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Re: Twisted Metal: Midnight
Reply #60 - 05/15/10 at 14:16:42
 
maxamillionaire wrote on 05/15/10 at 14:08:28:
Grin Thanks guys. And yea Dr. Flesh doesn't die. I was thinking about the half brothers things and how the last name didn't really work with step brothers, but i thought half brothers DNA might be more similar, whatever Tongue And I hadn't thought of that for Hammerhead, killing Calypso too thats also a good idea, but the Ross's personality would have been different. Thanks for the comments.

After I'm done with all my current characters, would you rather see me do more of my own characters or some new storylines for the original black characters?


Hmm, just out of curiosity, what other characters do you have planned?
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Reply #61 - 05/15/10 at 14:35:28
 
you mean  what characters from the original black? Manslaughter and Mr. Grimm for sure, maybe Warthog, Sweettooth, roadkill. I'll probably mix them in with some original characters, I just decided
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Reply #62 - 05/15/10 at 14:42:30
 
maxamillionaire wrote on 05/15/10 at 14:35:28:
you mean  what characters from the original black? Manslaughter and Mr. Grimm for sure, maybe Warthog, Sweettooth, roadkill. I'll probably mix them in with some original characters, I just decided


I'd definitely like to hear Mr Grimm's story. Is it going to be the war veteran or the actual Grin Reaper?
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Reply #63 - 05/15/10 at 18:18:22
 
Grin Reaper? does that mean he goes around smiling at ppl?

I love it when ppl typo is name.. it always makes for a good laugh
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Reply #64 - 05/15/10 at 18:31:53
 
Haha grin reaper... ahh

The war vet. I'll be following the storyline of Black

Btw whens the next dizasterchild fic debuting?
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Reply #65 - 05/15/10 at 19:16:17
 
Do your own originals. Your story writing is good enough to make these brand new people come to life. Introduce more but, if you choose to do regular charactors, I don't think people will mind.

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Reply #66 - 05/15/10 at 21:51:10
 
maxamillionaire wrote on 05/15/10 at 18:31:53:
Haha grin reaper... ahh

The war vet. I'll be following the storyline of Black

Btw whens the next dizasterchild fic debuting?


I've gotten a really good start on the next one, which is a TM Chronicles for Charlie Kane.. havent came up with a concrete title, but it was coming along nicely til about a week ago. this week has went to hell for me when it was supposed to be a good one. so far this week, I have:

- got into a fight with my mom's bf, who decided to catch me off guard and shove me, resulting in me slipping on the tile floor and hitting my spine on the arm of a bench

- while housesitting for a friend, I forgot that they store bread in the oven, and while half out of it on painkillers and sleep dep, pre-heated the oven with the bread still in it, catching the entire stove on fire and nearly burning the house down. as it stands, I have to repaint the kitchen and may have to buy them a new stove

- spent all week cleaning up the soot and ash from the fire, cause since the a/c was on and there is a return vent above the stove, it sucked up the smoke and spewed that shit all over the house (its a 2-story)... I shoulda been on the 360 all week with the 52" tv, but nope...

- my kid went to the ER yesterday.. had me worried sick til his mother finally called me to say it was a pulled ab muscle

- yesterday, found out my OTHER favorite band is "parting ways for the time being".. so both of my favorites are no longer together

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Reply #67 - 05/16/10 at 03:00:59
 
That sucks dude, I'm sorry to hear that.

I feel like I should do some of the original Black characters to balance it out, and thumperman wanted me too Tongue I have some pretty decent ideas for a few of them.

Anyways, here's the last installment for this set of characters!

***

The final secret switch is flipped, detonating a multitude of charges right underneath the pavement. Explosions beneath the three bosses blow their vehicles sky high, utterly and completely destroying them. The smoldering wreckage crashes back to earth. Crimson Fury sits unmoving amongst the wreckage, badly damaged but still functioning. Agent Shepherd narrates:

I had won the contest.

(Camera shows Agent Shepherd glowering at the steering wheel.)

It was not surprising, really. I was the most skilled driver the contest had ever seen.

(A raven lands on Crimson Fury. Agent Shepherd takes the paper from its talons and reads the message.)

Apparently, I had to go to the junkyard to claim my prize.

(Crimson Fury roars down the deserted desert road.)

I was finally going to get my revenge on those gorillamen.

(The Lambo screams through the junkyard gates and stops on a dime in a clearing amidst towers of auto corpses.)

