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Bloodhound - Twisted Metal Black 2
05/25/10 at 07:58:59
 
Bloodhound

Driver: Brutal Bunny

Bunny sees herself as destined to become to best beauty queen there ever was.  She has trained long and hard.  One faithful night, she competed in her first-ever beauty contest for Miss Harbor City. She won, but the first runner-up was unhappy about it.  She resorted to poisoning Bunny's prized pet poodle, and planted evidence that Bunny did it. Bunny was soon arrested for the crime she never comitted, and locked up in the asylum as a threat to the public.

Vehicle:  Bloodhound.

Vehicle Looks: Dark pink F-body car.  Engine is sticking out, and a spoiler is on the rear.

This muscle car is Buny's luxorius ride.  It was put in the compund after her arrest and planed to be sold in a police auction.  Beware Bloodhound's Special Weapon.  Calypso had busted out some rabid poodles that were in a dog pound and planned to be put down and did some modifications. When the Special is fired, a pack of these poodle go at the locked target and start clawing at them, until they explode.

PROLOGUE:

Bunny: I am here because of a crime I never comitted.

(Camera pans to Blackfield Asylum sign. Then camera pans through desert as Bunny speaks.)

Bunny: My poor Fifi, someone had the raw nerve to poison her...

(Camera slams through the security gate and stops at the run-down cell.)

Bunny:   And that someone had the intent o make it lok like I did it.

(Camera goes down a hallway of cels and passes a SWAT Team cop holding arifle to face a cell marked (C-1 Solitary".  Camera enters to see a young woman in the cell. She is wearing a black torn dress, black high heel shoes, and has blonde hair coming down to her shoulders.)

Bunny: The damn cops won't allow interviewers in my cell, and when I try to yell the truth about the crime, they come in and beat me.  They even tightened the security of my cell.

(Camera flashes a scene of Buny geting beaten by a group of cops, then back at Bunny.)

Bunny: They put that SWAT Team cop there to warn and shoot anyone who gets near the cell. But one day, his piggish ass got handed to him, as I had a visitor.

(Camera flashes to Calypso holding a smoking gun as we see the SWAT Team cop behind him, dead and bleeding.)

Bunny: The gentleman called himself Calypso, and by the looks of outside the cell, he must've guned down more than that SWAT Team cop to get me.  He claimed to know my problems and invited me to his little contest.  He said he knows the person who did it, and if I won, I'd get revenge for this time of false imprisonment.)

(Camera pans to an image of a poodle, then to Bunny shaking Calypso's hand.)

Bunny: The cops would beat me up for blurting the truth, and because of that, they will never learn right from wrong.  To me, they're worse than all the criminal bastards locked up in this hellhole.

(Camera pans to outside asylum as Bloodhound is seen speding out of the asylum.)

Buny: How could I refuse the chance to get true justice?

(Camera goes black. End video.)

MIDDLE

(Minion explodes.  As pieces of the tank fly around, one big piece flies up and hits Bloodhound, knocking Bunny out.)

Bunny: I was knocked out after defeated that dreaded Minion, but I guess I deserved this beauty sleep.

(Bunny is seen slumped over the wheel as she speaks.)

Buny: But while I slept, I had nightmares, visions of what hapened.

(Camera flashes back to Buny in abeauty contest.)

Bunny: I was once the beauty quen of Harbor City. One night I had won Miss Congeniality, but when I went home, something bad hapened.

(Buny is seen with cops aiming guns at her.)

Bunny: They said I was under arrest for animal abuse, and arned if I said anything, they would shot me.

(Camera pans to Buny in the asylum with adetective.)

Bunny: At the asylum I was locked up in, the detcitve accused me of poisoning my own dog.

(Bunny is seen yeling.)

Bunny: I told him I was at the contest, but he said hI was lying and that I was breaking the law by lying.

(Camera shows Bunny yelling until a cop comes and beats her with his baton.)

