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Reply #15 - 01/21/10 at 13:22:27
 
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Reply #16 - 01/21/10 at 22:02:04
 
Poor Shadow.

More good stuff Still enjoying it..
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Reply #17 - 01/21/10 at 23:54:33
 
thanks guys...
sorry about killing your fav off first, these first parts of the story were written last year - nothing intentional
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Reply #18 - 01/22/10 at 00:01:59
 
Chapter 6: Live and Let Die

::Camera set on bird eye’s view as Spectre is speeding off down the road  to escape Mr. Slam::
::Camera goes into the cab of Mr. Slam::
“Goddamn is this little bugger quick, none of my missiles are even reaching him!” Whittlebone shouts. “Hmm if he keeps this up he’ll run straight into the Junkyard and they’ll be no escaping my jaws then”
::Camera switches over to Spectre::
(Good I’m losing him he can’t keep up with me- he should eventually give up)
::I give a quick glance down a side road and see a warehouse in the near distance::
::I take the next turn and head straight for the open garage door::
( I’ll hide in here for a while until that front end loader goes away)
::Upon entering the warehouse the camera pans around showing that its rundown decaying and abandoned::
::Camera zooms onto the radar screen that shows a small blip on the screen with the text Mr. Grimm::
“Grimm?” I stammer, “As in Grim reaper?” “No way he can’t be real”
(According to my radar it says he’s directly in front of me)
“He’s cloaked!” :: I quickly switch to my special:: ::My missiles have a lock on his bike::  ::FIRE:: “Suck on these Grimm!” I shout.
:: I watch as my missiles pass through the wall as if there’s nothing even there:: “woah” was all that I could come up with.

::Camera switches over to Mr. Grimm as he watches the two incoming ‘ghost missiles’::
“Speeeeecttrrreeee!!!” “Imma kill you, you little pansy bitch!” Grimm roars in outrage.
“Who the fuck shoots through walls, what kinda bullshit guerilla war tatics is this?”
::Grimm slides his bike around and takes off on nitrous trying to out run the incoming missiles::
::Grimm looks into his side view mirrors and see’s that the missiles are cutting through houses and trying to cut him off:: ::Up ahead he spots Grasshopper cruising the two lane crossroad:: (Perfect!) ::Grimm launches out two rico discs and knocks grasshopper onto her side, he then slams on the brakes as he skids around the underbelly of grasshopper:: :: He takes off just as the missiles come crashing into the roof of the buggy and explode taking out Krista Sparks::  “Its on now!” Grimm shouts as he heads back to the warehouse.  (25 years of combat training and being a Vietnam veteran will be the key to my next victory) ::Grimm readies his scythe and crashes through the window of the warehouse:: “Your mine you little bitch!”

::Camera switches back to the in-car view of Spectre::
“Holy shit, this guy is insane!” I scream and throw my car in reverse.  ::Slam enters the doorway and blocks my escape:: His giant teeth come crashing down and start chomping wildly at the air in front of him:: “SHIT!” ::I swerve my car to the right and gun it sliding just barely out of range from Slam’s jaws of death:: :: As I race down the isles of the abandon warehouse I see Grimm in my rear view gaining on me:: “Oh fuck!” ::my eyes widen to what lays in front of me:: “A wall?!” (What do I do What do I do What do I do) ::Without thinking I throw Spectre into reverse and floor it::

::Camera fly’s back to Grimm::  ::With one final glance in his side view he see’s slam not budging from entrance:: ( That fat fuck Whittlebone thinks he’s gonna kill me after I take out this guy) ::Grimm refocuses his attention on the blue car in front of him:: (Just what are you trying to pull) ::He gets ready to throw his razor sharp scythe:: (What could he possibly do in this situation) ::Grimm watches as Spectre deploys the jump jets and the car begins to sail over him:: “Impressive reflexes kid, but!-”

::Camera pans around in a circle around both Grimm and Spectre three times::
::Quick flash into the cockpit of Spectre:: “I did it!” I’m going to get -
::Camera returns to Grimm’s arm still holding onto the scythe:: “-I’ve already predicted this move of yours”  ::Grimm extends his arm up and the scythe pierces through the bottom of Spectre::

