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Twisted Metal: Harbor City (fanfic)
01/19/10 at 20:12:57
 
Chapter 1: Empowering the Meek

Note: I’m using :: :: for scene descriptions  and camera/audio and ( ) ( ) for people thoughts and “ “ for dialog


The scene is 1 hour after Carl and Jamie won the Twisted Metal and tried to put a stop to Calypso - however things didn’t work out has they had hoped…

"I'm so fucking pissed at you Jamie, I really could kill you!" Carl yells, "Do you want me to put you out of your misery right now, I'll gladly do it"
:: Jamie doesn't even look at her brother - she can't believe that he can treat her this way - this was not the same person she grew up with.
"I know you can hear me- look at me!" he yells. ::The cop car comes screeching to a halt:: "Get out, get the fuck out right now" ::Carl kicks Jamie out into the road and speeds off::

::Jamie has pretty much given up on everything - betrayed by her own brother and the police force she contemplates suicide is the only true escape from this nightmare.

::Calypso appears before her in the road:: ::Jamie feels for her mouth and starts to sob:: "I know I know Jamie, I’m terribly sorry about what happened, see even I can admit when I've gone too far" he tells her ::with a snap of his fingers Jamie gets her mouth back:: ::Jamie is stunned, a thousand questions race through her head:: ::This man is evil whets the catch, why would he just take back a wish::

"Why Calypso, why would you give me back my mouth when I didn't enter or win the next Twisted Metal?" "Well", Calypso replies, "I know that’s not what you truly wanted - I do have certain rules to follow whether you can believe that or not, but.."

::Jamie interrupts:: "What rules?" ::Calypso says, "Yes, there are rules with this combat that I must abide by, If I didn't then I would be stripped of running this contest." "Most cars have one driver and one wish, however in your case there were two drivers and you both have to agree on one wish" "There were another pair of drivers in a previous tournament that were girl crazy and they both agreed to wishing for "babes" as they called them"

"Your case is different since I don't think your wish was to "shut up" ::Calypso chuckles:: "That's not funny" Jamie remarks. ::Calypso crosses his arms:: "I did however purposely misinterpret his wish only to show you what kind of person your brother really is" He adds, " I don't think you realize how blind you are to his corrupt ways"

::Jamie is outraged:: "What are you talking about, my brother is pissed at me for getting in his way of his wish" "No my darling, you have got it all wrong" Calypso sneers "Jamie, give me your hands, I'll show you just what kind of person your brother really is"

::Reluctantly Jamie takes a hold of Calypso’s hands:: ::In an instant Jamie is hit by a flash back of events of Carl taking bribes, killing innocent civilians, planting evidence and even confiscating drugs and later using them::

"Calypso, is...this really true, are you making any of this up, how can he do such a thing?" Jamie asks. "No Jamie, Calypso replies, this is who he really is, he even killed an agent Sheppard of the FBI who entered my contest to help put a stop to me" Calypso added "He killed him only because your brother couldn't stand the fact of being alive" "Oh my god, not Agent Sheppard, I knew him, he was a good person"

"I'm sorry things had to be this way, but I had no choice to show you" Calypso adds "I can't make things right, however I can save you seat in next years competition, and you will be going up against your brother - to put a stop to his ways"

Jamie replies "But I don’t have a car - Outlaw was his car"

"Calypso, is...this really true, are you making any of this up, how can he do such a thing?" Jamie asks. "No Jamie, Calypso replies, this is who he really is, he even killed an agent Sheppard of the FBI who entered my contest to help put a stop to me" Calypso added "He killed him only because your brother couldn't stand the fact of being alive" "Oh my god, not Agent Sheppard, I knew him, he was a good person"

"I'm sorry things had to be this way, but I had no choice to show you" Calypso adds "I can't make things right, however I can save you seat in next years competition, and you will be going up against your brother - to put a stop to his ways"

Jamie replies "But I don’t have a car - Outlaw was his car"

Calypso smiles "look behind you Jamie" ::Jamie turns around to see Crimson Fury rebuilt and purring, ready for action::

::Jamie smiles:: "I've always liked the color red"
"I've even went as far as having all the windows tinted so no one will know your identity" ::Calypso looks down at his feet:: "This is as far as I can go in aiding you." "You have a car, a seat in the next year's Twisted Metal and a purpose"
"Thank you so much for doing all of this" ::Jamie turns back around:: "I was really wrong... ::Calypso is gone:: Jamie look around frantically, but she can't find him anywhere.