At long last, I could have my life back.
(Agent Shepherd emerges from the sports car, his trademark scowl set in stone on his face. A clean cut man in a dark Armani suit, almost identical to his own, stands before him.

“Nice suit,” says Agent Shepherd. The man before him laughs softly. “Indeed. Congratulations, driver. You are this year’s victor.”

“Of course I am. I’m the best this dreadful contest has ever seen.”

“Yes…” murmurs the man. “I am Joseph Kane, the head of Twisted Metal.”

“Good for you,” says Shepherd bluntly, his face emotionless. A light wind ruffles his long hair. “I’ve come for my prize.”

“Straight to the point I see. Yes, as the victor, you are entitled to one wish. What is it your heart desires most, driver?”

“Those gorillamen. They framed me, they made it look like I shot the president. I’m innocent. I want my revenge.”

“Do you mean, these ‘gorillamen’?”

Kane leads the agent behind a tower of car parts. Sitting in two makeshift chairs of car parts are the gorillamen, bound and gagged, trying to break loose. A smile plays across Agent Shepherd’s face for the first time.

“Yes, these gorillamen indeed. I can tell these are the same men. You are a talented individual, Mr. Kane.”

“I try,” says Kane softly. Shepherd looks down and sees a sniper rifle at his feet, the same one that the gorillas used to kill the president. He picks it up and runs his hands over it.

“This is going to feel so good…”

Agent Shepherd aligns the rifle right up next to the first gorilla’s head, at an angle so that the bullet will hit them both. The gorillamen’s struggles grow more frantic. The camera zooms in on his finger on the trigger, pulling it harder, harder…

*BAM* The camera goes black as the sound of a muffled gunshot fills the air. It focuses back in to see the gorillamen still in their chair, unmoving, their heads dripping blood. Kane is nowhere to be seen. Agent Shepherd walks slowly back into his Lamborghini, carrying the rifle, a dark smile remaining on his face.)

Mission complete. The gorillamen have met the same fate as the president, a fate they wholly deserve.

(Agent Shepherd stoops into the cockpit and starts the engine, which roars the life then purrs softly. Crimson Fury burns rubber then zooms through the junkyard gates.)

I decided something else too. I’m through protecting people.

(Crimson Fury screams past a stationary camera.)

I think I’ll go into a field of work where I can make better use of my talents.

(Camera is inside the Lambo, focusing on the sniper rifle in the passenger seat.)

Yes, from now on, I’ll be a bounty hunter. I’ll be infamous; criminals will cower at the sound of my name.

(A scorpion scuttles by as Crimson Fury zooms past it, kicking up a cloud of dust.)

The people will love me. I’ll take out all the freaks and criminals that roam these streets, then collect my due. I’ll have so much more glory than just a secret service agent.

(Crimson Fury gradually speeds away into the distance.)

And for my first target, I think I’ll go for that freak clown they call Sweettooth.

(A clock strikes midnight as the Lambo becomes invisible over the horizon. The end credits roll and Black by Pearl Jam plays.)

***

The final secret switch is flipped, detonating a multitude of charges right underneath the pavement. Explosions beneath the three bosses blow their vehicles sky high, utterly and completely destroying them. The smoldering wreckage crashes back to earth. Bohemian sits unmoving amongst the wreckage, badly damaged but still functioning. Dandelion narrates:

At last, the contest had come to an end. I had won.

(Camera shows right profile of Dandelion’s face sitting in the cab.)

I had battled my way through the killers that plague the city, and I had defeated them. I was victorious. But what was I supposed to do now?

(A raven alights on Bohemian’s roof. Dandelion opens the window and it comes down to perch on her arm. She takes the parchment from its talon and reads the message.)

I suppose I’m going back to that scrapyard. Justice is finally going to be served.

(Camera zooms in to the raven’s eye until its yellow iris completely blocks the camera. The view then zooms back out to Bohemian rolling down a dusty desert road.)

I was about to fulfill my goal and end this madness called Twisted Metal. Could it really be happening?

(Bohemian busts through the junkyard gates and screeches to a stop in a clearing amidst towering heaps of car corpses. Dandelion exits the VW and steps onto the ground, slamming the door. A clean cut man in a dark Armani suit stands before.

“Welcome, Dandelion. Congratulations. You are this year’s victor.

“Yes. I endured my way through your hellish contest and killed all those other murderous contestants.”
“You say it like you’re not a murderer yourself. You are just as guilty as they are. You don’t know all the other contestant’s motives. They could have been noble, of pure heart, like you think yourself to be…”

“Don’t try to play with my mind, Mr…”

“Kane. Joseph Kane.”

