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Message started by Reebok on 05/15/10 at 18:59:27

Title: Twisted Metal Small Brawl - Secret Chars. Endings
Post by Reebok on 05/15/10 at 18:59:27
Well, because I haven't find any fanfic about this game, I thought that we could do together the endings for the secret characters of Twisted Metal Small Brawl (Axel has an ending that can be seen here: http://www.argonautfilms.com/Samples.htm). So, what do you think? I only made an ending for Darkside, but if you have an idea for the others drivers it will be very helpful.

Darkside:

(We can see a boy wearing a black tuxedo in front of Calypso in the backyard)
Calypso: Well, well, well... You have won the tournament, Jimmy Ash. So, what's your wish?
Ash: You know what I want, Calypso. I want you to give me back  what you stole from me. Black is only mine!
Calypso: Oh, so you just defeated all those boys only for this? Well, you're the winner, so here you have Black.
(Calypso gives him a black cat and Ash puts him in a especial container for pets)
Ash: I warn you, Calypso: If you steal again Black I'll kill you, okay?
Calypso: Okay, okay. It was just a little prank.
Ash: Yeah, whatever. Oh, by the way, I have a gift for you...
(Ash gives Calypso a wrapped box and then leaves. Calypso then opens the box and a spider jumps out from the box to his face. He then begins to run in circles scared)
Calypso: Aaaaaahhhh!!! Get it off, get it off!!!!
(Fade to black. End of the movie)
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Title: Re: Twisted Metal Small Brawl - Secret Chars. Endings
Post by magnum on 05/15/10 at 19:19:37
LOL. that was funny.
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Title: Re: Twisted Metal Small Brawl - Secret Chars. Endings
Post by Reebok on 05/15/10 at 19:27:53

Magnum wrote on 05/15/10 at 19:19:37:
LOL. that was funny.

Thank you. I think it's a good ending for Small Brawl, because like some of the other drivers they get they revenge against Calypso. And also, because is for kids the idea of Black being a cat (The same in the ending of Crimson Fury) was too good.
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Title: Re: Twisted Metal Small Brawl - Secret Chars. Endings
Post by BizarroKing on 05/15/10 at 19:31:18
Loved it. Hmm, regarding the other 3 characters, I wonder what they could be like...

Mime=A actress
Trapper=I forget
Piecemeal=A collector (could be someone sinister)
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Title: Re: Twisted Metal Small Brawl - Secret Chars. Endings
Post by Reebok on 05/15/10 at 19:36:30

BizarroKing wrote on 05/15/10 at 19:31:18:
Loved it. Hmm, regarding the other 3 characters, I wonder what they could be like...

Mime=A actress
Trapper=I forget
Piecemeal=A collector (could be someone sinister)

I think that Trapper only wants to trap the cars of all the boys. And about Mime, I thought something like that she wants to be the greatest mime of all, and then Calypso makes her mute so she can do her job better than anyone XD
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Title: Re: Twisted Metal Small Brawl - Secret Chars. Endings
Post by ThumperMan3000 on 05/16/10 at 07:31:58

BizarroKing wrote on 05/15/10 at 19:31:18:
Loved it. Hmm, regarding the other 3 characters, I wonder what they could be like...

Mime=A actress
Trapper=I forget
Piecemeal=A collector (could be someone sinister)


Mime is a copycat who mimics the other kids.

Trapper I believe is a relentless hunter.

Piecemeal is a collector and scavenger who uses the parts of the R/C Cars destroyed during Calypso's game to build his own vehicle.
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Title: Re: Twisted Metal Small Brawl - Secret Chars. Endings
Post by Reebok on 05/16/10 at 13:16:17

wrote on 05/16/10 at 07:31:58:
Mime is a copycat who mimics the other kids.

Trapper I believe is a relentless hunter.

Piecemeal is a collector and scavenger who uses the parts of the R/C Cars destroyed during Calypso's game to build his own vehicle.

Well, if Mime is a copycat I have an idea for her ending. I'm going to write it now.

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Title: Re: Twisted Metal Small Brawl - Secret Chars. Endings
Post by Reebok on 05/29/10 at 10:21:26
Sorry for the double post. I've came across some ideas for the endings of Mime and Trapper, so I wanted to post them here.

