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Message started by ThumperMan3000 on 03/29/10 at 08:50:33

Title: Intruder - Twisted Metal Black 2
Post by ThumperMan3000 on 03/29/10 at 08:50:33
Intruder

Driver: Ratman

Man by day, rat by night, Ratman devotes himself to getting rid of the crime that plauges Harbor City.  His deeds are against the law, as he is a vigilante, and the cops are after him, some have failed to capture him, and few law enforcement officials have come very close to arresting him, only to have it slip away from some unfortunate event.

In reality, Ratman's method of crime fighting is killing the criminals.  Because of this, he is seen as a murderer.  One night, he got word on the police radio that the FBI's most wanted criminal has come to town.  Ratman decides that if he offs him, he would finaly get the respect. But fate has other plans.

Vehicle: Intruder

This vehicle is Ratman's escape vehicle and means of transportation.  However, on Rat Man's arrest, the cops impounded Intruder to avoid a possible jailbreak.  However, Calypso managed to steal it back.  Its Special Weapon causes a pair of sawblades to emrge from the front of the car.  Raming any vehicle while the sawblades are exposed can do nasty damage.

PROLOGUE

Rat Man: Man by day, rat by night.  Saving others, from their fight.

(Camera pans to Blackfield Asylum sign. Camera then pans away as Rat Man speaks.)

Rat Man:  All I wanted to do is to make the streets safe, but the cops say otherwise.

(Camera slams through security fence and to the run-down asylum.)

Rat Man: They said I commited murder and locked me up here as just another psychopath.

(Camera enters the building and goes down a hallway, passing a guard reading a newspaper to a door marked "C-1 Solitary".  It enters to see a man siting near a wall. He is wearing a mask with two Mickey Mouse-like ears on top.  He wears a costume with a black bodysuit, yellow shorts, and red shoes.  He has red gloves and a red cape, which is torn apart.)

Rat Man:  Those pigs fail to keep the city safe, and anyone who complains seems to be either arrested or beaten to death.

(Camera pans to Rat Man's face.  It is white skinned with a black mustache on it.  The top of the mask over his eyes has a tear on it.)

Rat Man:   But one day, he showed up.

(Flashes of Calypso are seen.)

Rat Man:  I knew Calypso by reputation. Hell, all the cops stationed here in the asylum are scared as shit everytime they talked about him.  He wanted me to enter his contest.  I told him to beat it before I called for security, but he made me an offer.

(Calypso shows Rat Man a newspaper clipping.)

Rat Man:  He said that if I won, I could start making a difference in this city.  I will be seen as a true hero.

(Rat Man is seen shaking Calypso's hand.)

Rat Man: I know a real super hero would never make a deal with the villains, but I'll make an exception here.

(Camera fades to outside the asylum as Intruder is seen speeding away as Rat Man speaks.)

Rat Man:  Besides, the streets won't rid itself of the scumbags.

MIDDLE:

(Minion explodes. As pieces of the military tank explode, a big piece flies up and hits Intruder, knocking Rat Man out.)

Rat Man:  I was knocked out.  Just like a hero without super powers after geting smacked from behind by a gang member.

(Camera shows Rat Man slumped behind the wheel as he speaks.)

Rat Man: As I slept, I had remembered why I became a superhero.

(Camera shows a teenage boy seeing his parents murdered by masked robbers.)

Rat Man:  At a young age, my parents were gunned down by masked hoodlums who were trying to steal their valuables.  You know, money, jewels.

(Camera pans to the boy beating them up.)

Rat Man:  Even though it was dangerous, I took them on and subdued them for the police.  However, the ending would go from bad to worse.

(Camera pans to a newspaper front page of the thugs, now unmasked, walking free. The headlines say "ROBBERS-SLASH-MURDERERS SENT FREE DUE TO LACK OF EVIDENCE!)

Rat Man: I was pissed!  They couldn't find evidence of the crime, so the cops sent them free!

(Camera pans to the boy, now an adult, puting on a mask.)