::Camera goes back into Spectre:: (What….this can’t be…how can this be) ::My car’s damage indicator is flashing red all over:: (This is it, this really is the end) ::My car lands and continues to roll backwards and finally comes to  stop:: “MOVE! Come on!! MOVE!!!” ::I look up to see Mr. Grimm waving ‘goodbye’:: (Why’s he waving?) ::In an instant  my car is picked up Mr. Slam:: ::Images  of what just happened to Twister flash in my mind:: “oh no” is all I mange to come up with “This really is the end”

::Camera into the cab of Mr. Slam:: ::Whittlebone opens the door to his vehicle and shouts to Mr. Grimm who is sitting idle on his bike:: “I DON’T WANT THIS SCRAP HEAP” “CATCH!” ::Whittlebone launches Spectre like a pitcher throwing a fastball straight toward Grimm’s bike::

::Camera returns to Mr. Grimm’s face:: ::Without hesitation he activates his shield:: ::Even so the impact of Spectre knocks Mr.
Grimm through the warehouse wall:: “Impossible!” He shouts as he watches Spectre fly even further off into the distance.

::Camera follows Spectre’s flight through a couple of houses and a crash landing into a junkyard::
::Dazed and confused I look around:: ( I can’t believe I’m still alive) ::Spectre’s engine starts:: (I can’t believe that this car still runs - although my damage indicator is at its max level) “Shit, I can’t afford to even take on a single machine gun bullet”

::In pure irony a giant tanker rolls up next to me and ignites my car and the surrounding junk cars on fire::  ::Time seems to freeze and the entire world comes to a hault:: ::The ground directly in front of me:: ( I lost, I can’t believed I actually  agreed to participate in this, I’m doomed to burn in hell for all eternity) (If only I never sold my soul, how stupid am I?) :: My body gets sucked into the giant hole and I begin my decent into darkness:: ::Thud my body hit’s a rock solid ground:: ::The environment is blistering hot, fire lava pools are everywhere:: ::Screams of pain and suffering fill my head until the point that I can’t take it anymore:: :: I start clawing at my throat but its no use - I wouldn’t die again anyway::
<Greetings, long time no see pal> :: I turn around and see  my poor torture and demonic soul smiling back at me:: <So now what’s your plan> “uhhh, well I-” I start to stammer unable to come up with an answer ::CRUNCH:: :: I turn back in horror to see a rather ogre looking demon peering down upon me:: ::His voice gruff he speaks “What brings you to my humble abode”

“I, I lost in Twisted Metal”
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Reply #19 - 01/22/10 at 00:14:28
 
It's cool man. No worries.


Still enjoying it, and look forward to seeing how it all plays out.
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Reply #20 - 01/22/10 at 00:14:33
 
Chapter 7: Who Won't be Fooled Again?

::The giant demon lets out a deafen roar::
“Calypso!!” “So it was him who sent you to this place!”
(This demon knows the host of the contest and I can tell that its not found of him)
“Are you the demon that he mocks?”
::The demon roars again::
“He now mocks me after he stole my powers!!” “How dare he!”
::Realizing that this is my one and only chance for survival::
“Yeah” I go on “He was laughing about the fact that he stripped you of your power” “He called you worthless and a disgrace to serve in Hell”
“ENOUGH!” The demon roars again “ I don’t need to be reminded of my mistakes” “ I know how he stole my contest from and imprisoned me here!” “I don’t need you to remind me of it!”

::I try to reason with him:: “Can you send me back?” “If I win, I’ll wish that the contest be returned to its rightful owner.” “If I lose then I will remain here in Hell forever for you to torture”
::The demon seems hesitant about accepting the terms:: “I don’t think that your worthy enough for me to return” “you have no chance of winning.”  “Your request is denied!”

