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June 15,2010

Calypso's office

Calypso:Its been three years since the last twisted metal contest. Far too long! This time over 50 contestants have entered,and half of california is evacuating.So many competitors so little time...

As he says that spectre reads his letter...

Scott:dear contestants you will be starting off in different areas around the city.When the light on your dashboard blinks green, your dreams might just come true! Safe driving,Calypso

Scott: I better fuckin get what I want, that basterd f'ed me before.

And with that siad the contestants ride out of the positions  searching for a target.As the night draws closer sweetooth is getting annoyed

needles:Not a single worthy soul, what shame I wanted to show'em my new ride.O'well I guess I'll have to deal with these pussies calypso calls contestants!

As sweetooth roars down the road big dump aproaches... luaching a mineral berage out of his bed slicing though sweetooth armor like butter. The ice cream truck driverlessly swerves:big dump crushes him under his 10ft tall tires

White:The clown man is dead,but I need to find my brother...

His 100 ton truck rolls down the street braking asfalt every step of the way.END SO FAR

Alright remember this is based off the comic I'm makeing so its shorter,well I tired goodnight

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Re: twisted metal 50cal:fan fic
Reply #1 - 01/13/10 at 00:55:26
 
several miles away Razor cuts his way though traffic as well as knockin a few heads,he hits Grimm's chopper and he flips over the hood.

Mr.Grimm:Fuuuu

crack!Grimm's jaw brakes in half and falls under his limping body. As Grimm climbs up on his hogg Razor luaches a hub cap ninja star right into his back! In a mere second he explodes ,and razor boosts though the flames. After geting into a parking lot he checks his radar, but before he can pass a glance Railspike ram right into his rearend.

Chong:Megaton!(in headset)

Ted(repling)I'm called Railspike but you won't be alive long enuf to correct yourself!

The diesel train flips Chong's station wagon like a piece of foam,by now his car is in flames and his dying screams pierce though the dimly lit street.About a hundred yards away darkside injecks nos into the engine,in a flip of the switch darkside barrels twards Railspike honking his horn repetivly. Ash t-bones him right into a parking space and Ted Is dead...Not saying a word a dark shadowy figure comes out of the drivers side window of darkside and scratches a line next to several others,on a piece of sheet metal attached to his roof... Grin
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Reply #2 - 01/13/10 at 01:14:42
 
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Reply #3 - 01/17/10 at 18:17:08
 
As Calypso's helicopters record his masterpiece,he finds mansloughter parked inbetween two flaming cars.The pilots are lined with sweat,they know he has weapons and Calypso had told them about Mansloughters "disloyalty".

Calypso: (radoing pilots) Him!? That fool my slave will make short work of you!

Just then Mansloughter releases a hell storm of flaming rock, the video transmission goes out and the apache dives right into a sanoco across the street.

As Blacks gazes at the flames Bigdump plows into him,Mansloughters rim is gimped and he is forced to head down the street. Black jumps out of the truck and prys the wheel off,as he climbs back in Bigdump is facing him at the other end of the block.
All you could hear is the flames curling up the buildings and faint gun fire in the distance,as soon as it started it was gone and both contestants push there heavy hualers at top speeds.
Black pulls a pin out of a genade and toses it on to Bigdump,White looks under his foot and his eyes grow wide...his cab explodes and is ingulfed in flames. The mining truck wobles into a burning biulding..and it colapses...OK feedback please! need opinions advise etc... Undecided
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Re: twisted metal 50cal:fan fic
Reply #4 - 01/18/10 at 17:49:50
 
I like the direction you're going with, especially with including your own characters. i'm assuming the link is for descriptions of said contestants?

my only issues are one, grammar. i'm a snob when it comes to spelling, punctuation, etc. so don't be offended by it. and 2, you need more detail. you don't give enough in-depth of the situation.. yea, we're supposed to use our imaginations to a point, but I wanna visualize the same thing you are

keep it going. I wanted to use some of my characters in a fic, but wasn't too sure how everyone would take it.. I might jus say fuck it and do it. plus, I got my own modern update on a very old skool character Wink
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Re: twisted metal 50cal:fan fic
Reply #5 - 01/19/10 at 02:06:09
 
The Dizaster Child wrote on 01/18/10 at 17:49:50:
I like the direction you're going with, especially with including your own characters. i'm assuming the link is for descriptions of said contestants?

my only issues are one, grammar. i'm a snob when it comes to spelling, punctuation, etc. so don't be offended by it. and 2, you need more detail. you don't give enough in-depth of the situation.. yea, we're supposed to use our imaginations to a point, but I wanna visualize the same thing you are

keep it going. I wanted to use some of my characters in a fic, but wasn't too sure how everyone would take it.. I might jus say fuck it and do it. plus, I got my own modern update on a very old skool character Wink

