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ThumperMan3000
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Pit Viper - Twisted Metal Black 2
04/22/10 at 08:18:01
 
Pit Viper

Driver: The Viper


The Viper is one of the country's most notorous bounty hunters.  For the right price, he will find anyone he is ordered to either catpture or kill.  He is a huge asset for local law enforcements, as they see him as a good man who they can rely on.

One night, Viper heard that the FBI"s most wanted criminal has begun slaying people in Harbor City. He would try to bust the killer and bring him back to justice. But that night, the clown would do something that would destroy his reputation and career.

Vehicle:  Pit Viper

This dune buggy is what Viper uses in his missions. It was armed with a radar, radio, and other vital equipment.  For the contest, Dwane modified his vehicle with many weapons from his armory, but his Special Weapon is new. When activated, Pit Viper can spray acid at any vehicles, melting away armor and setting them on fire.


PROLOGUE

Viper:  I was the best at what I did, before this happened.

(Camera pans to Blackfield Asylum sign.  It zooms through the desert as Viper speaks.)

Viper:  The police payed me to take out the scumbags they were afraid to tackle themselves, and the people respected me.

(Camera slams through the security fence as it faces the run-down building.)

Viper: But truth is, I was locked up here because I was framed.

(Camera enters the building and goes down the hallway and passes a cop reading a newspaper. It stops to face a cell marked "C-1 Solitary".)

Viper:  Framed by a criminal I was hired to track down.

(Camera enters the cell to se a white man with long blonde hair and a short beard.  he has a black sleeveless top, black pants, and boots on. He wears black fingerless gloves on his hands and black wristbands above them.  he is seen praying)

Viper: That damn clown was clever enough to force me to take the fall for his dirty deeds.  I wish I could leave just so I can prove my inocence.

(Camera fades to black.)

Viper:  One day, I had a visitor.

(Shots of Calypso.)

Viper:  I reconized Calypso the minute he came in. He was the FBI's second most wanted, the first being the asshole who got me locked up here.  He was willing to make an offer.  If I was to enter and win his criminal contest, he would give me the stuff needed to clear my name.

(Camera shows close-up of Viper's face.)

Viper:  I know all about his contest, but it was too late for the cops. They had already betrayed me, locking me up here without listening to reason.

(Camera shows Calypso giving Viper a pair of car keys, then it cuts outside the asylum as Pit Viper is seen speeding through the area and slamming through the security fence.)

Viper:  How could I refuse the shot at clearing my name, even if a lot of civilians get killed in the process?

(Camera fades to black.  End movie.)

MIDDLE

(MInion is seen exploding.  As pieces of the tank fly into the air, a huge pieces flies up and hits Pit Viper, knocking Viper out.)

Viper:  I was out for hours and hours.  When I was asleep, I started to dream about things..

(Camera shows Viper slumped over the whel as he speaks.)

Viper:  Mainly my career, and how it all ended.

(Camera flashes back to Viper on the streets.)

Viper:  I was a bounty hunter, and one of the best in the country.  The FBI loved my work, and the people felt safe knowing I was there to help protect hem.

(Camera pans to Viper in his home.)

Viper: Onew night, I was at home. I had made a couple busts in Harbor City for drug smuggling by the mob, and the ploice radio signaled something that caught my attention.)

(Camera pans to Viper listening to amakeshift police radio.)

Viper: I learned that Sweet Tooth, the FBI's number one most wanted criminal, was in Harbor City, and by the sound of the cop making the report, he had already started his slayings in the area.

(Camera shows Viper in Pit Viper, which is not modified, speeding down the streets.)

Viper:  I already knew about the clown freak from what happened in Midtown.  He escaped Blackfield after being locked up for three months, and after that, he helped turn Midtown into a warzone full of death and destruction.

(Camera pans to Viper seeing Needles kill an innocent man in an back alley.)

Viper:  I saw the clown when he did another of his dirty deeds, and started to approach for arrest, and that's where it all went to hell.

(Camera shows Viper sneaking up on Needles with a taser, but the killer senses him and slaps his hand, knocking the taser out as he grabs Viper and threw him into a wall.)

Viper: Sweet Tooth got the better of me. But that wasn't the worst of it.

(Camera shows Viper in court..)

Viper: While I was out, someone, maybe Sweet Tooth,  took my knife out of its holster and replaced his knife with it. I was framed for the clown's dirty work.  I tried to defend myself, but the judge decided I was guilty because of the crime. I lost it and wanted to teach the judge a lesson.

(Viper is seen grabing a cop's gun and knocking him out with the butt. Viper them goes at the judge, shooting at the legs of the cops in the area, until he is tazed by a cop.)