Mime:

(We see a girl dressed as a mime in front of Calypso in the backyard)
Calypso: So, what's your wish little girl?
Mime: (Making signs)
Calypso: I don't understand anything.
Mime: (Sighs and takes out a notebook and a pen. Then begins to write something and gives it to Calypso)
Calypso: So you wanna be the greatest copycat of all the world?
Mime: (Nods)
Calypso: Very well. Here is your prize (Gives Mime a hand mirror)
Mime: (She touches the mirror and suddenly she crosses the mirror)
Calypso: Well, now you are the best copycat pof all (Laughing)
(Fade to black. End of the movie)

Trapper:
(We can see a boy dressed like Crocodile Dundee with Calypso in the backyard)
Calypso: Well, how was the hunt?
Trapper: It was excelent. I managed to capture the best RC cars.
(He then takes out a bag and we can see the RC cars of Sweet Tooth, Darkside, Mime, Mr. Grimm and others)
Calypso: It's a good collection.
Trapper: Yeah, but there's still one last prey... (Grins)
(The screen goes to black, and then it shows Calypso trapped in a jail with animals on the jails at both sides. It also has a sign that says "Billy Calypso. Do not throw him food")
Calypso: Come on, get me out of here!!!
Trapper: Oh, don't worry. I have brought you some friends.
(The camera shows the people behind Trapper and we can see they are the other concursants)
Calypso: Please, no, nooooooo!!!!
(Fades to black. End of the movie)

Tell me what do you think please =3
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Title: Re: Twisted Metal Small Brawl - Secret Chars. Endings
Post by BizarroKing on 05/29/10 at 15:02:37
Nice!
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Title: Re: Twisted Metal Small Brawl - Secret Chars. Endings
Post by Reebok on 05/29/10 at 15:41:12

BizarroKing wrote on 05/29/10 at 15:02:37:
Nice!

Thank you. I still need some ideas for Piecemeal ending, but I'm sure I will make it soon.
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Title: Re: Twisted Metal Small Brawl - Secret Chars. Endings
Post by maxamillionaire on 05/30/10 at 02:23:58
Not bad, fitting for the game. Although I didn't wuite understand mime's ending, she "crosses the mirror"? whats that?
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Title: Re: Twisted Metal Small Brawl - Secret Chars. Endings
Post by DoktorStrychnine on 05/30/10 at 02:43:00

maxamillionaire wrote on 05/30/10 at 02:23:58:
Not bad, fitting for the game. Although I didn't wuite understand mime's ending, she "crosses the mirror"? whats that?

Take it literally. I'm guessing that the chick just walks into the mirror to the 'other side'.
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Post by maxamillionaire on 05/30/10 at 03:27:50
Ohhhh in that case very interesting. I like it
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Title: Re: Twisted Metal Small Brawl - Secret Chars. Endings
Post by Reebok on 05/30/10 at 10:48:55

DoktorStrychnine wrote on 05/30/10 at 02:43:00:
Take it literally. I'm guessing that the chick just walks into the mirror to the 'other side'.

Yeah, that's the idea. Sorry to make it hard to understand  :-[
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Title: Re: Twisted Metal Small Brawl - Secret Chars. Endings
Post by DoktorStrychnine on 05/31/10 at 07:06:56
[quote author=Reebok link=1273946367/0#13 date=1275212935]
Yeah, that's the idea. Sorry to make it hard to understand  :-[/quote]
Nah, it's chill. It's just hard to understand for 'some' people.
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Title: Re: Twisted Metal Small Brawl - Secret Chars. Endings
Post by Reebok on 05/31/10 at 13:00:44
Well, I still need to make Piecemal ending. Anyone has an idea that could be useful?
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Title: Re: Twisted Metal Small Brawl - Secret Chars. Endings
Post by BizarroKing on 05/31/10 at 15:03:22

Reebok wrote on 05/31/10 at 13:00:44:
Well, I still need to make Piecemal ending. Anyone has an idea that could be useful?


Piecemeal built his car from the defeated contestants, so basically he's a collector if that helps.
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Title: Re: Twisted Metal Small Brawl - Secret Chars. Endings
Post by Reebok on 05/31/10 at 19:17:09

BizarroKing wrote on 05/31/10 at 15:03:22:
Piecemeal built his car from the defeated contestants, so basically he's a collector if that helps.

