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Logan
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Twisted Metal X
05/01/10 at 05:37:53
 
I am back! I had to take an extended leave from this place to take care of personal things, and even though I know nobody realized I was gone, I've been thinking up some new things...new things for a new fanfic. I saw a Dodge Viper and thought Spectre, saw a harley for Grimm, and a few other cars. Plus I will be putting myself and my friends into these cars based on our personalities (me in Spectre since I'm white as a ghost xD , my friend Joey as Grimm because he is a big motorcycle fan and he dressed up as the grim reaper for halloween a few times.) I have some ideas for stories about my friends and I fighting it out for a wish from Calypso (who might make an appearance as a character here...I'm not sure about all the characters yet...Spectre and Grimm are the only 2 i am for sure about so far but expect Sweet Tooth and Minion to be there as well along with some new cars that my friends asked me to do for them so they could fit into the Twisted Metal universe). And I promise, all stories will be as original as they can be, with alliances and hatreds coming out to play an important part in some stories.
That brings me to part two, multiplayer story mode. Yes it would be the same basic concept as Black, but with a few extras, such as the ability to have two drivers in one car at the same time, which would make for some sweet combo specials (phantom scythe?) But anyway, this is my new idea since Twisted Metal Origins didn't go over as well as what I had hoped. It was a good way to get my feet wet and see what people thought of my writing, but now that I know what I've gotten myself into, I plan to make many amazing fanfics. Wish me luck!!!!!!  Cheesy  Cheesy  Cheesy u gotta love crazy smileys haha  Grin
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Reply #1 - 05/01/10 at 14:26:02
 
Mmkay. let's see some writing
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Reply #2 - 05/01/10 at 20:24:22
 
Ok here we go

Spectre

Driver: Logan Sheffield

Logan is the nephew of former Twisted Metal contestant Kenny Masters, whose wish was to have his face known all around the world. Calypso screwed poor Kenny over by stretching his face over the world for everyone to see. Logan enters this year's contest in hopes of avenging his uncle's demise.

Car: Spectre (Dodge Viper SRT10)
The legendary car known around the world as Spectre has recieved a major upgrade since the last contest. The phantom beam is even more powerful than ever, with the ability to cut through any contestant with a direct hit. Logan has also equipped machine gun turrets on the sides and roof of the car.

Intro
*Camera starts at a respectable looking area of downtown Chicago. We see Logan, looking away from the camera. He wears a black overcoat, black shirt, black pants, black army boots, and sunglasses. A few blocks away we see a Dodge Viper SRT10. Logan looks at the camera and begins to speak.*
Logan: This used to be the greatest place in the world for me. This was where I could go to escape from the world...but all that changed when uncle Kenny died.
*Flashback to Kenny's face being stretched across the sky in New York City and Calypso laughing*
Logan: Now this place has become a haunting memory of what could have been. Everything has gone wrong since Kenny's death...but that bastard Calypso gave me a chance the other day.
*Calypso is shown a few days prior, handing Logan the keys to Spectre.*
Logan: That son of a bitch is gonna wish he never gave me this chance.

Middle

HeadHunter (new boss) explodes and destroys the stadium he was held in. Logan is able to drive far enough away to avoid the explosion itself, but not far enough away to avoid a big piece of scrap from what was once the massive concrete truck. A piece of what was once HeadHunter hits Spectre, knocking Logan out. Calypso comes out of nowhere to survey the damage.

Calypso: Notify my daughter to cross HeadHunter copy 6 off the list. Spectre has remained in the contest for the moment, but it looks like he will be out for quite some time. Help Logan out of the car and take Spectre back to the garage to prepare for the quarterfinal match.

At this time, a tow truck comes and takes Spectre back to Sparks Tower to be fixed for the quarterfinal match. Logan is transported to the immediate care area for contestants, where he has bizarre dreams and nightmares about himself, Spectre, his uncle Kenny, and the Twisted Metal competition.

Logan: I couldn't tell if I was alive and still in the contest, or if I had joined Kenny in the afterlife as a spirit. All I know is that lots of odd and disturbing visions surrounded me. I couldn't make out most of them, but some of them were clear enough to me. One resembled my uncle, tortured and killed. I finally woke up in what resembled a hospital. I decided that I was still alive, for the moment, and that I still had a chance to avenge my uncle and make Calypso pay.