Bunny: When the detective showed this to the judge of my case, it was decided I was to insane to stand trail, and I was locked up here.

(Camera pans to scenes of interviewers being shot at and threatened by police near Bunny's cell.)

Bunny; The judge was so convinced I poisoned Fifi, that she ordered that any interviewers coming to question me are fobiden under pentaly of arrest, and that the cops here allowed to shoot to kill them as a threat of causing a police riot.

(Camera fades to show Bunny's face.)

Bunny: The police had protected whoever did this, and they are of no help.

(Camera pans to show Buny waking up.)

Bunny: And when I'm done, whoever the cops protected by making it lok like I did it will pay for this false judgement on my character.

(The arena gates open as Blodhound speeds out. End movie.)

EPILOGUE:

(Dark Tooth explodes, the ice cream cone warhead detonating. Bloodhound escapes as a purple mushrom cloud envelopes the area.)

Bunny:  I had won the contest

(Bunny is seen standing near Calypso, who sits on his throne of car parts.)

Bunny: I went to Calypso and demanded my prize.  I wanted to know who really poisoned Fili, and I wanted revenge.

(Camera pans to show a woman in a red dress and a tiarra tied up and held above a pit.)

Bunny; So, this is what happened.   Calypso said he showed the mayor evidence that the police withheld because this woman was the eldest daughter of the police chief.

(Camera pans to the night where the woman poisons the dog as the police chief is seen altering evidence of what happened.)

Bunny:  Now I see. That bitch fed Fifi a bon-bon, knowing chocolate was poison to dogs.  And the police chief, also angered that I beat her daughter early on, planted false evidence that pointed to me.

(Camera pans to Buny now mad.)

Bunny:  That little skank ruined my career, made me lose my crown, and had me locked up in that hellhole asylum. But I say it's time for a little payback.

(Camera shows the pit below the woman to show it is full of rabid pit bulls.)

Bunny: This is a fitting punishment.  You kill one dog, then the rest have a right for revenge.

(Calypso give Bunny a makeshift scepter. Bunny removes the top to reveal a jeweled blade.)

Bunny: Calypso gave me one more bonus, a bonus that was fit for a queen who has had it rough.  And as queen, I declare death!

(Bunny is seen cutting the rope holding the woman up in the air.  She falls into the pit, screen going black as a disturbing thud is heard.)

Bunny:  The police chief tried to pin me on her murder, but the mayor know got word of his game, and fired him and put him in jail for abusing his authority.

(Camera pans to Bunny reading a newspaper.  The front page said "POLICE CHIEF JAILED FOR COVERING UP BEAUTY QUEEN's DOG MURDER".)

Bunny:  I'm sick and tired of this area.  Time for me to go somewhere that will allow me to really be who i was.

(Camera shows the newspaper, now crumpled up, being thrown out the window as Bloodhoud is seen speeding away.  Camera cut to logo. The credits roll as "Back In Black" by AC/DC plays and scenes from all character movies are shown.)

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This is my rendition of Bitchin' Wheels from Rouge Trip. I renamed the vehicle to be PC (I doubt a name like that would fly with the censors in this day, even on an M-rated title.)

Okay, I'm bored with making stories on existing characters now. If anyone has a character idea they want me to do, please PM me.
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Reply #1 - 05/25/10 at 08:26:39
 
I liked it... Up until after the "Bloodhound" part.

Lol.
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Reply #2 - 05/25/10 at 09:20:12
 
I didn't know that chocolate could kill dogs o.o
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Reply #3 - 05/25/10 at 09:48:47
 
Reebok wrote on 05/25/10 at 09:20:12:
I didn't know that chocolate could kill dogs o.o


No shit. Chocolate kills dogs because it poisons them.
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Reply #4 - 05/25/10 at 14:48:23
 
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No shit. Chocolate kills dogs because it poisons them.

It's still very interesting.
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Reply #5 - 05/25/10 at 15:11:13
 
I'll send u a PM. I have a couple of ideas. But first, will the bosses have stories?