Yeah, this will be useful. I'll se what can I make for his ending.
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Title: Re: Twisted Metal Small Brawl - Secret Chars. Endings
Post by zarien85 on 06/09/10 at 01:23:52
nice job whish they were playable charters
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Title: Re: Twisted Metal Small Brawl - Secret Chars. Endings
Post by Reebok on 06/09/10 at 11:29:09

zarien85 wrote on 06/09/10 at 01:23:52:
nice job whish they were playable charters

They are playable characters, but you need to unlock them first. I decided to write them endings because the secret characters doesn't have.
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Title: Re: Twisted Metal Small Brawl - Secret Chars. Endings
Post by Reebok on 07/22/10 at 19:54:20
Sorry for the double post, but I still had to post Piecemeal's ending, so I hope you like the twist ending.

Piecemeal:

(We can see a boy with a Frankenstein monster costume with Calypso in the backyard)
Calypso: Did you have fun in my tournament, Piecemeal?
Piecemeal: I loved it. Now I have the best RC car of all made with the best parts of the other concursants.
(He shows Calypso his RC car)
Calypso: Man, is incredible!
Piecemeal: By the way, I have won the tournament, so I still have my wish, right?
Calypso: Yeah, you can have it. What’s your wish?
Piecemeal: I want to be with Twisted Metal! And I want it forever!
Calypso: Your wish is granted.
(The camera goes black and then we can see Piecemeal in a junkyard with a lot of broken cars)
Piecemeal: What the hell is this? This wasn’t my wish!
(Piecemeal finds a paper at his feet and read it)
Piecemeal: “You wished to be in Twisted Metal forever, so now you have a lot of twisted metal. And you will always be here. Screw you, Calypso”. (He then watches the sky and the camera zooms out as he screams, showing us that the entire planet is like a junkyard) Calypso! What have you done? What have you done?
(Fade to black. End of the movie)
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Title: Re: Twisted Metal Small Brawl - Secret Chars. Endings
Post by SweetToothsAssociate on 07/29/10 at 16:03:47
cool but u couldn't say what the hell or screw you in it bc tmsb is supposed to be a kids tm
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Title: Re: Twisted Metal Small Brawl - Secret Chars. Endings
Post by Reebok on 07/29/10 at 19:19:42

Ripzsaur wrote on 07/29/10 at 16:03:47:
cool but u couldn't say what the hell or screw you in it bc tmsb is supposed to be a kids tm

I thought it would be funny to make a little reference to Black's ending in Twisted Metal: Black =P
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Post by SweetToothsAssociate on 07/29/10 at 19:31:11
oh yeah it was funny. they were all funny. but i was just saying that would be a problem for the movie
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Title: Re: Twisted Metal Small Brawl - Secret Chars. Endings
Post by Reebok on 07/29/10 at 19:53:18

Ripzsaur wrote on 07/29/10 at 19:31:11:
oh yeah it was funny. they were all funny. but i was just saying that would be a problem for the movie

And if I change "Screw you" with a "Have fun"?
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Title: Re: Twisted Metal Small Brawl - Secret Chars. Endings
Post by krimson_dropz on 10/13/10 at 04:39:40
nice, seemed a little adult for small brawl but then again i played when i was little
maby for the trapper char (the one with the monkey special) he could capture calypso in a cage and sell tikets lol
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Title: Re: Twisted Metal Small Brawl - Secret Chars. Endings
Post by Clowntroversey on 03/02/11 at 19:25:50
Absolutely LOVE the Darkside ending!!!! The idea of black being Jimmy Ash's stolen cat is sublime, Couldn't have done better writing that. I'm surprised this didn't actually didn't make the cut to become his end sequence.
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Title: Re: Twisted Metal Small Brawl - Secret Chars. Endings
Post by Reebok on 03/14/11 at 21:32:49

krimson_dropz wrote on 10/13/10 at 04:39:40:
nice, seemed a little adult for small brawl but then again i played when i was little
maby for the trapper char (the one with the monkey special) he could capture calypso in a cage and sell tikets lol

I thought about that, but the idea of the others racers getting revenge against him was better (In my opinion).


Shovelhead wrote on 03/02/11 at 19:25:50:
Absolutely LOVE the Darkside ending!!!! The idea of black being Jimmy Ash's stolen cat is sublime, Couldn't have done better writing that. I'm surprised this didn't actually didn't make the cut to become his end sequence.

Yeah, me too. It would have been an awesome ending.
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