Logan fades back out as the doctors go back to work, making sure he is ready for his quarterfinal match against his own worst nightmare, his best friend Joey Graham, this year's driver of Mr. Grimm.

Meeting Calypso

The insides of War Machine (total Iron Man reference I'll admit) collapse, killing almost everyone inside...except for Logan, who had created the explosion responsible for destroying War Machine. Spectre is this year's Twisted Metal champion...or so Logan thinks...

Logan: I did the unthinkable. I killed my own best friend in order to survive, and now I have won the contest.

Logan walks into a massive arena, where he sees Calypso inside a giant car made of the scraps of the fallen cars in the contest. He sees pieces from every car he saw on the battlefield...Sweet Tooth, Mr. Grimm, Minion...even a few scraps from HeadHunter and War Machine.

Calypso: Now you didn't really think you would be getting off that easily, did you boy?

Logan: What the hell is this thing?

Calypso: This is Piecemeal (we don't hate on Small Brawl do we? if we do I will redo this part) He is the combination of all your fallen opponents from this year's competition. The only car missing to make Piecemeal unstoppable...is Spectre!

Calypso quickly launches a few patriot missles and a flamethrower, trying to catch Logan and Spetre off guard. However, Logan is able to move away from the attacks, and prepares for the final battle against Calypso.

Ending

Calypso falls out of Piecemeal, which quickly explodes into nothing. Logan gets out of Spectre and runs over to Calypso.

Logan: I won your contest, and then I kicked your ass all over this arena. Give me my wish before I finish you off for good!

Calypso looks at Logan and gives a small smile then nods.

Calypso: The driver of Spectre never seems to amaze me with his or her lack of temper control. But that is no matter. I understand you have come here for vengance against me?

Logan: That's right. You killed my uncle Kenny Masters in your first contest, and now I'm here to make things right. For my wish, I wish that my uncle Kenny was alive again, exactly the way he was before your contest.

Calypso: Heh...Granted!

The sky opens up and a figure descends from the heavens. It is Kenny Masters, the driver of Spectre from the second Twisted Metal. He and Logan embrace in front of Calypso.

Kenny: That's my boy! Following right in his uncle's footsteps! I couldn't be more proud of you.

Logan: Thanks uncle Kenny! I knew I always had it in me to do something like this....but there is one unresolved part of the story.

Logan takes Ken over to Spectre and hops in, then aims the phantom blast cannon straight at Calypso.

Kenny: Oh now this is just too good.

Logan: After what he did to you, there couldn't be a better ending.

Logan fires off a shot from the cannon straight at Calypso, tearing the creator of Twisted Metal in half. The camera goes back to Spectre, which can be seen driving off towards the sunset while the credits begin to roll.

I AM LOGAN, AND I THANK YOU FOR PLAYING TWISTED METAL!
Just couldn't help myself... Cheesy  Cheesy  Cheesy
There were originally supposed to be 2 endings per character, but then realized that there would be no way to tell what ending you were heading towards. So now everyone gets one ending no matter what. Hope everyone likes this. I sure had fun writing it. Plus I will be putting in a picture of what my spectre looks like, plus HeadHunter and War Machine (which is more of a stage than a final boss, but I figured that I was putting Piecemeal in, so that wouldn't really matter. War Machine will look like War Machine from Iron Man since the battle will be inside him.)
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Reply #3 - 05/01/10 at 20:33:24
 
Hmm. Not bad. I liked the way Calypso twisted Kenny's wish in the beginning, it was perfect. I was a little dissapointed with the ending though, not because it wasn't well-written, but because Calypso wasn't able to twist it. Ah well. You're the author.

I don't mind the piecemeal reference at all, I think it's a good idea that could be worked into the black universe. I know bizarroking is developing a Piecemeal idea as well.