Also, this one was interesting.
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Reply #6 - 05/25/10 at 20:35:47
 
Not one of your better ones, in my opinion, sorry. You did the best you could with the character to make her fitting for black, but the character in the first place was really stupid Tongue Not your fault. I can see why you'd be getting bored, that's why I do mostly original characters. It's hard to always work within someone else's lines. I do like the name Bloodhound though, it's fitting.

And I agree it would be interesting to see the bosses' stories.
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Reply #7 - 05/26/10 at 02:37:08
 
BizarroKing wrote on 05/25/10 at 15:11:13:
I'll send u a PM. I have a couple of ideas. But first, will the bosses have stories?

Also, this one was interesting.


yes, the bosses will have stories. I have completed Dark Tooth's, but I am struggling with Minion (as he will be like in TM2, and I have a writer's block effect on his movies because I am fresh out of ideas of how to do it.)
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Reply #8 - 05/26/10 at 03:30:31
 
Oh yes, how will minion face himself? Heehee good luck
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Reply #9 - 05/26/10 at 06:57:11
 
Reebok wrote on 05/25/10 at 14:48:23:
It's still very interesting.

A lesson on theobromine poisoning in animals by Doktor Strychnine.  
Dude, I know, It's really intense.
Chocolate is one of the most toxic compounds produced by plants. It causes illness and fatalities in dogs, cats, mice, bugs, horses, and other assorted critters. The only animals that can tolerate chocolate is rats(very small amounts), humans(can eat 100% pure cacao mass without dying), and certain monkeys(100% cacao mass will cause some stomach illness). Many animals are unable to metabolize the theobromine(toxic alkaloid found in tea, cola, chocolate... yea, these will kill Fido too) found in chocolate. This is the toxic part of chocolate!
I know that some people say "Oh my dog, he eats chocolate cookies/cupcakes/brownie/ other cancer inducing chocolate snack and he is okay. Note that 'milk chocolate' is only about 2-10% chocolate.  that won't kill your dog! He'll have diarrhea but he'll be okay.
So! Unless you love the smell of your pet rotting in the yard or dumping mounds of 'chocolate pudding' in your house, don't feed chocolate to your critters!

And ThumperMan, your fanfic was EPIC. How much coke do you snort to think of stuff like this?
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Reply #10 - 05/26/10 at 06:59:55
 
maxamillionaire wrote on 05/26/10 at 03:30:31:
Oh yes, how will minion face himself? Heehee good luck


I won't have a middle for Minion. I just need to fix the other two movies "intro and ending" to make it where it isn't suckage.

And thanks for the lesson, Doc.  Being the owner of two dogs, I know better.
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Reply #11 - 05/26/10 at 07:08:50
 
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I won't have a middle for Minion. I just need to fix the other two movies "intro and ending" to make it where it isn't suckage.

And thanks for the lesson, Doc.  Being the owner of two dogs, I know better.

As the owner of two mice, I know very well.
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Reply #12 - 05/26/10 at 08:58:22
 
I have three!
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Reply #13 - 05/27/10 at 16:37:45
 
maxamillionaire wrote on 05/25/10 at 20:35:47:
Not one of your better ones, in my opinion, sorry. You did the best you could with the character to make her fitting for black, but the character in the first place was really stupid Tongue Not your fault. I can see why you'd be getting bored, that's why I do mostly original characters. It's hard to always work within someone else's lines. I do like the name Bloodhound though, it's fitting.

And I agree it would be interesting to see the bosses' stories.



Yeah, thanks for the concern.

I had a hard time with ichin' Wheels, and I guess I'll have a hard time with Vermin (unless I can switch him out for another Rouge Trip charcter.)
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Reply #14 - 05/27/10 at 21:48:26
 
SOmeone like biohazard or sidewinder would probably be easier because theyre more imposing, but vermin might work if you just made the guy like absolutely nuts or something
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