Viper:  After that, the judge decided I was too insane to continue work. He striped me of my license, and locked me in the asylum.

(Camera pans to Viper waking up.)

Viper: But this is my only chance to prove my inocence.

(The arena doors open as Pit Viper speeds out.)

EPILOGUE:

(Dark Tooth explodes, as the ice cream cone warhead detonates. Pit Viper speeds out as purple mushroom cloud envelopes the area.)

Viper:  I had won the contest.

(Viper is seen facing Calypso, who sits on his trone of car parts.)

Viper: i went o Calypso and demanded my prize. I wanted to prove to the ;aw that I never commited those killings.

(Soon, Calypso threw down a milla folder containing pics of the event, and Viper opened them.)

Viper; And like that, I got photos of the event, and as I execpted, I was framed.

(Camera flashes back to the same scene where Needles throws Viper into a wall.)

Viper:  After Sweet Tooth knocked me out cold, he would make it look like I did it.

(Camera shows Needles removing his signature knife and pulling out Viper's knife.)

Viper:  He wanted to be rid of me since I was a witnes, and he decided to tamper with the crime scene so the police would know I did it with out listening.

(Needles is seen placing Viper's knife into the wound. As he stabs it in, the camera cuts back to Viper seeing the file.)

Viper:  Now I have the proof that would clear my name and put this slaying as another one of Sweet Tooth's crimes.

(Viper turned to left.)

Viper: I went to leave the area, but something wasn't right.

(All exits were sealed as Viper looks at Calypso, who now points a handgun at him.)

Viper:  I was tricked.  Calypso gave me the evidence to clear me, but he never promised to let me leave with it.

(Camera goes black as a series of gunshots ring out.)

Viper;  On the contrary, he didn't want me to leave alive.

(Camera pans to see Viper laying dead as a pool of blood forms under him.  The photos are seen scattered around the floor as they have bullet holes torn into them.  Camera then cuts to logo, then credits roll as AC/DC's "Back In Black" plays, and scenes from all character movies play.)
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Re: Pit Viper - Twisted Metal Black 2
Reply #1 - 04/22/10 at 20:54:39
 
Niiice. I had been trying to think of a Black character for Pit Viper, but I didn't have any ideas. I like what you did with it. Good story, i was kinda dissapointed by the twist at the end though, it didn't seem extremely clever, just Calypso being a dick
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Reply #2 - 04/22/10 at 22:32:23
 
maxamillionaire wrote on 04/22/10 at 20:54:39:
Niiice. I had been trying to think of a Black character for Pit Viper, but I didn't have any ideas. I like what you did with it. Good story, i was kinda dissapointed by the twist at the end though, it didn't seem extremely clever, just Calypso being a dick


I know. Calypso did the same thing to John Doe because he was an FBI agent and because of that, he dosen't want him leaving alive.

I had Viper killed for the same reason. Calypso didn't promise to have him leave alive with the evidence because he knew Viper would squeal to the cops about him.
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Reply #3 - 04/23/10 at 01:32:36
 
I know. Atleast it was original then  Cheesy
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Reply #4 - 04/23/10 at 01:44:09
 
Thanks. I would love to make one of your original characters in my way, but I have made one based on The_Dead's idea, and he may give me more ideas.
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Reply #5 - 04/23/10 at 21:51:06
 
(I had actually meant atleast it was original when they did it with roadkill  XP. But I realize you just did your best with an idea that wasnt yours )

And yea I wouldn't mind you doing one of my guys, just wait until i've posted the endings because I wouldn't want you making up an ending for my character when I already had one in mind. Would you just rewrite the story in your style or write their story as a sequel to the one I came up with, to be in the next game?
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Reply #6 - 04/23/10 at 22:03:00
 
maxamillionaire wrote on 04/23/10 at 21:51:06:
(I had actually meant atleast it was original when they did it with roadkill  XP. But I realize you just did your best with an idea that wasnt yours )

And yea I wouldn't mind you doing one of my guys, just wait until i've posted the endings because I wouldn't want you making up an ending for my character when I already had one in mind. Would you just rewrite the story in your style or write their story as a sequel to the one I came up with, to be in the next game?


I would rewrite the charcter to fit in with the universe of my fanfic series.
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Reply #7 - 04/24/10 at 17:34:27
 
Yea I'm fine with that. I would prefer that you just don't until I've posted the ending to whatever character(s) you'd want to use.
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Reply #8 - 04/24/10 at 21:14:13
 
maxamillionaire wrote on 04/24/10 at 17:34:27:
Yea I'm fine with that. I would prefer that you just don't until I've posted the ending to whatever character(s) you'd want to use.


Understood, although I would use a charcter that's not a vehicle I already done or am planing (so Pandemic is out the window since I did Ozone.)
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