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Outlaw - Twisted Metal Black 2
03/11/10 at 23:52:26
 
Outlaw


Driver: Officer Brutality

Officer Brutality earned his nickname for his use of excesive force when he was on the job.  As a policeman working for the Harbor City Police Department, he wanted to make sure the streets were safe, no matter the costs.  Because the crime rate was very high in the city limit, he knew he had to take maters into his own hands.

He soon started his war on crime, beating criminals into submision, even killing the criminals that dosen't pose a threat.  His acts have gained him a posse compsed of other police officers who not only assist in his illegal actions, but also destroy any evidence pointing the deaths of criminals and escaped prisoners to the Officer's police brutality.

Soon, the people felt safe.  They would praise Officer Brutality for his heroic deeds, unaware of how he pulled them off.

Vehicle:  Outlaw

Outlaw is a police cruiser used by Officer Brutality on his job. It was decommisioned after his arrest and sentencing.  The weapons were stolen from the armory of the Harbor City Police Department, including its special weapon, a riot gun loaded with shotgun shells.  There is a secret mechanism that allows the riot gun to swich to grenades.  It is up to you to find out how.

PROLOGUE:


Brutality:  This is what my hard work get me!

(Camera pans to the Blackfield Asylum sign.  Camera scrolls through the desert.)

Brutality:  I did what I had done to protect the people, to stop crime from rising any higher.

(Camera slams through the security fence and reaches the run-down building.)

Brutality:  Those assholes said what I did was wrong, and many of those jerk-off criminals shouldn't be killed for the crimes they comitted.

(Camera is seen going down a hallway ful of cells.  It passes a guard reading a newspaper to a door marked "C-1 Soliary". It enters to see a white male with light brown hair and a mustache, wearing a black police uniform with the police insignias torn off, revealing his skin through the holes, his gun holster is empty, and he is wearing black sunglasses.)

Brutality:  They think that killing criminals instead of arresting them would give them a bad reputation, and any cop using excessive force would be fired and charged. That's why I'm stuck in this hellhole asylum.

(Screen fades to black.)

Brutality: But one day, I got a visitor, and that's when I saw an oppurtunity.

(Camera shows Calypso near the cell door holding a smoking gun.)

Brutality:  I knew Calypso from reputation. Hell, the feds have him listed as number two on their most wanted list.  By the look of the smoke coming out of his piece, he must've slaughtered some good little pigs to get to me.  He wanted me to be in his contest.

(Brutality is seen facing Calypso in his padded cell.)

Brutality:  I told him to give me a damn reason why I should compete. He convinced me.

(Shot of Calypso holding a badge.)

Brutality:  He said one of the officers on my squad squaled our motives, and if I won, I would recieve payback on the rat.

(Brutality is seen recieving a pair of car keys. Then it cuts to outside the asylum as Outlaw is seen speeding through as an alrm sounds, then slaming through the security fence.)

Brutality: How could I refuse the chance to kill the rat who ruined my career?

(Cut to black. End movie.)



MIDDLE

(Camera shows Minion exploding. As pieces of the tank fly into the air. One big piece flies up and hits Outlaw, knocking Brutality out.)

Brutality:  That chunk of metal was like a taser shock to my neck.

(Camera shows Outlaw surrounded in flames, then it cuts to Officer Brutality slumped behind the wheel as he is heard speaking.)

Brutality;  I thought I wouldn't have to worry about the past when I was out cold, but I was wrong.

(Camera shows Brutality on the streets.)

Brutality:  When I started off, everone else on the force had high expectations of me.  Everyone thought I would be the best there was.

(Camera shows brutality arressting some Hispanic drug dealers in a deli and sending them to jail.)

Brutality:  But one day, I arrested some dealers that were selling to some kids.  They were illegals, and I hoped they would be deported or sent to jail.

(Camera shows newpaper of the two dealers walking free. the words read "CHARGES DROPPED ON ILLEGAL ALIENS; SET FREE WITHOUT DEPORTATION.)

Brutality: What the hell was that judge thinking?  I had evidence of their deeds, and he lets him go scotch free?  

(Camera shwos Brutality's face close-up.)

Brutality:  That day, I knew the justice system was pussing out.  I decided to take matters into my own hands.

(Camera shows Outlaw (unmodified at the time) speeding into the dealer's hideout as Brutality came out. the dealers got on the ground and placed their hands behind their heads.)