Finally I needed an opionion, I just wish I had microsoft word like my highschool it would make the grammer problem disapear. O well mybe I could just copy it on to google(when you search ,it corrects!)
Well I should have siad before english is my weakest subject, I just wanted to try this out. You know mybe if you make more fan fics I can study them,Wiat! before I say one more thing the fan fic is based off the comic, so I had to heavily modify it becouse the pictures told more than the words...ok that was a mouth full!
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Re: twisted metal 50cal:fan fic
Reply #6 - 01/19/10 at 03:59:49
 
Calypso's office:

Calypso: (flipping though video cameras) Nothing! O well no matter I still get to watch the show.

flipped to screen

Calypso: aaaahh thumper and spectre, this shall be interesting!

Older downtown LA:

Rocksalt: How di I loose this cracker ass motherfucker?

Thumper turns into alley way not seeing a single trace of spectre or his driver

Scott: (himself) stupid fuck its called invisibility! (Mic) Just cuz my cars brighter than your teeth don't mean nothin!

Rocksalt: I'm gonna stick this flame thower so far up you ass you moth...

Scott: um...

A few hundred feet behind thumper Railspike t-bones darkside, were he is sent into a roll

Scott: Your fryed chicken!

darkside lands on thumper, crushing the pink impala and its driver.
the mark Ash had scratched faded away and he drifed out of his flaming cabin and vanished into a shadow.

Ash: You will pay mortal, I'll make sure of it!

Had to finish the end quickliy.



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Reply #7 - 01/19/10 at 14:50:01
 
oh ok, I didn't know this was adaptation from a comic book. that makes a lil sense now

i'm still workin on Behind the Paint, and I might do one more Chronicle before I go into my next full on fic, so stayed tuned if you're wanting to get ideas from mine
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Reply #8 - 01/20/10 at 00:57:10
 
Darkside smolders under Thumper,Ted puts his deesiel in reverse as he talks to himself.

Ted: Stupid fucks!

Ted stops the train,and he glances down at a pictue of his son.

Ted: How could I say this? I'm in this for you!

The cabin lights up and his son apears, in a fiant vioce he calls out,"I miss you daddy."Ted start to draw tears,in front off him he sees a flicker, then another.

Ted: what is that?

Scott: (himself) shit! shit! shit! His boys spirit along with Ted's love and compasion knocked out my super natural invisibility.

Ted:bingo was his name-o!

Ted pops it in 1st then second ; a head-stone flips out of Spectre's grill.

Scott: Try this on you pathetic fuck!

a ghost missle flies out of it striking Railspike dead-center,but when Scott looks with a smirk, theres nothing, just a smoke wall which Railspike rides rright through.
Megaton crashes with a ton of force, Spectre's whole engine is smushed and pushed up onto the wall of the alley.

Ted: What the hell is that niose?

Scott's head stone is lodged into Railspikes grill, it starts making hissing nioses.

Scott: Dumb ass that a spiritual time bomb!

Ted:SHIII..

Megaton gets blown in half as demons and shadow figures spin around the explosion. The trucks half leans inward as walls of black and red flames shoot out from one side.

Scott walks into a wall.

Scott: Merry fuckin christmas!


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Re: twisted metal 50cal:fan fic
Reply #9 - 01/21/10 at 02:26:59
 
On the outskirts of California nere navada there are shelters, homeless,parked cars,and RVs for miles. A few stupid people decide to stay, amongst these are the Joneses, a nice, happy family from the suburbs of LA.

Mr.Jones: I'm ganna fuckin go out there and show the Governor a piece of my mind!

Mrs.Jones: Now honey how are we ganna get there? Its a war!

Terry: (walking in pulling his sister hiar)Ya dad How are you?

Mr.Jones I'll tell you! (grabbing the car keys)Get packed kids were goin out!

Molly: OOO Road trip!

Mrs.Jones: But...

Mr.Jones: Shut Up!; and pack you damn siut case! I'll be in the Garage.

He works in the garage all night,adding hood mounted brownings,and making home made "cherry bombs". He puts 2/4s on the doors, and ropes a ladder to the front of there "Family Wagon". As a Final touch he chians a picnic table to the back of the wagon and staples barped wire to it( Wow I'm making this tm4 reject sound cool*washes mouth out with soap*)In the morning he wakes up from the workbench and looks.

Mr.Jones: Now that what I call home security!(crazy tone)Alright folks time for a good old Jones family vactaion!

