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Twisted Metal: Civil War (Read 71884 times)
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Reply #75 - 04/09/10 at 09:26:55
 
ummm.. I'm not quite sure what thats supposed to mean
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Reply #76 - 04/10/10 at 01:40:09
 
The Dizaster Child wrote on 04/09/10 at 09:26:55:
ummm.. I'm not quite sure what thats supposed to mean

Use your imagination.
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Reply #77 - 04/10/10 at 16:27:31
 
I loved it man, great work, great writing, great details... I could visually picture the whole thing.  Bravo!
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Reply #78 - 04/10/10 at 20:10:01
 
LOL @ the gif file

thanks bro, glad you guys dug it. anyone else? any negative?

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Reply #79 - 04/10/10 at 23:23:11
 
Are you shitting me? That was fucking great man. I was J/K about my faves getting axed.

Good shit man. If you have any more stories in you, put em up.
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Reply #80 - 04/11/10 at 01:37:15
 
I gotta belt.. YAY!!!

lol, thanks man. I got one more battle fic in mind, and about 4 more Chronicles. the Kane family will be exposed, as well as some sibling rivalry
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Reply #81 - 04/13/10 at 00:22:33
 
thought I'd ask what you guys wanna see got my next fic; another battle fic or continue with the chronicles?
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Reply #82 - 04/13/10 at 13:38:39
 
Chronicles work for me.

But if you put some fighting in it, it wouldn't hurt.
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Reply #83 - 04/13/10 at 19:05:47
 
yea, I hear ya about more fighting. the Chronicles are designed to give an in depth look into each person's past more than displaying fighting prowess. there will always be fighting in them to an extent, but the focus of my detail will always be the behind-the-scenes if you will

don't get me wrong, I know how important the battles are. that's why I included the piece from Hong Kong, cause to me, that was a very important fight since that was where Needles was put into the coma that led to him dreaming up Black. I pick and choose key points
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Reply #84 - 04/14/10 at 08:19:37
 
The Dizaster Child wrote on 04/13/10 at 19:05:47:
yea, I hear ya about more fighting. the Chronicles are designed to give an in depth look into each person's past more than displaying fighting prowess. there will always be fighting in them to an extent, but the focus of my detail will always be the behind-the-scenes if you will

Yea, I agree with Mag. Chronicles will totally kick ass now. And the fighting? More fist fights.
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Reply #85 - 04/15/10 at 04:11:14
 
I though the Chronicles were already kick ass, but ok. fist fights are do-able since the theme would put ppl face to face
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Reply #86 - 04/17/10 at 05:02:20
 
Well i just came to this board, and i need to catch up on all this stuff. I just read the first couple chapters, but i'll finish it and post my opinion of the whole thing. I just wanted to say that I was absolutely ecstatic when you mentioned beeswax!!!  Cheesy He was my fav v8 character of all time and even though he just got killed i loved the reference.
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Reply #87 - 04/17/10 at 06:01:18
 
he was one of my faves also, but I thought it wrong to have him compete altho I wanted him mentioned. once you start reading all of my fics, you'll see I reference alot of ppl from other games
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Reply #88 - 04/18/10 at 04:11:34
 
So, I just finished it, and I have to say that that this is probably the best twisted metal fanfic in existence. You perfectly recreate it so it could actually happen. This would work so well as the long awaited TM movie. I look forward to reading more of your stuff

Oh, and I liked outlaw stuck on darkside thing, that was pretty sweet.
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Reply #89 - 04/18/10 at 06:21:14
 
yea, that was kinda on-the-spot when I typed it. I have yet to see anyone publicly mention if it was indeed Outlaw, since the cruiser was traded in for a SWAT truck this game. it seemed to make perfect sense to me given the past

like I mentioned, I have one more battle fic in mind, as well as several Chronicles. if you didnt read the first one, the Chronicles are a deeper look into individual characters, ala X-Men Origins: Wolverine as mentioned in another thread. I already did Needles, and have started Charlie Kane. I also have Marcus Kane as well as Lil' Kane planned to round out the Kane 'dynasty'. I also have in mind to do Jamie and Karl Roberts, which will end coinciding with this fanfic.. with Karl becoming corrupt. another point to the Chronicles will give a first-person lay out in the hear of battle. in Needles' story, I gave his account of the final battle in Hong Kong from TM2, and how he survived, and came to be in the coma where he dreamt up the story for Black
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