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Tremor - Twisted Metal Black 2 (Read 2826 times)
ThumperMan3000
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Tremor - Twisted Metal Black 2
04/17/10 at 10:30:49
 
Tremor

Driver: Mr. X

Mr. X, as he wants to be called, was once the best racer.  He had a good family and a great career.  Until one day, he got into a wreck. He family was killed, and he was to blame.  Not only was he outlawed from racing, but he was also locked up in the asylum, framed for the deaths.

Vehicle:  Tremor

Mr. X's vehicle is his truck.  It is covered in dry mud and rusted after X was locked up in the asylum.  Its Special Weapon is the reason for its nickname.  When fired, a large sound will go off as Tremor summons a large borge into the ground that will home in on the nearest opponent until it crashes into its target, dealing damge and sending the opponent flying.

Vehicle Looks: Black race truck with a red number 7 on the sides.  Front end is all banged up, and bumper is missing, replaced by a big reinforced piece of steel.  Two machines guns are mounted on the bumper.  The hood and right front fender is grey, as the parts are new fron the factory. The truck is dirty, worn out, and has a loud motor.

PROLOGUE:

Mr. X:  In here, you're forced to sit in your cell and think about what you did.

(Camera pans to Blackfield Asylum sign as it strolls through the desert.)

Mr X:  It dosen't matter if you actually did it, or were framed, you're stuck here for life.

(Camera pans to the run down asylum as camera fades to ascene where goes through a hallway, pasing a cop reading a newspaper.)

Mr. X;  The frame job is what I fall under.

(Camera stops at a cell marked "C-1 Solitary". it enters to se a person in a moto-cross suit sitting in the corner.  His head is conceled by a helmet with a cracked black visor.)

Mr. X: My wife, and son was killed in an accident caused by someone, and I was to blame.  That's why I'm in here. But one day, he showed up.

(Camera pans to Calypso.)

Mr. X:  The freak called himself Calypso, and he made me an offer.  He invited me to join his contest.  If I won, I would get real justice.

(Camera shows a scene of Mr. X and Calypso shaking hands.)

Mr. X:   This is what I need.  The damn cops are so blind about who did what, that I will not trust them anymore. They let the guy go and pined the blame on me.

(Camera fades to outside asylum as Tremor is seen speeding away.)

Mr. X: How can I refuse a chance to prove those pigs wrong?

(Camera cuts to black.  End movie.)

MIDDLE

(MInion explodes. As pieces of the tank explode, a huge pieces flies up and hits Tremor, knocking Mr. X out.)

Mr. X:  Being knocked out is almost like that cell at nightfall.  You're forced to stay still and remember what you did or didn't do.

(Camera pans to Mr. X slumped behind the wheel as he speaks.)

Mr. X:  When I got knocked out from the wild piece of scrap flung from that freakshow's tank, I started having visions. I think I was remembering how my life was forever destroyed.

(Camera flashes back to a man, wife, and young kid driving on the road.)

Mr. X:  I was a successful rally racer, and a family man. My son loved me.  One night, we were driving home after another win, when it hapened.

(A big rig slams skids out of control and slams into the truck.)

Mr. X: My wife was killed on impect, and my son would suffer injuries that ended up being fatal.  As I mourned the loss, the shitstorm of false accusations began.

(Camera pans to a newspaper cliping with Mr. X's face. The headlines read "RALLY STAR BLACKLISTED AFTER CAUSING FATAL WRECK ON PURPOSE".)

Mr. X:  The league baned me from racing again as the damn trucker alledgedly claimed I staged the wreck to cause a publicity stunt. I was angered, and I wanted to teach the trucker a lesson.

(Mr. X is seen in the truck, his face now covered in his helmet, as he sees the trucker's rig speed off.)

Mr. X: When I saw that lying bastard, I decided to go after him and force him to confess.

(Mr. X is seen chasing after the truck and raming the backside, causing it to crash into a pile of cars.  Mr. X is seen pulling the trucker and pulling a gun.)

Mr. X : And I was so close, until it hapened.

(Mr. X saw the cops surround him and uses the trucker as a human shield, aiming the gun at the cops.)

Cop: Holy shit, he's aiming at us!. All units open fire, but be careful for the hostage!

(The cops open fire and take out Mr. X whi fires back at a cop, injuring him.)

Mr. X: The courts ruled that I was now a danger to the public after shooting that cop, and that I was mentally unstable to stand trial. That, and the prosecutors warned that because they think I was targeting him because of the interview, they feared I would attack the bastard and any cops that stepped in.

(Camera pans to Mr. X in the asylum.)

Mr. X:  SO I was put here, and I denied visitors or news interveiws because of what they claim to be "unpredictable behavior".

(camera goes back to show Mr. X waking up.)