Brutality:  The scumbags saw me as if I was gonna arrest them again. But I knew better.

(Brutality drew his handgun and opened fire, killing the dealers by shooting them in the head several times.)

Brutality:  Thanks to a friend in the force who shared my views helped me edit the footage caught on my dash cam.

(Camera cuts to a room where Brutality and another cop edit the dash cam fotage, replacing Brutality with what looks like a man dressed in plain clothing.)

Brutality; We made it look like the bastards got killed by one of their rivals.  The next few busts was good.

(camera shows Brutality beating a black criminal to his death with a nightstick with other cops.)

Brutality: Soon, other cops who were tired of the catch-and-release crap joined me.  We kept the streets safe and had the footage edited to protect our legality, but all would go to Hell so fast.

(Camera pans to the editing room where the cop is seen editing footage.)

Brutality;  One night, we were about to edit our latest deed to protect society when something went wrong.

(Soon, a SWAT Team came in and gunned down the cop in the computer.  Brutality was tasered before he could draw his gun as the SWAT officers open fire at the other cops.)

Brutality:  I dunno what happened, some civilian must've seen us and filed a complaint, or something else.  But I was sent to the asylum for what they call "excessive force" while my squad was killed in a gunfight trying to save me.

(Camera cuts to Brutality waking up, then showing Outlaw surrounded in flames.)

Brutality:  But now, I will take out whoever caused all this.

(Outlaw is seen leaving the Arena as the camera fades to black. End movie.)


EPILOGUE

(Dark Tooth is seen exploding as the ice cream cone detonates, Outlaw escaping as a mushroom cloud envelops the area.)

Brutality:  I had won the contest.

(Officer Brutality is seen facing Calypso, who sits on his throne of broken car parts.)

Brutality:  I went to Calypso and asked for my prize.  He was more than happy to deliver.

(camera pans to a makeshift shooting range where a target shaped like a human is shown.  Tied to the target is a white man in a black police uniform, but he has a police badge on him.  His mouth is covered in duck tape to silence him.)

Brutality:  So, it seems Lieutenant Lunas was behind this.  I should've sensed it from the start.

(Camera shows Lunas disgusted as he watched the beating.)

Brutality: He never wanted to take part in any of our busts. He was always questioning our methods on subduing the criminals.

(Camera cuts to the editing room, where Lunas is seen outside with the SWAT Team.)

Brutality:  And he knew where we edited the dash cam footage.  No wonder he ratted us out. He never liked how we did business and reported us to the chief of police.

(Camera cuts back to Lunas attached to the target as he struggles, making muffled screams as a scene of Calypso giving Brutality a handgun is shown.)

Brutality: Just before he left, Calypso gave me a bonus, my old firearm. He told me to serve justice as I saw fit as he turned and left the area.

(Brutality is seen facing the camera, then it cuts to show him smiling while aiming the gun at Lunas.)

Brutality:  Now that's the kind of citizen I would appreciate, even if he is one of the FBI's Most Wanted.

(Screen goes black as several gunshots ring out.)

Brutality:  After that event, I realized that the police can't be trusted.

(A shot of Lunas' police badge fades in.  It is stained in blood, and has a couple bullet holes dented in it.)

Brutality:  So I ditched the cop get-up, and decided to become a vigilante.

(Camera shows Brutality in the driver's seat of a black sports car. he is now in a black t-shirt and wearing different shades.  he has also shaved off his mustache and dyed his hair black.)

Brutality; From now on, I will serve as judge, jury and executioner to the scumbags unlucky enough to cross me.

(The camera shifts behind the sports car as it speeds off.  Camera will soon cut to logo, then credits roll as "Back In Black" by AC/DC plays and scenes from all character cutscenes play.)

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Yeah, I know the Special Weapon was used in another fanfic, but since I wanted the rooftop tazer to be used by Ozone, I had to make something up.
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Re: Outlaw - Twisted Metal Black 2
Reply #1 - 03/12/10 at 00:22:32
 
Oooh. Fancy! But I still can't believe the guy just shot Lunas. He should have made the bastard eat his own eyes or something. Outlaw worked SO hard just to win the contest. Why end it so quickly? Have a little fun. Chillax. Choke a bitch.
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Reply #2 - 03/12/10 at 04:58:26
 
niiiiice....

