vengeance if I won his contest.

(Shot of Calypso shaking hand with Jason)

Jason: I knew he wasn’t a good guy, but sometimes you must make a deal with the devil to achieve justice.

(Jason is seen receiving a pair of car keys. Then it cuts to outside the asylum as Frankenstein’s Monster is seen speeding through, then slamming through the security fence)
Jason: Why waste the only chance I had to kill the bastard who ruined my life?


(Cut to black. End movie)


Level 1 – Stadium Slaughter: I remember being here a lot of time ago making a film. Those where the times.

Level 2 – Suburban Terror: This was my neighborhood, but soon it will only be a mountain of dust.

Level 3 – China Town: I always hated this part of the city. I’m gonna enjoy the destruction of all these buildings.

Level 4 – Construction Yard: It’s a shame that we are gonna destroy these buildings even before they are finished.

Level 5 –Minion Stadium: So this is the famous demon of Twisted Metal? Well, a demon doesn’t have any chance against a monster.


Middle:

(Camera shows Minion exploding. As pieces of the tank fly into the air, one big piece flies up and hits Frankenstein’s Monster, knocking out Jason)

Jason: That damned bastard managed to hit me even after I sent him straight to hell.

(Camera shows Frankenstein’s Monster surrounded in flames, then it cuts to Jason slumped behind the wheel as he is heard speaking)

Jason: As all was fading to black, I was remembering my life as a stuntman…

(Camera shows a video of Jason driving a car through an Arabian market while he manages to avoid a lot of obstacles and the cameras film him)

Jason: I was a professional like no one. The people threatened me as an idol and always asked me autographs.

(Camera shows Jason signing an autograph for two little kids who seem. The boy has a black spiky hair and wears glasses, while the girl has purple hair)

Jason: Yeah, I was famous. And I even had a happy family. Until that day come…

(Camera shows Jason in his room putting on a disguise of Sweet Tooth)

Jason: That day I was going to make a scene in a movie about Sweet Tooth, that famous serial killer. But someone attacked me from behind and knocked me out.

(Jason is seen falling on the ground as the screen fades to black)

Jason: When I woke up, I was in a police car. They accused me of killing my family, but I was innocent. Still, they accused me and locked me in the Asylum with my Death Race outfit to remember that day.

(Camera cuts to Jason waking up, and then showing Stuntman surrounded in flames)

Jason: But I’m gonna win this contest and get the one who killed my family.

(Stuntman is seen leaving the Arena as the camera fades to black. End movie.)


Level 6 - Rooftops: The losers will come down off the building, but they aren’t going to take the elevator or the stairs…

Level 7 – Carnival of Darkness: The old Carnival. The people say that it was abandoned because of a serial killer with a clown face and flames in his head killing people here, but I don’t believe in urban legends.

Level 8 – Waterfront: While I was in my way to the port I was surrounded by a group of idiots. This is gonna be the last error of their short lives.

Level 9 – Death Port: I heard that Calypso was waiting the winner in Harbor City, so I sailed in the first ship I found. Unfortunately I wasn’t the only one to have this idea.

When the ship gets to the city, Iron Maiden goes down in a ramp while the remains of the defeated vehicles fall to the water. While the rest of the drivers are waiting, suddenly, the pieces that have fallen in the water and get together in a big explosion. When the smoke fades away, a monster made with parts of the other vehicles appear. ¡Piecemeal is here!

Level 10 – Piecemeal Beach: This thing is like a Frankenstein car, but still it’s no match against me.

Epilogue:

(Piecemeal explodes and the parts rain from the sky and into the water as Stuntman drives off of the harbor and into town)

Jason: I managed to win this damned contest.

(Stuntman drives to a large garage. Camera shows Jason in front of Calypso sitting in his throne made of broken car parts)

Jason: I faced Calypso and I told him my wish. I wanted to get revenge against the one who killed my family. He agreed with a grin.

(Camera shows Sweet Tooth chained to a wall trying to get free at the end of a ramp with a lot of cars on it, like an exhibition)

Jason: Why I didn’t realize it was him? We always got letters about not finishing the movie because he didn’t want to be portrayed in a film. He knocked me out and then used his own disguise to kill my family and blame me. But my revenge had finally come.

(Camera shows Stuntman jumping the ramp above all those cars and falling over Sweet Tooth as the blood splashes over the camera.

Jason: This bastard was now killed, and Calypso even gave me a bonus.

(Shot of Calypso giving a VHS tape to Jason)

Jason: He has recorded the entire contest, and said that I could make my film with this. He was right.

(Camera shows newspapers saying "Jason "Stuntman" cleared of all the charges. His new movie makes an historical gross the first weekend". Then it changes to show us Stuntman back as it speeds off. Camera will soon cut to logo, and then credits roll as "T.N.T." by AC/DC plays and scenes from all character cut scenes play)

If anyone asks, yeah, this character is like a honoring to Jason Statham. I think it was already clear with the name and his car Tongue And by the way, the two kids who appears in the flashback are a cameo of me and Seiline (If you don't know about it, search "Iron Maiden" in this forum).
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Reply #1 - 06/04/10 at 11:35:46
 
Nice.  I like this one.
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Nice.  I like this one.

Thanks. I hope this one will be better than my first try.
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Reply #3 - 06/04/10 at 20:37:31
 
That was really good. You came up with a really good, yet  not overly complex story for him. Making a movie about sweetooth, then having sweet tooth killing his family so it looks like him, man I really like that. An original idea that I have never seen nor thought of before. The level descriptions were good too, and I liked your level choice. The ending was also good, I liked how he made a movie out of the footage. Very original.

My only criticism is that the format and bosses aren't that original, but that's really minor

Great job Smiley Much better than your first. I anticipate more
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Reply #4 - 06/05/10 at 18:20:26
 
maxamillionaire wrote on 06/04/10 at 20:37:31:
That was really good. You came up with a really good, yet  not overly complex story for him. Making a movie about sweetooth, then having sweet tooth killing his family so it looks like him, man I really like that. An original idea that I have never seen nor thought of before. The level descriptions were good too, and I liked your level choice. The ending was also good, I liked how he made a movie out of the footage. Very original.

My only criticism is that the format and bosses aren't that original, but that's really minor

Great job Smiley Much better than your first. I anticipate more

Thank you a lot. I thought that the character's background would be too used, but I'm glad that in the end you liked it. And yeah, I know that the bosses aren't original, but I'm gonna think about some new bosses, because even that I like Piecemeal and Minion, I think it would be good to have original bosses.
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Reply #5 - 06/06/10 at 15:55:35
 
Pretty cool. I think that was very original.

Nice job.
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