“Your right, I’m not going to win in this state” ::I look over at my soul still grinning evilly at me:: “I need to become one with my soul again - in him lies my instinct and my wrath”  “I can win Twisted Metal if I’m whole again”

::The demon stares at me for a while and then says:: “Perhaps you are correct.” he continues, “ I will reunite you with your soul, but you will have to still prove to me that you are worthy to be sent back to the land of the living”
I ask “How can I prove myself to you…uhh demon?”
He replies with “My name is Minion and you will prove yourself by beating me in a race”

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Reply #21 - 01/22/10 at 00:33:11
 
Good job on this fanfic man!
I am really enjoying it.
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Reply #22 - 01/22/10 at 01:38:13
 
thanks and thanks, i'm trying to make it more action oriented now, i never thought trying to describe a battle scene could be so hard to do
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Reply #23 - 01/23/10 at 21:27:29
 
Chapter 8: Brains and Brawn

::the camera returns to the surface on the freeway where the battle between twister and Mr slam had just taken place:: Pedestrians hurry to get off the exit ramps to avoid getting into the heat of another battle ::a giant black blur screams past, the camera pulls back and shows Darkside taking Hammerhead head on::

::HONK HONK!:: The horns of dark side sound as the truck tries to t-bone Dave and Mike’s Giant machine of death.

“I don’t think so you fat bitch!” Mike yells.  “Is that all you can do is try to ram us?!” Dave adds.
::Hammerhead’s 4 wheel steering allows the truck to easily dodge the incoming behemoth with ease::
::Darkside passes by, but then launches her special in reverse ::HONK HONK::
::Dave and Mike are stunned at how fast her truck is reversing::
“Watchou- Mike tries to warn Dave.
::CRUNCH!:: Ha! Got em! Dollface says - that’ll teach them..
“FUCK YOU!” Dave screams as he floors Hammerhead ::Hammerhead begins to climb up and over Darkside crushing the roof of her semi”

::HONK HONK!:: ::Darkside pulls forward and knocks Hammerhead off her truck:: ::Dollface looks in the rear mirror to see Hammerhead gaining on her::
::Camera swings to the rear of dark side and see’s oil being sprayed from the back of her truck:: ::The sound of Hammerhead’s engine revving is increasing by the second
::Camera focuses in on Hammerhead
::Hammerhead runs through it and begins to slide:: “Shit we hit oil!” Mike yells as Dave watches Darkside spin around in a 180

“I have you now!” Dollface shouts ::Camera focuses on the grill of her semi as a freeze missile launches and strikes Hammerhead:: ::Hammerhead is covered in thick ice its engine still revving up.
::Darkside backs up and charges in:: “Its over!” she exclaims” ::HONK HONK!:: Darkside charges once again at Hammerhead::

::Camera goes back into the cab of Hammerhead to show that both Dave and Mike are grinning ear to ear:: “Now Mike! Dave shouts, use the special!” (The entire time the battle had been raging Mike had been charging up Hammerhead’s special attack)
“Suck on these nuts!” Mike yells as he depresses the special attack trigger.
::The ice around Hammerhead explodes off as the big green machine roars off towards Darkside::

::Camera goes back and forth between Darkside and Hammeread:: ::KA-BOOOM:: ::Both trucks collide head on:: ::The smoke and debris clear only to show that both vehicles are still standing:: ::Hammerhead’s entire front is pushed in while the entire passenger side is exposed:: ::Glass and metal from the impact managed to break a quarter of Dollface’s mask::
“My face! She screams “My beautiful face!” ::Dollface begins to cry tears of rage as she wheels Darkside around:: “You are going to pay for what you’ve done!” ::Camera pivots and looks through Darkside’s spider webbed winshield and sees Hammerhead sitting idle facing her::

“ Looks like she’s going to ram us again” Mike says .
“Yeah, Guess she’s all brawn and no brains after all” Dave adds
“Does she realize that half her truck is missing?” asks Mike
::HONK HONK!:: :: Darkside once again accelerates to breakneck speeds to try and ram Hammerhead.
::Ka-plunk!:: Mike drops a gas can in front of Hammerhead and then activates the shield::
“Front row tickets” Dave says with a smile

::Dollface see the trap that was set and tries to avoid it but-::
[Quick recap flashback] [Slow motion collision of the two trucks show’s that Hammerhead used the jump jets at the last second  in order to crash through Dollface’s cab] [Dave turns Hammerhead around and parks next to the steal embankment on the freeway] “Dave looks over at Mike and says “Prep the gas can to be dropped” There’s only one way for her to try and dodge this, and if she does her entire truck will be open”
[End flashback]