“Where’s Calypso? I’ve wanted to meet him for a long time…”

“I’m afraid Mr. Calypso no longer runs this tournament. I’ve disposed of him myself.”

“Hmm. I suppose I should thank you then. But in my mind, you’re no different than him. My mission isn’t over until I rid the world of all the freaks like you.” Dandelion fingers the embroidered dagger hidden behind her back, staring fiercely at Kane.

“I see we’re a little testy. Let’s not forget why we are here. As the victor, you are entitled to one wish. What is it your heart desires most, driver?”

“I want this contest to be over, and I want you dead! I want to put an end to this chaos and destruction that has ruined so many lives.”

Kane laughs. “Follow me.”

Dandelion hesitantly steps closer to him, then follows him around a tower of car parts. Suddenly, Kane expertly and deftly spins around and knocks Dandelion’s wrist so she lets go of the concealed dagger. He grabs the dagger and holds it up in front of her.

“Let’s not get ahead of ourselves, now.” Kane smiles devilishly.

“Hey! Give that back you creep!” Dandelion tries to attack Kane but he brandishes the knife at her throat, stopping her in her tracks.

“Be patient. I’m not going to hurt you. You just have to play by the rules.”

Dandelion glowers at him. They continue walking until they reach a chair with a man bound and gagged in it. His head is shaved and he wears large dark sunglasses. Where his hands should be only strange bloody blades exist. Dandelion gasps.

“I believe you two have met before…” Kane says quietly, then starts to laugh. Cage struggles in vain against his bonds.

“That man… I thought I killed him in the tournament. I thought I had already exacted my revenge for what he did to me.” Dandelion runs a finger delicately across her ruined face. She stares in hatred at the helpless Cage.

Kane walks over to Dandelion and hands her a revolver. “This gun has only one bullet in it. It’s your choice, Dandelion. Use it wisely.”

Dandelion stares hard at the gun in her hand, slowly raising it up, her hand trembling, pointing it at…

*BAM* The camera goes black as the sound of a gunshot fills the air. The view comes back in and focuses on an unmoving Cage, slumped in his chair, blood leaking from a wound in his head. Kane is nowhere to be seen. Dandelion stands, breathing heavily, looking at the ground.)

As soon as I fired the gun, I knew something had changed inside me.

(Dandelion runs back to Bohemian and ignites the engine. The VW bus sputters to life.)

I had had to make a choice, between the noble thing to do and the selfish thing to do.

(Bohemian bursts through the junkyard gates and onto the desert highway.)

I chose revenge.

(Bohemian zooms past a stationary camera.)

I thought I would feel ashamed of myself, I thought I’d feel like a monster. But you know what? I feel pretty damn good. It was completely justified. I was no monster, I was only a judge.

(Camera is inside the VW, showing the right side of Dandelion’s face. She smiles a little.)

Peace is overrated. I realize now that the only way to change things is to get your hands dirty. And that’s perfectly fine with me.

(Bohemian speeds off into the distance. A clock strikes midnight, and Black by Pearl Jam begins to play as the end credits roll.)

***

And thumperman, if your reading this, I couldn't remember if any of your characters became a bounty hunter at the end, so sorry if they did.
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Reply #68 - 05/16/10 at 03:58:24
 
Glad Crimson Fury came out dominant and didn't get screwed over. Same goes for Bohemian, although her ending was somewhat unexpected, but enjoyable. Can't wait to see who you have in mind next.
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Reply #69 - 05/16/10 at 04:23:57
 
Yea, I figured Id go for a more traditional Black style for them and let them have their little revenge. And besides i couldnt think of a good twist for either of them  Tongue
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Reply #70 - 05/16/10 at 14:55:50
 
Agent Stone: Dog the Bounty Hunter... before the mullet Smiley

good work. I was expecting Dandelion to get fucked over
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Reply #71 - 05/16/10 at 16:46:48
 
Get your hands dirty baby. Dandilion is now a flower not to be messed with.
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Reply #72 - 05/17/10 at 23:28:22
 
I miss my daddy…

(The voice of a little girl echoes as the camera zooms through the asylum gates, down the hallway into the solitary cell.)

It’s been so long since I’ve seen him.

(In the cell sits a little girl of about 10 years old. She has long, fine dark hair and pale skin, with very light, milky eyes. She wears an old patched dress and black flats.)

It’s hard to keep track of time in here. I can’t even tell if it’s day or night.