::A voice calls out to her from the distance:: "You don’t have to thank me darling, just make sure you complete what you set out to do next year, I don’t want your ghost attaching itself to that car because of a job that was left undone"

::Jamie slides behind the wheel:: "Now, she thinks to herself, "All I have to do now is fake my own death to make Carl think that I am completely out of the picture, and from there I can plot my revenge."

::Crimson Fury roars down the road and the camera fades to black::
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Reply #1 - 01/20/10 at 00:23:53
 
OOOOOooo Smiley
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Reply #2 - 01/20/10 at 00:27:23
 
Nice, this would take place after the events of HOETE, right? And to clarify, Agent Sheppard originally drove Crimson Fury, correct?
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Reply #3 - 01/20/10 at 01:50:07
 
Sling wrote on 01/20/10 at 00:27:23:
Nice, this would take place after the events of HOETE, right? And to clarify, Agent Sheppard originally drove Crimson Fury, correct?

Yes, yes, yes.
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Reply #4 - 01/20/10 at 04:07:11
 
I had originally started this post on the old TMA but alas the servers went down(I cant believe that I had saved it). Magnum should know this story like the back of his hand by now...god knows how many times that I've tried to continue and end it and I just couldnt do it. Anyway, I wrote another 4 pages out today and progressed it a little bit further.  i'll break up the sections in smaller parts so your not staring at a wall of text.

I think I'm about half way done with the story - i think. 

Quick explanation:

Basically the story starts right at the end of Twisted Metal head on when Jamie and Carl's wish gets twisted, however, the black and the colorful world have completely merged into one world(Calypso from TMHO is the one that I'm using for the story). Calypso can now pull contestants from both worlds - and can resurrect deceased drivers. And for reasons unknown at this point he's not waiting a whole year for the next competition to begin and needs it to begin now

Cast of cars              drivers

Sweet tooth              Marcus Kane(Needles Kane) (tmb)
Mr. Grimm                Mr. Grimm (from tmb)
Outlaw                      Agent Stone (tmb)
Brimestone                Preacher aka Jebidias (tmb)
Crimson Fury             Jamie Roberts (tm2/ho)
Crazy8/Yellowjacket   No Face (tmb)
A9 Mind Tank             Carl Roberts (tm1/ho)
TMB tanker                Dr. Gilbert (original character)
Spectre                     myself
Roadkill                     Lieutenant McClain (original character)
Warthog                    Colonel Mason (tm1)
Thumper                   Bruce Cochrane (tm1/tm2)
Axel                          Joseph - axel's son (original character)
Junkyard Dog            Billy Ray Stillwell (tmb)
Shadow                     Raven (tmb)
Twister                      Amanda Watts (tm2)
Pit Viper                    Angela Fortin (tm1)
Grasshopper              Krista Sparks (tm2/ho)
Darkside                   Dollface (tmb)
Darskide(2nd form)    Mr ash (tm1)
Manslaughter             Black (tmb)
12pak                       Minion (tm2)
Darktooth                 Charlie Kane (tm1)
Warhawk                  Sergeant James Koolig (original character)
Hammerhead            Dave and Mike (tm1)
Mr Slam                    Simon Whittlebone (tm2/ho)

also, I am pulling some of the scenes, character behaviors from the bleach anime series and working in my chapters. so if anyone follows it, you can see some correlation between my story and the show/manga
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Reply #5 - 01/20/10 at 04:17:42
 
Yay, you got Raven Grin


I like where it's going so far. Can't wait to read more.
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Reply #6 - 01/20/10 at 05:01:56
 
Chapter 2: Knee Deep

:: Camera fades back in at the midtown pd::
::Carl is standing facing his sgt::
“What happened in Twisted Metal”? Sgt Doyls asks - his face tensing up.
“Well,” Carl starts “We won but Ca-”
“No BUTS!” Sgt Doyls yells has he slams his hand down on the desks. “Damn it! Its too reckless for the police force to compete every year, Do you know how many innocent lives are at stake?”
“And where the hell is Officer Jamie?”
::Unsure of what to say or even think at this point Carl has one choice and one choice only::
“Calypso killed her”, he mutters.
“How”? Asks Doyls.
“Does it matter- she’s dead - killed by that bastard Calypso” Carl snaps back. “I want in on the next TM, I’ll set things right- I swear to it. “ “This has been my fight from the beginning and I plan on finishing it.”
:: Doyls is not pleased with Carl’s tone nor his answers, unfortunately there aren’t any other drivers who are willing to enter in this contest. Carl is all Sgt Doyls has right now::
::Hesitantly he agrees to let Carl have yet another shot in next year’s Twisted Metal::
“However, things will be a bit different.” “ The midtown pd is working with leading scientist and researchers in developing a personal tank that’s controlled by one’s mind.” He goes on, “I’m sure you’ve heard about the Research facility Apocalypse 9?