::Darkside tries to avoid the gas can by going left as Dave had predicted but its too late::
::Mike detonates the can and watches as the fire engulfs the battered semi and finally Dollface::
::Screams could be heard coming from the cab as Dollface is burned alive::

::Dave puts the truck into gear and drives off past Darkside’s burning wreck:: As they go about 1 mile down the road a massive explosion sounds:: “I guess the fire reached her gas tanks” Mike says as he looks out the back of Hammerhead’s window”
::Dave looks out his rear view mirror:: “Yeah, I guess so”
::Camera raises up and away only to focus on a huge billowing smoke cloud::

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Reply #24 - 01/24/10 at 05:48:02
 
REALLY GOOD STORY!!! Grin If only u could make them into short little vids. Thanks 4 your time. Smiley
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Reply #25 - 01/25/10 at 20:01:31
 
Chapter 9 - All Hope is Gone


::The scene opens up in Harbor City Town Hall:: ::Darkside’s explosion shakes the building::

::Everyone in the building is horrified at what’s happening to their city::
“Our children are still in school!” A frighten woman cries out
::more cries echo off the walls as the town hall falls into chaos::
“Why hasn’t the army done anything to help?”
“What about the police force?” “Can these…these monsters be stopped?!”

::The Mayor looks around the room: (There’s been over 300 casualties so far and its only 11am) (This is exactly what happened to Midtown) He thinks to himself

“People” ::The Mayor raises his hands to silence the crowd:: “The army doesn’t want to be involved, The police, SWAT FBI and ATF are stretched thin - their body count is piling up” “An attack just like this has happened in Midtown very recently. “Their town is completely destroyed and is now smoldering rubble.”

::The scene switches but the speech from the mayor continues::
“We are without support, without hope, and without prayers” “Our only hope relies on an officer that is competing in this event to eliminate the hostiles and to save our town.” “ I don’t even know if we will make it through the night”

::Camera shows various cars tearing up the city as people try their best to get out of their way and survive:: ::Body litter the streets no discriminately - women, men, and children scattered  motionless on the sidewalks and roads::

“But until then I would urge you to contact all of your loved ones and advise them to stay put and seek shelter as best-”
::The camera returns to the town hall::
::The door to the town hall opens and a female officer rushes in and behind her are 12 men armed to the teeth with guns grenades and explosives:: ::Each of the men are wearing a murky orange jump suit with a white cross pattern embedded in it::
::Every head in the room turns and stares at the group of men::

“Who are these people?” The mayor asks the officer.
She replies with “These  men are willing to put their lives on the line in order to stop this crazy contest once and for all” “They are of the Church of Christ”

::Bradley who is their leader steps forward:: “I am from Midtown as are some of my brethren , my town has suffered a great loss thanks to Calypso.” “We wanted to stop them then, but couldn’t - but now we have over 100 members ready to put a stop to this and save your town in the name of Jesus Christ.” “We call ourselves Religious Enforcement For Sinners or REFS for short.” “As God as my witness we will put a stop to these heretics once and for all!” ::Bradley looks up at the Mayor:: “please allow us to serve this town.” “We are your only hope.”

::The scene changes to an alley:: ::The camera goes down the alley and up to the headlights of a car:: ::The camera pans up to show an ice cream truck:: ::Inside the truck sits Marcus Kane - a man who is plagued with a split personality and was deemed too dangerous to be kept alive:: Marcus sits staring out the window of Sweet tooth:: “What’s wrong Marcus? Needles asks for the 20th time. ::Marcus slides his eyes over to his rear view mirror and sees Needles staring back at him - a hideous clown mask with a twisted smile and a chewed up red clown nose:: ::Marcus locks eyes with Needles’s one red eye:: “Everything” scoffs Marcus.  “You’ve killed everything that I’ve ever loved, and you even killed the both of us in the last Twisted Metal contest.”
::Needles stares briefly at Marcus:: and then says “But we’re alive again”
“My family is still dead thanks to you” Marcus fires back.  “I’m not participating in this stupid fucking game again”
::Needles doesn’t bat an eye at Marcus and says:: “But we’re back"
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Reply #26 - 01/25/10 at 20:10:42
 
Chapter 10: Rest for the Wicked?