(The little girl stands blankly out the small window of her cell, her eyes seeing nothing.)

I wish I could be with my daddy again. He was so nice to me, he helped me do everything.

(The camera flashes back to a blurry image of a man with the girl on his shoulders, dancing with her through falling snow. They are both laughing.)

Now, this is all I have left of my daddy.

(Camera focuses in on a snow globe with a little house inside in the girl’s hand. She shakes it gently and the flakes flurry about.)

He gave me this right before he became different. This is what I remember him by, before he changed.

(Camera flashes back to a blurry image of the same man slowly putting a strange, black mask over his head.)

He had said he had a new job, working for a new man. He didn’t have to drive his old truck anymore. He got a new one, but it was scary. I didn’t like it.

(A tear runs down the girl’s cheek.)

I loved helping him do his old work in the snow. I felt so close to him…

(Camera flashes back to the man and girl making snow angels in the white powder.)

When he went away, I guess I didn’t know what to do. He was my eyes, because I was blind. Nobody else ever understood me. They wanted to put me in an orphanage, but I wouldn’t let them. I just wanted my daddy back.

(The girl is being carried away by a man with his back to the camera. The girl’s arms are outstretched in the camera’s direction, and she’s crying.)

I didn’t mean to hurt anybody. But they put me in here anyway.

(In the present, the girl looks around her bleak cell.)

One day, I had a visitor.

(Joseph Kane shows up in the cell, wearing his dark Armani suit.)

He told me that if I won his contest, he could help me find my daddy. He even said I could use my daddy’s old truck.

(Kane holds the girl’s hand and walks her out of the cell.)

I was going to be able to have my daddy again…

(An old, worn slow plow rumbles away from the asylum.)

Blackfield  Asylum Profile:

Driver Name: Gabrielle
Age: 11
Vehicle: Snow Angel
Vehicle Description: A dump truck with a snow plow attached the front. It’s painted a navy blue color. The bed is completely filled with snow that is overflowing out of the sides. A thin layer of snow coats the whole vehicle, including the windshield. Icicles hang from every surface of the truck. The windshield, headlights, and mirrors are cracked, and the grill and front fenders are askew. The body of an old snowmobile (without the tracks) is chained to the back bumper.

Stats:
Armor: 8/10
Speed: 3/10
Control: 3/10
Special: 8/10 – Frostbite – Large icicle spikes emerge from the plow, and the truck activates turbo and rams the opponent, impaling with the icicles and also freezing them (same duration as a regular freeze).

***

I’m so tired…

(Camera does the lopsided zoom through the asylum gates, down the hallway and into the solitary cell. An exhausted, strained voice narrates.)

I just wish I could fall asleep.

(Camera enters the cell and we see a skinny man wearing a faded, ripped dress shirt and khaki slacks in the same condition slumped against the cell wall. His hair has grown shaggy and is graying, falling about his shoulders.)

How long has it been now, almost a year? That sounds about right…

(The camera focuses more closely on his face. It is grotesque, his skin gaunt and taut, almost translucent, etched with lines. Huge dark circles emanate from his baggy eyes with crimson, bloodshot pupils. A thin film of drool is emitted from his agape mouth.)

A whole year without sleeping… My God. Oh, and that’s 529,643. Sheep number 529,643.

(The man stares blankly out the window, then cackles feebly to himself.)

And  all because of that cursed night. That killer… my family… we were so helpless.

(Camera flashes back to an image of the same man, looking healthy and younger, cowering in fear with his wife and two children, shielding them with his arms. An ominous shadow of a man falls over them.)

I can barely even feel the pain anymore. All I am now is exhausted.

(In the past, the shadow raises the silhouette of long, blunt object in his hands. The family shuts their eyes and trembles.)

Ever since then, I’ve never been able to fall asleep. I’m too tortured by nightmares to get any rest.

(Camera shows a flashback of the same man, half-asleep, thrashing about in the cell wearing a straightjacket.)

Their medicine has no effect on me. I must be some kind of freak of nature.

(Flashback of a doctor injecting a syringe into the man’s arm, but nothing happens. He just sits there with the same exhausted, zoned expression.)

One day, something happened to break up the monotony. I had a visitor.

(Joseph Kane, wearing his dark suit, enters the cell.)

At first, I thought it was just another one of those dreams I had while I was awake. They were happening every day. But the man was real. He said his name was Joseph Kane.

(Kane extends his hand to the pitiful man slouched on the ground. The man does not respond.)

He said he ran some kind of automobile contest, and if I won, he could help me fall back asleep.