:camera fades out to black:

::camera pans around a science lab, Sgt Doyls is speaking with Dr Frank Gilbert, while Carl is going over some notes on Project Mind Tank::

“Carl, I would like you to meet Dr Gilbert, he’s A9’s lead researcher and developer.” “You will be practicing with him and his team, everyday until next year’s Twisted Metal.”
“Practice?” “What for?” Carl objects. “You’re saying that I gotta come here everyday and do what exactly?”
Dr. Gilbert interjects, (with a thick German accent) “this isn’t your everyday run of the mill auto Mr. Roberts.” “If you are to look inside of this vehicle, you won’t find any gas pedals or breaks or even a steering wheel.” “This behemoth is controlled by you. Your brain waves, your emotions and your personality.” He continues, “We don’t want you to break our little toy, nor do we want our little toy to break you” He adds “You understand now, don’t you?” “If this tank isn’t properly in tune with your mind and body, you won’t have such an easy time controlling it.” “I want this contest to be over once and for all, do we have an understanding Mr. Roberts?”
::Carl is stunned from the doctor’s speech:: ::This machine is really going to become with me:: I might not even need to make a wish I’ll just run Calypso over and that’ll end everything::
“Yes Dr. Gilbert“, Carl says “ I understand completely, shall we start the training program today?”
“Follow me Mr. Roberts.” ::Carl and Dr Gilbert board an elevator and begin to descend a few hundred feet below the surface to the testing zone::

::Camera fades to black::

“Damn it” I can’t  dodge this bullet” Agent Stone blurbs just before the bullet enter his skull for the 200,000,000,000th time.  ::Time seems to stop and then rewind once again as Agent Stone is holding the gun ready to take aim:: “I’m not going to screw up this time”  Gun fire starts erupting from Stone’s rile yet again:: ::As always  the guy across the building manages to fire off one round::  “Why do you forsake me Lord?” “Have I not suffered enough for my mistakes?” “I’m trying to make things right, I swear I am”  :: The bullet seems to stop directly in front of his head:: ::Enter Calypso from the doorway behind Stone:: “I don’t think that ‘He’ can hear you in this dimension Mr. Stone”.  ::Agent Stone whirls around in disbelief:: “You tricked me! You sent me to this Hell, where in which I couldn’t win! Didn’t you!”  ::Calypso closes his eyes and calmly replies:: “ I gave you every opportunity to correct YOUR mistake, but it seems as if you managed to screw that up as well.” “However,” he continues on “ I came here to make a deal with you to get you out of here, If you so kindly will accept what I have to offer you will be transported  back to the land of the living and be at the driver seat of Outlaw”  ::Agent stone seems hesitant:: “And if I re-” “If you refuse” Calypso cuts him off, “Then you will be here forever and there’s nothing I can do.”  “Ok, I’ll play again this year, but why do you need me?”  ::Calypso stands with his arms folded:: “Lets just say that there are certain things that are I can’t stop on my own.  “Also, the next competition will start in 2 weeks and not next year” ::The camera starts to fade to black::  ::Calypso and Agent Stone start to dissipate along with the surround buildings and the rest of the world around them:: “Your friend Captain Roberts is planning on launching a full scale war, I’m planning on bringing everyone back  for this one” ::Agent Stone eyes widen as Calypso grin widens:: “And yes that means the clown too”  

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Reply #7 - 01/20/10 at 05:15:48
 
Chapter 3: All Pawns Fall Down

Only the sound of foot steps can be heard along with muffled voices:: 
::Camera continues to stay black, but the audio is starting to get clearer and clearer::
::Camera is incredibly blurry and is trying frantically to unblur itself::
:: Nurses and guards and yelling and screaming for help::
“Someone get the doctor!” “She wont stop bleeding!” “Someone do something before we lose her!”
::I awaken in a dark and damp asylum cell:: 
“What the hell is going on now” I think to myself “Is someone dieing here again”
(This place has always been dark and depressing - its been surrounding me consuming me and eating at me)
::The screams continue for a little while longer and then silence::
:: I sit up and lean against the wall to see if I can hear anything::