He packs the kids up and starts the car then crashes through the Garage door.

Mrs.Jones: Why the hell did you do that!

Mr.Jones: (dark voice/eyes twitch/floors gas pedal) But were not coming back!

The Jonses come out from the underpass that they live under, stoping at a flickering red light.All is qiet when an old, red coupe with orange flames, a chop top ,and the engine showing with a scoop rolls off the on ramp. It to has mounted machine guns on each driver and passanger side windows, Mr.Jones sees this and fires his prized world war II brownings at the classic car. Mrs.Jones starts screaming and Mr.Jones slaps her repeativly as he continues to lay down the lead.He stops and the coupe's horn starts blazing, so too does the car!His wife quivers in fear as she cries in the drivers seat.

A green 1984 Gmc truck on "66" Tires rolls out from a destroyed diary queen.

Mike: (out window)thanks for killin Speeding-ticket man!

Stew: Nice broad too hehe!

Mike: (looks at Stew)Hey Stew Wanna play Monster Jam?

Stew: (looks at Mike)You read my mind!  

Mr.Jones have seeing this type of exageration at his job as lawyar grabs a home made bomb and toses it over to Hammerhead. It lands in the back of there truck with them not knowing as they roll twards the wagon.

Mr.Jones: See you in hell fuckers!

But he missenterprited the length of the fuse; to late. The monster truck strikes with all four "43" wide tires ,and the force knocks the bomb out of the bed of the truck. A few seconds after Hammerhead drives back up the on-ramp, Molly is the only one alive and she crawls out of the back seat;there in front of her was a bomb with the fuse lit. Before she can even scream it goes off disintegrating her ,and flipping over the crushed wagon.

Well that was sort of a filler! Please comment!

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Reply #10 - 01/22/10 at 00:40:21
 
a few hours back,and about 20 minutes after Magatons demise,We see a purple cadilac herse with a cracked leather roof and a skull skewered to the grill with one side of the jaw snapped off driveing slowly down the alley, its dim headlights barley cutting a hole thought the pitch black air. He comes to a clearing with a burning train and a squished 67' Corvette.Just then a dirty swat truck(http://www.team-bhp.com/forum/attachments/international-automotive-scene/89597d1...)drives slowly around Shadow,as if stalking his pray.

Carl: Wiat for it,wiat for it...NOW!

Out-law turbos into Shadow's rustbucket and his tire gets pushed in as well as his grimme old bumper.Shadow starts to skid as out-law pushes him,and opens fire. Shadows window comes down, and fires a, whats seemed to be a lightingbolt,which dents and melts the hood of the Swat truck.

Mortimer: (ghostly) A cop has no biusness here!

Carl: Well my biusness isn't with you!

Carl: (sad)Sorry...it has to end.

Out-law fires several rapid-missles each blowing small holes in Shadows crumbling body,one missle hits and ignites his crusty leather roof. One final missle hits Shadows gas-tank, exploding upward. out of the burning roof,A flaming coffin flyes up and lands on the ground,shattering with a flaming corpse on the ground.Mortimers ghost drifts over

Mortimer:Nooo! I needed to stay with my body to move around,and my car is destroyed! What shall become of me now?

Mortimers spectre fades away into blackness
:At Calypso's safehouse

Calypso:There you go my friend,free at last.

Calypso picks up a locket of him as a child,next to a tall brite looking man.
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Re: twisted metal 50cal:fan fic
Reply #11 - 01/22/10 at 01:35:01
 
The Jonses?  Aren't they from one of the forbidden TM games?

And was that flame-covered coupe Firestarter?
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Reply #12 - 01/22/10 at 03:47:55
 
Quote:
The Jonses?  Aren't they from one of the forbidden TM games?

And was that flame-covered coupe Firestarter?

Yes and no. The jonses(from the forbidden game) were used, but I just wanted to make em die the stupid familylike they were ment to be!
the red coupe is my own character,he's a car collecter named Gump(died in five seconds,so who reley cares?)  Grin
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Reply #13 - 01/22/10 at 04:12:01
 
Mr.SLaM wrote on 01/22/10 at 03:47:55:
Yes and no. The jonses(from the forbidden game) were used, but I just wanted to make em die the stupid familylike they were ment to be!
the red coupe is my own character,he's a car collecter named Gump(died in five seconds,so who reley cares?)  Grin


Okay. At least the Jonses got what they deserve for contributing to crapping up the TM franchise to near death.
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Reply #14 - 01/22/10 at 05:06:32
 
Don't post it paragraph by paragraph. Type it all up in Word then post it. That will also fix grammar.
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