Just so you know, I have a cement mixer contestant in the works too. He's not a boss, though. Just wanted to let you know so there's no confusion, I'm not plagiarizing you.
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Reply #4 - 05/01/10 at 20:39:41
 
Hey as long as you concrete mixer isn't named HeadHunter I don't care. For some reason I decided that a concrete mixer deserved that name. Maybe because I was playing that game the other day...anyway I'm glad that you liked it. And the ending wasn't twisted for two reasons. The first is that I learned something from Black. The endings don't always have to be twisted for revenge to be served. The second reason is that I was the character for this one, and I didn't really feel like dying. Haha just wait for Grimm's ending. My friend Joey, who I brought up for a moment in my story, has this ending planned out for Grimm that I might let him write on my profile. It's a great ending and pretty damn twisted. But it totally fits in with Mr. Grimm (yes of course he gets screwed over) and I think it will be alot of fun. I have to get him over here though so he can write it. This is about it for today, unless I can get a hold of him later.
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Reply #5 - 05/01/10 at 20:55:24
 
Ah good point. And yea Headhunter is a fitting name
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Reply #6 - 05/01/10 at 21:05:01
 
2 endings? Like a good ending and a bad ending?
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Reply #7 - 05/01/10 at 21:46:14
 
Yeah. For example, the good ending was the one that made it into the story here. The bad ending would have been like Outlaw 2's ending where I would have been killed and sent to heaven to see Kenny. But I think it would have been too hard to come up with 2 endings for everyone. I'm happy with what I did. Tomorrow Mr. Grimm will be up.
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Reply #8 - 05/02/10 at 00:20:39
 
I just learned that the way you twisted Ken's wish at the beginning was just spectre's ending from tm2  Tongue So i take back what I said about it being original. But it was still good
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Reply #9 - 05/02/10 at 02:45:04
 
I didn't mean for that to be original. It was a total tribute to the best game in the series and the best car in the series. I can't wait to see what Joey will write for Grimm. He promised to make an even more retarded ending than Head On or even the endings from the 989 horse piss. But he also promised it will be funny and that everyone on here will get a good laugh out of it. I will also take ideas for who I should write up tomorrow. My friend Charlie (ironically) wants to do Yellow Jacket (no surprise) and a few other friends have characters they want to do (Outlaw, Crimson Fury, and Minion just to name a few...but surprisingly no one has tried to become the psycho killer clown) Out of the 4 I mentioned, who do you think should be written after Grimm tomorrow?
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Reply #10 - 05/02/10 at 03:17:31
 
Yea I was just correcting my own error. And I'd like to see yellow jacket next, written by charlie himself lol.  And I hope joey is careful with his grimm ending, because theres a fine line between funny and just plain 989.
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Reply #11 - 05/02/10 at 03:26:08
 
How about after Mr. Grimm, yellowjacket?

Also, no I don't think we hate Small Brawl. I don't anyway.
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Reply #12 - 05/02/10 at 04:36:46
 
The scary thing is that my friend Charlie said that he wants his life to play out just like Charlie Kane's o.0 but yeah I think I can get him to write that one. And after that I will get my friend who is a cop in training to write Outlaw's story or Crimson Fury's story. Either way he is the man for the job. This should be alot of fun, and I even got Sweet Tooth signed up at last lol. My friend Greg will be playing the role of the psycho clown for your reading pleasure. But first comes Grimm as promised, then Yellow Jacket by popular demand. I've gotta ask Charlie if he has a good idea for a story first though. I'm sure he can come up with something pretty good. And as for Joey's ending, he said that you won't have to worry about any shoes crushing Mr. Grimm this time around. God that was such shit...why hasn't everyone at 989 been burned alive at the stake yet?
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Reply #13 - 05/02/10 at 06:40:29
 
I had an Uncle Kenny... who was from Chicago (my mom's side of the family is from there).. weird LOL
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Reply #14 - 05/02/10 at 22:51:57
 
This is Joey Graham live from Logan's tma page, and I am here to let you all know that I'm taking over for the day. Logan is busy mourning the loss of his grandmother today so I will be writing Mr. Grimm's story. It seems like there has been a bit of hype for my ending, which I promised would be funny, and it would not be anywhere close to the shit 989 took on Grimm (TWICE) Anyway hope I can do Logan's story writing ability justice.
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