(Nothing?) (This is highly unusual since this is an insane asylum there’s always some idiot who can’t sit still for five freaking seconds)  ::I bang on the wall:: ( I guess I’ll be the idiot today) “Hey?!” “What’s going on over there”  ::No response:: (hmmm, I’d better check the door)  :: I get up and start heading towards the door:: ::flashes of red and black fill my mind and an image of myself that’s all cut up and demonic appears in front of me:: “You left me and now IM BURNING” the image shrieks “IM WAITING FOR YOU” (not again not again not again not again not now not now not now not now go away go away go away go away) ::The image fades away:: “Its not real its all in my mind its not real it doesn’t exist” ::The door opens and Calypso enters in:: “Oh that demon of yours is very real indeed” “Who are you, and how did you get in here, and what’s going on out th- ::Calypso raises his hand:: “You need not worry, he says “ I am Calypso  and I came here in search of one last driver for my competition.” “Unfortunately she tore her own throat out before I could get to her.”  ::Calypso stares at me for a minute:: “You will do fine he tells me.” “It seems that there is something that you desire and would do anything for” (He can’t know, there’s no way he knows about that) “So it seems you’ve sold your soul to the Devil (He knows!!)”Between you and me I had to escape that very same place that your soul now burns.”
“How do I get my soul back? “You have to tell me!” I plead, “I can’t take this anymore I just can’t take it.” ::Calypso grins:: “Then join my contest if you win I’ll show you a way that you can retrieve your soul and become whole once again” (A contest huh, I’ve never been one with much luck) “What’s this contest about?” How do I win?”
::Calypso smiles again:: “You’ve entered in Twisted Metal all you need to do is be the last one alive and you win.”
::My eyes widen (I heard about this contest, so many people have died from it) “Last…one…alive?” “Does that mean that I have to kill people?” “I’m not the killing type, do you really think that I’m fit for it?”
::Calypso folds his arms:: “I suppose you could go and hide and wait till everyone else is dead or you could can fight for victory, its your choice” ::Calypso waves me to exit the door:: “Come with me now the contest is starting in an hour and I’m going to have to go over your vehicle with you . ::I start following Calypso and my mind is wandering:: (Can he really  save my soul, I can’t believe that I’m actually doing this, I probably wont live) “ I don’t own a car or a truck though”  ::Calypso sighs:: “Relax, I have one waiting for you.”  “The name of the car is Spectre , from what I know the car is pretty quick and nimble so you should be able to escape death easily.”  “What happened to all the guards and doctors here?” I ask Calypso and he replies with “I killed them all just to get to you”  ::Camera fades to black::
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Reply #8 - 01/20/10 at 13:38:38
 
Hell yea I remember. Good stuff as always.

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Reply #9 - 01/20/10 at 18:09:34
 
yup, def diggin this. but wasn't Agent Stone the driver of Crimson Fury in the original TM?
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Reply #10 - 01/21/10 at 00:00:21
 
yes, but Agent stone was also the driver of outlaw in TMB too
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Reply #11 - 01/21/10 at 00:10:02
 
maartyrr wrote on 01/21/10 at 00:00:21:
yes, but Agent stone was also the driver of outlaw in TMB too


yeah, but those two Agent Stones were different.

Make that three, since Agent Stone was in Small Brawl, piloting Crimson Fury.
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Reply #12 - 01/21/10 at 03:10:18
 
maartyrr wrote on 01/20/10 at 05:01:56:
“Damn it” I can’t  dodge this bullet” Agent Stone blurbs just before the bullet enter his skull for the 200,000,000,000th time.

I laughed so hard at this, but yeah man great stories. I enjoyed reading them.
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Reply #13 - 01/21/10 at 03:53:23
 
Chapter 4: The Good The Dead and The Blind

::Camera focuses tightly up against a large tire rolling at a fast pace::
::Camera whips around and gets just above and behind a giant monster truck::
::Camera whips around into the interior of the truck to see a driver and a passenger::
“Dude change this shit Dave, I’m tired of this pussy shit your listening to” “Give me something that’s heavy I wanna get into this shit this year. Put on some Chimera or some Fear Factory…yea Fear Factory. Hit me with that Demanfacture shit.”