Rat Man:  One night, I would make them pay. I won't wait for the cops this time.

(Rat Man is seen using a Ripper to kill the two thugs just as they fled from a bank they robbed.)

Rat Man: Indeed, I killed them.  I didn't want to risk them getting arrested and having them relased on the streets days later because of an excuse like lack of evidence or a mistrial.

(Camera shows Rat Man tailing an ice cream truck.)

Rat Man:  One night, I heard on my police radio that the FBI's number one criminal was in Harbor City.  Sweet Tooth was in my home turf, and I thought if I were to kill him, I would recieve my recognition.

(Rat Man sees Needles Kane killing a person as Rat Man atacked him.)

Rat Man:  And I was wining there, until a guy in a police decided to try to take my life.

(Camera pans to a cop shooting Rat Man in the back.)

Rat Man: As I went under, I heard the cop speak, as if he wasn't a cop at all.

Officer:  Sorry, you dirty rat, but I won't allow you to interfere with my business any longer.

(Camera shows the cop cuffing Rat Man as Sweet Tooth speeds away.)

Rat Man: After that, the thug had me cuffed and he pinned me for the clown's latest murder as he got away.

(Camera shows Rat Man waking up.)

Rat Man:  But now, I will serve justice to the scumbag who did this and framed me.

(Camera shows Intruder spewding out of the arena.)

EPILOGUE:

(Dark Tooth explodes, the ice cream truck warhead detonating.  Intruder speeds away as a purple mushroom cloud envelopes the area.)

Rat Man:  I have won the contest.

(Camera shows Rat Man seeing Calypso, who sits on his throne of car parts.)

Rat Man  I went to Calypso and demanded my prize. I want justice to be served.

(Camera pans to a cop chained to the floor.)

Rat Man:  It was him, the cop who shot and cuffed me.  I demanded to know why, and he told me.

Cop: A cop?  I may be, but not the good kind.  Those two thugs you murdered worked for me.

(Camera pans to the cop showing the two thugs the parents.)

Cop: I wanted money and power, but I also didn't want my so-called fellow officers to figure it out.  So I hired those criminals to rob your parents.

(Camera pans to the cop using the stolen money to the warden.)

Cop:  And when you got them arressted, I used my position and whatever they stole to bribe the warden to destroy any evidence and let them free.)

(Camera pans to the cop still chained.)

Cop:  I had you charged with the clown freak's murder so you would never trace the criminals I hired. That way, my plan will continue without any interference.

(Cop was laughing as a hidden camera stopped. Calypso gives Rat Man a razor blade bent into a boomerang.)

Rat Man:  Thanks for the confession, creep.

Cop:  Wha..?

(Rat Man is seen throwing the razor-rang at the corrupt cop.  Camera cuts to black as the blade reaches the cop's head.)

Rat Man:  It took the cops weeks to find the cop and his loose head, and what they founnd finally opened their minds.

(Camera pans to a newspaper front page with Rat Man's picture.  The headline says "RAT MAN DECLARED HARBOR CITY'S OFFICIAL SUPERHERO AFTER BEING CLEARED OF FALSE CHARGES!)

Rat Man: At the city hall, the chief of police apologized and gave me a medal, saying they should've known about the cop.

(Camera shows Rat Man at city hall waving to the people who cheered for him.)

Rat Man:  Calypso did it. He helped me find justice and...

Security Guard:  Look out.  He's got a gun!

(Rat Man turns to see Calypso, who has slaughtered a few guards and aims a pistol at Rat Man.  He fires a bullet into Rat Man's head.  he is seen falling down.)

Calypso:  Yes, just like that fool Agent Stone.

(Calypso manages to escape capture as the final shot shows Rat Man dead, his head bleeding, and the blood becoming a pool as the crowd's panic is heard.  Logo is shown.  Then the credits roll as "Back In Black" by AC/DC is played as scenes from all charcter movies play.)

