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12-Pak - Twisted Metal Black 2
03/17/10 at 06:12:03
 
12-Pak

Driver:  Servered Sam

Sam Boomer was a rising star in the racing circuit. He was famous, and was planing to retire after the season.  But one race, something went horribly wrong, as he got into a wreck that fatally decapitated him.

After his horrible death, his head was never found. After months of searching the race track, the police has declared that it was either stolen or destroyed.  The case was unfortunatly closed due to lack of leads.

Vehicle:  12-Pak

12-Pak is the stock car that Sam drove in his races. It is also the vehicle he was killed in on the day of his horrific accident. Calypso took the liberty of repairing the vehicle after it was totaled, and gave it a Special Weapon, the Reticle Missiles.  Once a weapon pick-up of past contests, it was upgraded when installed into 12-Pak. Just hold down the fire button and use the targeting reticle on the screen to aim at an opponent while charging the missiles.  Don't hold it too long, or else the Special will overheat and the shot will be wasted.

PROLOGUE:

Sam:  I used to have it all.

(Camera pans to some rusty gates in adark. The camera is at the front where the top of them have the words "Harbor City Cemetary" welded on top. It slame through as Sam speaks.)

Sam: But then, it was all taken away along with my life.

(Camera pans through the cemetary grounds, passing tombstones and masoleums as it starts to rain.)

Sam:  When you die, you're supposed to stay dead and go into the afterlife.

(Camera pans to a tombstone that has "R.I.P. Sam Boomer" engraved on it.)

Sam: But that wasn't a case for me.

(Soon, a hand is seen coming out of the ground as a human figure came out. He was in a dirty racing suit and kneeled down turning away from the camera.)

Sam:  I dunno what the hell happened, but I was sensing something was wrong.

(Soon, Sam looks up at the camera, revealing his head missing, the neck having an open spot where muscle and part of the spinal cord was showing.)

Sam:  However, someone came and confirmed it.

(Shots of Calypso sitting on 12-Pak looking at Sam.)

Sam: I knew Calypso by the stories the other racers told.  This occasion, he seemed to have my old race car.  He said he wanted to help me. I tried to say no, but what he showed me changed my mind.

(Camera showed Sam looking in the rear view mirror of 12-Pak.)

Sam: My god, my head was gone.  Calypso said I was decapitated in the wreck that claimed my life. And he said if I accepted to play his game and won, I would regain my head from the fan who stole it.

(Sam and Calypso are seen shaking hands.  Camera then cuts to outside the cemetary as 12-Pak slams through the gates and speeds away.)

Sam:  Whoever has it, he'll regret stealing from the dead.

(Cut to black. End movie.)


MIDDLE

(Minion explodes.  As pieces fly into the air, a big pieces flies up and hits 12-Pak, knocking Sam out.)

Sam:  I was out cold when that chunk of my opponet's vehicle hit my car. It was almost like I dropped dead again.

(Camera pans to see Sam's body slumped over the whel as he speaks.)

Sam: I thought I had gone back to the afterlife, but then, I remmbered how I became like this.

(Camera pans to a flashback with Sam in a winner's circle.)

Sam: I was a race car driver, and the best damn racer of my time.  I was getting a lot of fame even when my career began.

(Camra pans to 12-Pak racing in an oval track.)

Sam:  Any given Sunday, I put on the best race I could. Some of the other racers would grow jealous of my fame, and that led to the day.

(Camera pans to se Sam in the driver's seat.)

Sam: That day, I was thinking of retiring after the season ended.  I had all the money I needed, and my career's end was in sight. Until it happened.

(Soon, a rival race car bumps into 12-Pak causing it to roll over and get totaled.  Sam's head is seen flying into the stands, blood flowing from the neck.  Camera pans to the car as ambulances and ploice cars swarm around it.)

Sam:  It was blank after that, since I was killed at the time.  I was decapitated, and the one who did it was in jail for my murder.  But as far I heard, the police never found my head. They said it could've been stolen.

(Camera pans to Sam "waking up".  Camera then fades in to show 12-Pak surrounded in flames.)

Sam: And when I win, whoever stole my head will wish he haden't stolen from the dead.

(12-Pak is seen leaving the arena.)

EPILOGUE:

(Dark Tooth explodes as the ice cream cone detonates, 12-Pak escapes the area as a mushroom cloud develops over the area.)

Sam:  I did it. The race to survive is over. I had won.

(camera cuts to Severed Sam seeing Calypso on his trone of broken car parts.)

Sam:  I went to Calypso, and told him I was ready for my prize.  I wanted to see the asshole who stole my head.

(Camera pans to a part of Calypso's lair to see a drunk male strapped to a makeshift guillotine made of broken car parts.  His mouth is covered in duck tape to muffle his screams.)

Sam:  It was one of those drunks that the sport sometimes caters to.  They are an unruly bunch.  Their drunker stupor sometimes leads to violence and drunk driving deaths.