::Dave looks over at Mike with disgust:: (What the hell is wrong with Dragonforce) “Do as you please, but you better dead on when we get into battle”
::Mike smirks:: “Just don’t park us up a tree like last time” ::Mike presses the  CD changer button:: “This shit is so brutal”

::Camera zooms in on the radar screen::
::One medium sized blip and one small one appear on the radar::
“Duuuuude we got company at 9 o’clock, LETS ROCK BRO” Mike shouts
“Alright lets do this Mike” Dave adds. “When we work together no one can stop us.”

::Camera whips back around to the rear of the car as Hammerhead lunges forward, roars and makes a hard left::

::Crazy 8 slides around to the left of Shadow  and tries to flank her with machine guns bullets, As soon as Frank is directly behind her Raven unleashes waves of mines in hopes that Crazy 8 will be ripped apart::
(That damn bitch thinks that I don’t know what she’s up to)  ::Crazy 8 slides and swings wide right:: “Time for the shocker!” ::Frank slams the button down for his special attack and yells:: “Two in the pink and one in the stink!”  ::Raven throws into a 180 the car into reverse and guns it down the road in reverse::  “Shit shit shit shit shit shit” she screams as her car is engulfed in electricity.  ::(No choice but to use this now) as Frank’s muscle car is baring down on her:: With a press of a button the roof of shadow  opens and Raven is ejected out :: ::Attached to her chair is a chain gun and a flight stabilizer that stays with her car at all times::  “Take that you freak!” Raven screams out as she opens fire on Crazy 8”
::Bullets rain though Franks windshield and hood::  ::Frank retracts the electricity currents on Shadow::  (That bitch, using a dirty trick as this and who-) ::Frank sense’s something big coming rather quickly behind Shadow:: ::Crazy 8 veers off the road down a side street::

::Raven presses another button and the seat drops back into her car::
::Camera zooms in on warning lights and flashing radar of Shadow::

“What the…-

::BOOOOM:: ::Hammerhead runs right down the middle of her car crushing everything including her::  ::Hammerhead whips and the two drivers admire what they’ve just done. :: Shadow is completely in half oil and blood pour out in one big mess just a few feet from the car’s grill.

::Mike looks over at Dave:: “Dude, did Calypso  upgrade our truck or something?” “Cuz we didn’t even use our special or anything that was just a ram right?”
::Dave who has an equally stunned look tries to reason why she died so easily:: “ I think that other car weakened her and we just finished her off”
“The other car!” “That’s right!” “Dave lets go get  the other one now!” Mike shouts overjoyed that they scored the first kill of the night.
“No” Dave replies “ I don’t want to waste my time killing weak cars”
::Mike looks puzzled:: “Well what’s the difference, killing is killing right?”
::Dave puts on his sunglasses:: “Mike do a search on the radar and locate Darkside or Mr. Slam, I want to show our truck’s true strength off” “We know Harbor City the best out of any of the other drivers around - We can lose someone just as easily as we can find them”
::Mike is searching on radar looking for the biggest blips:: “I just found Darkside and Slam both of them are on the freeway along with Mr. Grimm, Yellow Jacket, Twister and Spectre.”
“Know what that sounds like to me Mike… It sounds like the start of fuckin mosh pit to me!”
::Camera pans around the back of Hammerhead and watches as the truck takes off and merges onto the freeway::
::Camera fades to black::

::Camera opens up at Apocalypse  9 underground training facility ::
“Damn it Damn it Damn it!!” “That fucking asshole prick I’m going to kill him!” Carl Roberts shouts as Sgt Doyls gives him the bad news that Calypso started a new tournament in Harbor City and didn’t invite him.  “And sir, there’s seems to be some good news it appears that your sister Jamie is alive and currently in the tournament”
(What, how can this be there’s no way she could live without eating or drinking anything let alone be ok to drive) (Shit if the precinct finds out what really happened then I’m done for) “Thank you  Doyls, it looks like I’m going to have to crash  Calypso’s little party (And kill Jamie along the way)  ::Doyls is hesitant:: “I don’t think the Mind Tank is street ready, I mean you barely had any time to hone your skills, I can’t afford to have that vehicle malfunction and take out innocent bystanders!”
“We are out of time Sergeant!” Roberts fires back” “We need to stop him and we need to do it now before he destroys any more cities.  “Alert the entire police force SWAT and military.” Stop those cars and take out Calypso” “That’s an order!”
“What about Jamie?” Doyls asks “Can we pull her out of the competition?”
(Hmmm I wonder) ::Carl pauses for a second:: “Do you know which car she’s driving?”
“Yes sir, he replies.” “She’s the driver of Crimson Fury”
(This is tooo perfect, I’ll eliminate her then the other drivers and finally I’ll get rid of Calypso once and for all!)
“Ok Doyls, got it, over and out” ::Carl hangs up the phone::
::Carl begins his walk  to the elevator pondering on how to make killing Jamie look like an accident::
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Re: Twisted Metal: Harbor City (fanfic)
Reply #14 - 01/21/10 at 04:01:15
 