::Camera goes to bird eye view over a large suburban town::
:: The camera zooms in on a lone vehicle which is Axel::
::Camera pans around to the front of Axel to reveal that its Axel’s son Joseph strapped between the giant wheels::
(If I win this Twisted Metal, Calypso promised to unite me with my mom and dad) he thinks to himself (it’s a shame that I have to kill others to get what I want, but I want a family again)
::Axel’s radar alarm starts to go off to warn of a nearby car:: (My first battle!)
::Axel turns the corner to see Crazy 8’s car completely destroyed and barely able to move::
“Frank the Tank?” Axel says. “ I remember my dad used to take me to his fights when I was a child”
::Camera switches over to Franks car to show the inside of Franks car riddled with bullet casings:: “Who were those fucking bastards in the orange jump suits?” “They came out of nowhere!”
::Frank looks up to senses Axel several car lengths away:: “Oh shit” He says “Come on kid make this quick, I think I suffered enough.” 
::Camera goes back to Axel::
“Sorry Frank, but you will not die by hands, I have far too much respect for you”
::Axel reverses and roars back down the main road away from Crazy 8::
::Camera zooms back in the interior of Crazy 8:: “He’s letting me go?”
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Reply #27 - 01/25/10 at 20:24:54
 
wow, that is fucking amazing I think they should make a TM novel.
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Reply #28 - 01/25/10 at 20:41:35
 
Chapter 11: Four Man Rush

::Camera rushes into a battle already taking place::

“Damn this guy is tough!” Bruce yells as he attempts to light up Roadkill yet again with machine gun bullets.
::Roadkill reverses  and Thumper tries to T-Bone him::
“To Slow!” Lieutenant McClain shouts. ::McClain grabs his radio and shouts “Col Mason where are you? I’ve encountered a hostile and need support”
::A voice is heard over the radio:: “I’m on my way son just hold fort until I get there”
::Camera returns to the in car view of Thumper and zooms in his rear view mirror to see an incoming dump truck barreling through houses to join in the fight:: ::The radar screen blips with the words ‘Manslaughter’::
“No fucking way! Bruce yells, this is some bullshit!”
::Camera flys over and goes behind Warthog charging into battle to aide Lt McClain::
::Warthog immediately fires off 4 homing missiles and his patriot special attack at Thumper::
::Thumper throws his car into reverse and hit’s the jump jets sailing up and over Manslaughter::
::Bruce watches as all 7 missiles strike Manslaughter at once, and to his surprise do little damage::


::Camera gets a close up on the driver of Manslaughter for a brief second, his eyes are a deep red his skin burned up and leather like. “Diiiiiieee” He croaks.
::Manslaughter attempts to launch his rock slide special at the two approaching cars::
::A freeze missile hits and stops Manslaughter dead in his tracks::
::Camera shows a close up on Col Mason’s radio:: “We got him now!” Lt McClain exclaims.
“I’ll take out Thumper” Says Col Mason and I want you to finish off this dump truck”
::Warthog drives across two lawns and races around the left of Manslaughter to cut off any possible escape::
::Camera whips around to show Roadkill charging in head on to deliver the final blow to Manslaughter::
::BOOM BOOM BOOM Warthog  is hit by 3 ricochet discs launched by Thumper::
::Warthog goes flying and crashes into the rear of Manslaughter causing the ice to shatter everywhere::
::Camera flys back in to Roadkills car to show a stunned expression on Lt McClain’s face “What just-” he starts


::Camera swings back around and is looking through Roadkill’s window to watch as what looks like an avalanche of rocks head his way::
::McClain is torn to pieces and the rocks tear his car apart::
::Warthog who is now dazed and confused and wondering how he has ended up on his roof, looks over in horror to see Thumper propped up on his hydraulics showing off his custom made triple flame thrower::
::A roaring flame rips though the cab of Warthog and into the rear of Manslaughter::
“Yeah baby, I like it hot!” Screams Bruce.
::The camera shows Manslaughter trying pinned between two flaming wrecks and attempts to back over the burned out carcass of Warthog””
“Damn, that big guy still ain’t dead yet” Bruce says “He’s got the most armor that I’ve ever scene.
::For a second Bruce contemplates cloaking and leaving: (If I take this guy down the rest of this tournament should be cake)
::Thumper reverse again and launches a gas can  directly over top Manslaughter, the explosion engulfs all three vehicles for one massive explosion::
“Take that you armored freak!”