(Calypso is seen throwing Sam his head, which has now devolved into a mere skull covered in spiderwebs.)

Sam:  Calypso also gave me my head back, but it had unfortunatly rotted for so long, I could never reuse it.  So I told him I wanted a replacement.

(Calypso is seen smiling.)

Sam: I sensed Calypso was smiling, like he was liking what I said.  He told me my new head was waiting in the guillotine nearby.

(Camera shows Calypso giving Sam a piece of broken glass as he goes to the rope.)

Sam: Hell, any head would do in this kind of situation.

(Sam cuts the rope with the glass, screen goes black as a sickening slice is heard.)

Sam:  With my new head, I can take on a new life in solitude.  I will have the best new life I can.

(Camera pans to Sam in the driver's seat, the drunk's head now on his shoulders, as the camera pans to behind 12-Pak as it speeds away.  Camera cuts to logo, and credits roll as "Back In Black" by AC/DC plays and scens from all character movies are shown.)

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12-Pak was a character I wanted to do since ESP released Twisted Metal Head-On Extra Twsited Edition.  Some of the returning characters in my fanfics will follow the bio given to them in Twisted Metal Lost (the section of ETE where it had the levels of the canned sequel Twisted Metal:  Harbor City.)
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Re: 12-Pak - Twisted Metal Black 2
Reply #1 - 03/17/10 at 06:41:15
 
Lol, since 12pak doesn't have a head, I'd make his story:

PROLOGUE:

*Gurgle gurgle*

MIDDLE:

*Gurgle gurgle*

EPILOGUE:

*Gurgle gurgle*
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Reply #2 - 03/17/10 at 06:48:34
 
Oddz wrote on 03/17/10 at 06:41:15:
Lol, since 12pak doesn't have a head, I'd make his story:

PROLOGUE:

*Gurgle gurgle*

MIDDLE:

*Gurgle gurgle*

EPILOGUE:

*Gurgle gurgle*



Okay, the speech is done in the style of Crazy 8's driver, No-Face.
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Reply #3 - 03/17/10 at 07:20:01
 
Holy shit, man! That's some crazy ass Stephen-King-Doctor Seuss-shroomed-up-hippie-guy story skills you got! Damn! That was whack! Thanks for the fanfic! Keep it up! I love your stories!
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Reply #4 - 03/17/10 at 07:33:52
 
Thanks, but Dr. Seuss and Stephen King got nothing on me!
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Reply #5 - 03/17/10 at 07:53:22
 
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Thanks, but Dr. Seuss and Stephen King got nothing on me!

And the shroomed up hippie guy does...
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Reply #6 - 03/17/10 at 08:11:43
 
Yeah, but I did more than him.

1.  I burned down Whoville by throwing whatever plant it was on in the fireplace.

2.  I helped The Grinch kill Horton.

3.  I got revenge on Sam I Am for forcing that guy to eat Green Egs and Ham. I mean, does that little prick know where they came from?

4. I hopped on the pop from Hop On Pop, and my feet penetrated into his stomach Bruce Lee style.

5.  I gunned down Marven K. Mooney because I asked him to leave and he would not comply.

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Reply #7 - 03/17/10 at 08:16:00
 
Bro, you're fucking hilarious! When I used to teach summer school for this one kiddie camp, there was this one kid who was terrified of 'The Foot Book'. It creeped the shit outta me. It makes me wonder what happened to him at home.
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Reply #8 - 03/17/10 at 08:34:15
 
That was great man, top notch stuff. I really like 12-Pak, as I really like racing!
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Reply #9 - 03/17/10 at 09:34:31
 
Thanks for the great reviews, evryone, the next story will be Manslaughter, and like 12-Pak, will follow the story claimed on Twisted Metal:  Lost
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Reply #10 - 03/17/10 at 09:44:57
 
Your great at this man, if I made a character, would you make a story?
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Reply #11 - 03/17/10 at 09:54:40
 
The_Dead wrote on 03/17/10 at 09:44:57:
Your great at this man, if I made a character, would you make a story?



Sure.  I just need some info. PM me so we don't clutter this thread.
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Reply #12 - 03/18/10 at 13:14:34
 
Great job as ussual.

Keep up the good work.
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Reply #13 - 04/17/10 at 04:57:45
 
In tm lost i thought 12 pak was a cheesy, rushed character idea that they just threw in there. You have made him legit, just believable enough, wiht a perfect ending. Great work
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Reply #14 - 04/17/10 at 09:54:44
 
maxamillionaire wrote on 04/17/10 at 04:57:45:
In tm lost i thought 12 pak was a cheesy, rushed character idea that they just threw in there. You have made him legit, just believable enough, wiht a perfect ending. Great work


Thanks.  I think if Twisted Metal Harbor City does get revived for the PS3, 12-Pak should be a aprt of the roster.
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