Chapter 5: The Quick and The Dead

::Camera fades back in for a bird eye view of the freeway:: ::The cars look like out of control toys as they dart to and from points and hopping over the median trying to dodge machine gun bullets and missiles:: ::Camera zooms in on Spectre with the ass of his car up against the guardrail::
“Oh holy fuck!” “What did I sign up for” I yell.  (My eyes can’t even keep up with this - this Twister car is just too fast for me) ::I fire a missile hoping to take her by surprise:: ::Twister makes a quick swerve to the right and easily dodges my fire missile:: ::I watch in horror as the fire missile zips by  Mr. Slam::  ::A loud explosion sounds but it seems that there’s hardly any damage done to his Rig. :: I focus my attention back to the ever persistent  Twister::
::Camera whips around to over the wing of Twister:: ::Amanda ready’s 6 fire missiles::  ::Amanda watches Spectre’s  attempt to re-cross the median onto the North bound  lanes in order to have her missiles be canceled out by pedestrian traffic. ( I don’t think so hun) ::Amanda floors it and races over  to Spectre and attempts to cut him off and force the car to stay on the south bound lanes:: “Don’t run suga, you’ll just die tired” ::Amanda launches all 6 of her missiles at once ::  ::The fire missiles scream as they race for Spectre’s driver’s side door::
::Camera switches over to Spectre::
“This isn’t going good ( I’m going to die) ( I can’t dodge her) ::One missile hits, two hit, three. :: I start swerving from left to right trying to throw the missile off:: ::one missile passes over my hood another by my passenger door and the last hits my left rear bumper sending my car skidding- skidding straight towards the open jaws of Mr. Slam:: ::In my crazed  and daring escape I accidentally  hit a trigger that sends out an oil slick:: Instantly Twister’s wheels become slippery and she slides on by firing her machine guns cursing  and screaming::  ::I watch in horror as Slam catches Amanda with the mouth of his Rig::  (Oh my god they look like giant daggers of jagged metal on his front end loader, almost like a great white shark) ::My eyes in disbelief, I can’t stop thinking that I was about to end up in his clutches so easily:: (What is he doing? he’s lifting her car high into the air…Is this his special attack?) ::Half dazed and half curious to see what his vehicle is capable of I watch as Twister is  lifted higher and higher into the air:: ::I can still hear her screams, and her crying out for help::  ::CRUNCH!!:: The giant mouth comes crashing down to the ground ::CRUNCH:: CRUNCH:: CRUNCH:: Three more slams:: ( Is she still alive? She can’t be not after that)
::Camera switches over to Mr. Slam and his driver Simon Whittlebone who is a disgruntled construction worker::  (Why is that guy just sitting there? Is he charging up a Reticle?…No, its been far too long) (He must be in shock) ::Simon snickers as he see that Amanda’s corpse is impaled on one of his jagged teeth:: (This ought scare the shit out of this kid) ::Simon grabs one of his levers and cranks it forward:: ::The mouth of Slam closes shut like a bear trap:: ::blood, guts, engine parts, and oil splatter on the pavement below:: Simon pulls the lever back to its resting position and the jaws reopen once again:: the remainder of what was Twister falls out with a loud thud his the ground::  ::Simon hit’s the horn twice signaling his kill:: He looks over at the driver of Spectre and waves him to come at him::
::Camera switches back over to Spectre:: (No way did I just see that!) ( And now he wants to fight me?) (I’m not sticking around to be his encore) :: I hit the gas  and speed out of there like a bat out of hell:: :: I glance in my rear view mirror and  see that Slam is actually following me:: I take the first exit ramp and get off the highway::
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