Mr. X: But when I win, the trucker will pay for ruining my life, and this time, there won't be any cops left standing to protect him.

(The gates to the arena open as Tremor is seen speeding away.)

EPILOGUE:

(Dark Tooth explodes, the ice cream cone warhead detonating. Tremor speeds away as a mushroom cloud envelopes the area.)

Mr. X:  I did it. I have won the contest.

(Mt. X is sen facing Calypso, who sits in his trone of car parts.)

Mr. X:  I came to Calypso, and demanded my prize.  I wanted to face the sick bastard who killed my family and pined the blame on me.

(Camera pans to a makeshift area of the rom to show the trucker tied to a chair.)

Mr. X: Oh, yes, that trucker was just like I remembered him, and I now know him very well.

(Camera flashes back to the trucker being with another racer.)

Mr. X:  He was one of the trucker that used to be employed with another racer. Mainly a rival of mine.

(Mr. X is seen finding the trucker put some illegal modifications into the racer's car.)

Mr. X: I caught him modifing his employer's vehicle to give it an advantage.  At the time, he had a undefeated streak, but when I saw it, I now knew how it was possible.

(Camera pans to the trucker runing away.)

Mr. X:  The trucker escaped while the racer was disqualified and arressted.  After that, I heard him yelling at me.

Trucker:  You son-of-a-bitch. I won't forget this. One day, I will ruin your career worst than you ruined his!

(Camera flashes back to Mr. X at present day as red-and-blue lights are heard.)

Mr. X: Dammit, the cops are on my trail, and he's not dead.)

(Camera shows a close-up of Calypso.)

Mr. X:  Fortunatly, Calypso told me that I can have my revenge and lose the cops in one fell swoop.

(The cops are seen breaking down the door to see Mr. X holding the trucker hostage.)

Cop:  Shit, not again.  That's it, shoot to kill.  Don't harm the hostage!

(The cops shoot Mr. X dead, only to discover that "Mr. X" was actually a straw scarecrow when the helmet falls off.  The trucker is still attached, as there is a hook connected into the side of his neck.)

Cop:  What the hell...?

(Soon, the scarecrow is seen having a time bomb on it as the doors are sealed off.)

Cop: Dammit.  **getting radio.**  This is Officer Tenpenny! We need help!  Calypso's screwed us agai....

(The camera pans back outside the theater to see it explode.  In a dark alleyway, Tremor is seen hiding, as Mr. X rests easy, with Calypso in the front passanger's seat.)

Mr. X:  It's over.  The trucker's dead, and my family's avenged.  I wanted to kill myself, but Calypso gave me one sweet bonus.

(Calypso is seen close-up.)

Mr. X: He wants me to work for him.  He needed an apprentice to train, to take over the contest if he dies.  He had two canidates in mind.)

(Camera shows the destroyed remains of Sweet Tooth and Dark Tooth, then back at Mr. X)

Mr. X But since I killed them, he sees me as a better idea.

(Camera shows Mr. X take his helmet off, to reveal a man with a bald head and an X-shaped  scar across his eyes caused from the wreck.)

Mr. X: How could I refuse? I accepted his offer.

(Camera pans to outside, behind Tremor as it speeds off.  Camera cuts to logo, then credits roll as "Back In Black" by AC/DC plays, with scenes from all charcter movies playing.)
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Done as a request from The_Dead.  Hope you like it.
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Re: Tremor - Twisted Metal Black 2
Reply #1 - 04/17/10 at 14:18:56
 
ahhhh so the next apprentice, after yellowjacket. It's an original idea, well written as always. I like the name Mr X, it's perfect for twisted metal, kinda vague and sinister.

A bit of shameless advertising: Since i've reviewed your characters, would you mind reviewing my twisted metal midnight idea?
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Reply #2 - 04/18/10 at 00:39:27
 
Nice man, I didnt think that you would have him take his helment off, though I kind of wanted you to. Also, take over Twisted Metal? Thats great! Tenpenny? GTA: San Andreas? haha. It was a great story, I am saving this for sure!
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Reply #3 - 04/18/10 at 03:57:00
 
The_Dead wrote on 04/18/10 at 00:39:27:
Nice man, I didnt think that you would have him take his helment off, though I kind of wanted you to. Also, take over Twisted Metal? Thats great! Tenpenny? GTA: San Andreas? haha. It was a great story, I am saving this for sure!


Yeah, Officer Tenpenny's name is taken from the corrupt cop antagonist from GTA: San Andreas (In fact, I have a copy of the PS2 version of that game. Mainly a copy made after the Hot Coffee controversy.)

Thanks. if you have any more characters you want me to do, just PM me.

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I was just playing San Andreas on my 360, haha. Okay, I have a few ideas, ill PM you here in the next few days, thanks!
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