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Title: Re: Intruder - Twisted Metal Black 2
Post by DoktorStrychnine on 03/29/10 at 08:58:17
Interesting concept! Rat man. How does that work? A rat-based superhero? Haven't I seen this on Dexter's Laboratory?
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Title: Re: Intruder - Twisted Metal Black 2
Post by ThumperMan3000 on 03/29/10 at 09:53:53

DoktorStrychnine wrote on 03/29/10 at 08:58:17:
Interesting concept! Rat man. How does that work? A rat-based superhero? Haven't I seen this on Dexter's Laboratory?


The Rat Man is actually a character from Rouge Trip: Vacation 2012 (where I got Ozone, Bloodhound, and Vermin from.)
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Title: Re: Intruder - Twisted Metal Black 2
Post by The_Dead on 03/29/10 at 15:50:17
Good stuff man, glad your doing these characters. Yeah, Doktor, Rogue Trip is the real Twisted Metal 3.
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Title: Re: Intruder - Twisted Metal Black 2
Post by ThumperMan3000 on 03/30/10 at 00:53:57

The_Dead wrote on 03/29/10 at 15:50:17:
Good stuff man, glad your doing these characters. Yeah, Doktor, Rogue Trip is the real Twisted Metal 3.


Strange, I thought Twisted Metal:  Head-On was the real Twisted Metal 3.
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Title: Re: Intruder - Twisted Metal Black 2
Post by The Dizaster Child on 03/30/10 at 01:23:03
kinda reminds me of The Tick, but not as funny.. which I guess is the point LOL
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Title: Re: Intruder - Twisted Metal Black 2
Post by ThumperMan3000 on 03/30/10 at 04:18:53

The Dizaster Child wrote on 03/30/10 at 01:23:03:
kinda reminds me of The Tick, but not as funny.. which I guess is the point LOL


The Black universe isn't supposed to be funny. It's dark and demented with death.
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Title: Re: Intruder - Twisted Metal Black 2
Post by DoktorStrychnine on 03/30/10 at 04:35:23

wrote on 03/30/10 at 00:53:57:
Strange, I thought Twisted Metal:  Head-On was the real Twisted Metal 3.

Touche.

I thought the Black universe was pretty funny. But then again, I was drunk.

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Title: Re: Intruder - Twisted Metal Black 2
Post by The_Dead on 03/31/10 at 18:01:22

wrote on 03/30/10 at 00:53:57:
Strange, I thought Twisted Metal:  Head-On was the real Twisted Metal 3.

I just said that because Rogue Trip was madeby the same developers as TM 2. Either way Rogue Trip is a good game, as is Head-On, so they are both win in my books.
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Title: Re: Intruder - Twisted Metal Black 2
Post by ThumperMan3000 on 04/01/10 at 05:36:27

The_Dead wrote on 03/31/10 at 18:01:22:
I just said that because Rogue Trip was madeby the same developers as TM 2. Either way Rogue Trip is a good game, as is Head-On, so they are both win in my books.


Rouge Trip, IMO, is more of a spiritual successor.  It was, like you said, made the same company, and had the same engine as TM2.  I guess SingleTrac managed to secure the rights to said engine.
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Title: Re: Intruder - Twisted Metal Black 2
Post by Kantz13 on 04/01/10 at 15:11:34
what is rogue trip? Ive seen alot of people talk about it but I have yet to play it
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Title: Re: Intruder - Twisted Metal Black 2
Post by The_Dead on 04/01/10 at 15:37:40
Oh, and Critical Depth is the real TM 4, haha, just kidding. Anyone remember that one?
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Title: Re: Intruder - Twisted Metal Black 2
Post by Chaos King on 04/24/10 at 15:52:42
The way he sounded was more like a comedy character, so it was strange to picture him in the world of TM: Black, but still nice job.
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Title: Re: Intruder - Twisted Metal Black 2
Post by ThumperMan3000 on 04/24/10 at 21:15:21

BizarroKing wrote on 04/24/10 at 15:52:42:
The way he sounded was more like a comedy character, so it was strange to picture him in the world of TM: Black, but still nice job.


Yeah, it was hard here. I never played Rouge Trip, but saw the bio.
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