I was waiting for him to get into another car from another TM.. like he becomes the new Crimson Fury or something
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Reply #3 - 03/12/10 at 05:31:10
 
I know the ending is lackluster. But a few headshots was a good idea to me at the time. This was possibly the first fanfic I completed for my series, so it should be understood that it won't be the best.

Besides, I have some stories that would be pretty brutal (like Ozone and 12-Pak.)
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Reply #4 - 03/12/10 at 05:37:03
 
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I know the ending is lackluster. But a few headshots was a good idea to me at the time. This was possibly the first fanfic I completed for my series, so it should be understood that it won't be the best.

Besides, I have some stories that would be pretty brutal (like Ozone and 12-Pak.)

Where? Did you already post them? I wanna read! I've been joined at the hip with "Advanced Topics in The East Asian Challenge for Human Rights" all day, and I really want to read something that doesn't suck.
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Reply #5 - 03/12/10 at 07:20:03
 
DoktorStrychnine wrote on 03/12/10 at 05:37:03:
Where? Did you already post them? I wanna read! I've been joined at the hip with "Advanced Topics in The East Asian Challenge for Human Rights" all day, and I really want to read something that doesn't suck.


Not yet. I only posted Sweet Tooth and Outlaw since they tied in a poll I did.  I will post them next when I can.
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Reply #6 - 03/12/10 at 07:26:44
 
Thank you, Muffin. You made my day. <3
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Reply #7 - 03/12/10 at 13:13:24
 
Nice story man.

Good work.
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Reply #8 - 03/13/10 at 06:22:23
 
Magnum wrote on 03/12/10 at 13:13:24:
Nice story man.

Good work.


Thanks,mag, and thanks to all who liked it.

Ozone will be up next.
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Reply #9 - 03/13/10 at 07:45:43
 
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Thanks,mag, and thanks to all who liked it.

Ozone will be up next.

Dude I'm so excited! Your fanfics are amazing! You sure know how to channel character motives, emotion, and personality! I've read a million essays as a English tutor and I must admit that your creative writing abilities demonstrate your sagacious personality! Keep it up!
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Reply #10 - 03/13/10 at 07:59:46
 
DoktorStrychnine wrote on 03/13/10 at 07:45:43:
Dude I'm so excited! Your fanfics are amazing! You sure know how to channel character motives, emotion, and personality! I've read a million essays as a English tutor and I must admit that your creative writing abilities demonstrate your sagacious personality! Keep it up!


I take it that you're now a fan of my works. Smiley
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I take it that you're now a fan of my works. Smiley

I am. I lie reading them since I'm stuck in class. Your fanfics make chemistry, Russian History, CORE Philosophy, Liberal Arts Math, and my other classes so much less boring. If it weren't for you, I'd be a narcoleptic at the keyboard. They also cheer me up. i just began spring break today, so I flew to my parents' house, dug out the dusty PS2 jammed in TM2 and expected life to be the same as 6 years ago. But it's not! It's been six years and I suck now! I still play as Grimm, my usual bro, but I died twice already at the Junkyard. I shat a wall. NOOOOO!!!!  We used to own Warhawk and Minion together...My TM skills are dead and replaced with the ability to write essays! I'm so depressed... Grimm probably doesn't want to look at me anymore and my memory card will probably spontaneously combust in shame. Andy idea how long it will take for the experience to grow back again. It damn better come back now that there's news of TM on PS3!
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Reply #12 - 04/17/10 at 04:52:20
 
So I came upon this board and discovered your orgasm-inducing ideas for the next tmb and now I can't wait to read the rest.

Great realistic character, I like how its a police cruiser, wasn't really a huge fan of the original tmb outlaw's truck. On to the next character!
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Reply #13 - 04/17/10 at 09:53:34
 
maxamillionaire wrote on 04/17/10 at 04:52:20:
So I came upon this board and discovered your orgasm-inducing ideas for the next tmb and now I can't wait to read the rest.

Great realistic character, I like how its a police cruiser, wasn't really a huge fan of the original tmb outlaw's truck. On to the next character!


Yeah, I never liked TM:B's either since it was very different than the Outlaw of the first two TM's, so I wanted to make a TMB fanfic with Outlaw as the cruiser it started out as.
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Reply #14 - 05/01/10 at 01:46:45
 
Loved it especially considering the other Outlaw stories in the games.
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