(Kane walks out of the cell, leading the man listlessly along.)

529,647.

(The man stumbles into the impound lot of the asylum).

It seemed like a long shot, but I was willing to give it a try. I’d do anything just to get some sleep

(A ’95 Chevy Cavalier zooms away from the asylum.)

Blackfield Asylum Profile:

Name: Allen Greer
Age: 45
Vehicle: Firefly
Vehicle Description: 1995 Chevy Cavalier coupe, painted a dark green. The bumpers and fenders are rusted and falling off, some are haphazardly chained to the body. There is no windshield. A spotlight is randomly chained to the roof that flickers on and off. The trunk lid has been removed. A machine gun is mounted on the center of the hood.

Stats:
Armor: 4/10
Speed: 7/10
Control: 7/10
Special: 6/10 – Bioluminescence – A glowing, golden orb of light materializes in the trunk and emits lighting-like beams of energy at the nearest opponent, doing damage and temporarily disabling their steering.

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My love for thee grows stronger by the day, Veronica…

(Camera sweeps through the asylum gates, into the hallway to the solitary cell. The sincere voice of a man echoes down the hall.)

And one day, I know it will grow so strong that not even the grave will be able to withstand it.

(The Camera enters the cell, revealing a handsome man in a bloody tuxedo, sitting cradling a figure next to him. Her head is slumped, so her face is unseen. She wears a bloody wedding dress and her hair is long and unkempt. She looks oddly pale and skinny.)

I promise you, darling, that I will find a way to reverse that dreadful accident.

(The man tilts the bride’s head up, revealing the face of a corpse. The woman is dead, her body decaying much like Charlie Kane’s.)

We were so close to an eternity together, but the unthinkable happened.

(Camera flashes back to a view from inside a car, the man driving, the woman in the passenger seat. Time slows down as the windshield starts to crack and explode. They both start to scream.)

I’m so sorry I wasn’t strong enough to protect you my love, so sorry…

(Still in the past, the camera shows the man weeping and holding his now-dead bride to his chest, surrounded by flames and devastation.)

There are so many evil people in the world, I just couldn’t keep them away. I failed.

(In the present, the groom runs his hand through the bride’s disgusting, rotting hair.)

I will never give up on you though.

(The man kisses the corpse’s forehead.)

I’ll never let them take you away from me, no matter how hard they try. I know that soon we will somehow be together again.

(Someone knocks on the cell door.)

There’s a visitor, my dear. Don’t worry, I’ll see him in.

(A clean cut man in a dark Armani suit enters the cell.)

His name is Joseph Kane, and he is offering us a place in some automobile competition of his. And guess what?

(The groom stares up in wonder at Kane.)

If we win, he can grant us one wish! I could bring you back to life! This is just the chance we need.

(Kane leads the groom out of the cell, who is carrying the corpse in his arms.)

Never fear, my dearest Veronica. The time is short until again we shall embrace…

(A ’95 white Lincoln Town Car speeds away from the asylum. The man is in the driver’s seat with the corpse of his bride propped up in the passenger’s seat.)

Blackfield Asylum Profile:

Name: Oliver and Veronica Avery.
Age: 29 and 28
Vehicle: Verona
Vehicle Description: 1995 white Lincoln Town Car. The car used to be pristine, but has declined due to lack of care. Iron bars are chained on the front and rear bumpers and side skirts for armor. The windows are tinted black but are shattered in some places. The passenger side of the windshield is completely demolished and caved in. Soda cans are attached to the rear bumper with strings and drag along behind the car as it drivers. Machine gun is mounted on the right side.

Stats:
Armor: 6/10
Speed: 5/10
Handling: 6/10
Special: 5/10 – Til Death Do Us Part – A circular pulse wave is emitted from the front of the car and travels in a straight line until detonated.

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The body of Snow Angel looks like this: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Snowplow

And sorry if Verona seems redundant off Bloody Mary, but I think they're different enough
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Reply #73 - 05/18/10 at 00:30:02
 
Snow Angel-Sounds like a good one, I wonder who her father is, though I think I have a guess.
Firefly-Interesting
Verona-Wow.

Please continue with these.
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Reply #74 - 05/18/10 at 05:42:26
 
BizarroKing wrote on 05/18/10 at 00:30:02:
Please continue with these.


I'm pretty sure he intends to.

I think I know where Verona is going. But I was just thinking of an alternate special for him... Something like what you have, only it instantly kills an opponent at the cost of half Verona's life.

Just throwing that out there.
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