::The Camera zooms in on the enormous fire to show Manslaughter speeding out of the fire and pulls a 180::
::Camera pans all around his massive truck:: ::Inside the truck warnings flash everywhere stating that he hitting a critical damage level. ::The driver punches his warning devices:: “Diiiiiieeee” He hisses.
::Manslaughter charges at Thumper::
::Camera turns back to Thumper::
“Why won’t you fucking die?” Bruce starts to panic.
::Bruce presses the cloak button and his car vanishes from sight and radar::
::Manslaughter stops::
“But…Where did you go..” Black says as he looks around the area.
::Unfortunately Black smashed his warning system of incoming projectiles::


::Camera shows Thumper uncloaking behind Manslaughter and unleashes a fully charged reticule attack::
::As Manslaughter explodes Bruce watches Black crawl out of the cab and fall to the ground::
::Somehow the lurching Black manages to stand::
“What in the fuck is that?” Bruce says startled by the appearance of 8ft tall menacing demon.
“You….can’t….kill me…I…am…forever..
::Black starts making his way towards Thumper::
::Bruce in fear, throws his car in reverse spins around and takes off down the road and into the night ::
“Sorry, but I don’t mess with the devil” He says looking in his rear view mirror


::Camera returns to Black:: He yells “Mr….Asssshhhh!”
::Black looks over at his burning dump truck:: “Mr….Aaasssshhh” He yells again
::The ground opens up underneath Black and Manslaughter and both driver and vehicle are pulled to the depths of hell::
::Black smiles:: ::He’s finally going home::
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Reply #29 - 01/25/10 at 21:50:43
 
Chapter 12: The Whole is Greater Than the Sum of its Parts

::Camera zips to the bowels of hell to show a birds eye view of a death race already in progress between Spectre and 12pak::
::Camera zooms in on 12pak - a fiery demon behind the wheel snarls and looks in the rear view mirror with displease:: “How is this man gaining on me like this?” Minion growls “Its almost as if I’m racing Cal…”::CRHUNCH::
::Camera pans around to the rear bumper to show that Spectre rear ended 12pak and is now locked bumpers::
“This is what I get for listening to you!” I yell at the demon who once was my soul
[Relax…just do as I say] it snaps back
::Camera zooms ahead around the bend and at the finish line::
[I’ve seen this race many times before, and I know all of his moves]
::Camera shows the cars still stuck together:: ::12pak is desperately trying to shake Spectre off it’s bumper while trying not to oversteer::
::Back into the interior of 12pak::
“Damn it! He’s still attached to my bumper!” “You’re not going to run me off the track! “GET OFF OF ME you worthless human!” Minion roars
::it’s the final turn before the finish line the camera shifts to the edge of the track to show both cars  start to enter the turn::
[PUNCH IT! CUT THE WHEEL OPPOSITE OF THE TURN] the demon screams
::Camera swings behind Spectre to show that the car is starting to break free::
CRRRRAAACCKKKKK
::12pak’s bumper is torn off along with the outer portion of its trunk and spoiler::
[CUT THE WHEEL BACK THE..]
::Spectre slides up against of 12pak scraping the entire left side::
“One step ahead of you!” I shout back
::12pak spins out from the side impact caused by Spectre::
“FUUUUUUUCCCCKKK THIIIIS!” roars Minion as he watches Spectre dash on by.
::Camera shows Spectre crossing the finish line in reverse::
“ I won” I say to myself
[We won] the demon quickly adds

::In a white flash I’m lifted back to the surface Spectre is fully repaired, engine revving away::
“lets rock!”
[lets rock!]


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